Here comes the stalker 😈 Even before the update 😉
Unres... 😉
Sam - Mau ... adorable... 🤗 Loved the way she observed Sam and his frustration and disappointment when his "Ms Aspirin" threw his jacket back at him and snubbed him. She guessed it right that he was attracted to her.
"Something told her that things will change and that had led her to speak her heart to Sam about his attraction. " - Yes, things changed, but not the way they all wished them to be
"He hadn't denied it nor had had he accepted it." - he simply changed the topic * (chk the * comment below)
"No wonder she had fallen for him as he breezed his way in her life just like his name" - This line reminded me of a dialogue from the movie Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam "Sameer... Hawa ka jhonka" 😉
So Sam - Mau got those private moments that they were longing for.
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The blast ... was beautifully written by you 👏👏👏
I was visualizing expressions of both Arjun and Shama - when they were hurling accusations at each other.
And finally the blast ended with their common statement but obviously different meanings for both "Just because of Sam"
So this part answers all my questions that I asked u in PM. Thanks 😉
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Bumblebee and OP - just like the last part, this was again a treat to read... 😊
The pug, the "Mad" comment, pushing the door, chopping the onions, having dinner together... everything was so warm... 🤗
Ayesha's POV was rather more of analysis of situation.
And I just loved the part when Ayesha tells Arjun that he loves Mau and Arjun accepts it without any hesitation.
"He knew what she was going through, she needed a distraction but how could he let her know that distractions doesn't work every time. Acceptance does!"
So true, our denial and constants attempts and efforts to deny something always end up draining us and make us vulnerable and weak. One acceptance, and we feel lighter and get our strength back.
And then the most touching part:
"Ayesha, Sometimes it's all it takes is just a moment to change everything around us. It's not what you wanted in life ever but yes after that moment that's the only thing which could make you happy .Life changes in seconds or maybe just in a dance " - The dance ** (chk the ** comment below)
So Bumblebee couldn't hide her secret from OP. Nothing escapes his eyes 😉
And this was the moment when she didn't need someone who would question her feelings or tell her to "move on", "forget him" kind of advices. The state of mind she was in, all she needed was someone who would just hold her in arms and assure her that there is nothing wrong with her or her feelings. To assure her that he is there for her.
And that is what Arjun did for her. Who else would understand her better. He was going through the same.
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So both Sam and Arjun were in guilt. *** (See my *** comment below)
Sam's flashback when he saw Arjun fighting for Mau and Mau's reaction to him was a high point of this update. I could actually visualize Arjun's rage, Mau's reaction and Sam's confusion 😊
Now a new line crossed one angle of this triangle ... and it became a quadrangle now 😳
Its complicated 😉, but as I mentioned in my first comment, the beauty of this concept and story lies in these complications.
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Now my *, **, *** comments ... actually all of them are related 😊
The Dance** - It changed the equations between Beast and Ms Aspirin or should I say, it made the equations between them more obvious to both of them... I'm really eager to know what exactly happened in that dance from Sam and Ayesha's POV ? 😳
Guilt*** - to be more precise, Sam's guilt... was he just guilty for the reason that was mentioned in that part that, he was in love with the girl, whom Arjun also loved ? Or was he guilty of being attracted to Ayesha, while he was committed to his Mau?
Topic changed* - So Sam has neither denied, nor accepted about his attraction towards Ms Aspirin. But Mau caught him 😉. Was he guilty of cheating on Mau?
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Along with this... i'm really really really curious to know what happened in Arjun's birthday party 2 years back? How did Mau reach there? What was Sam-Mau's first interaction like?
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On the whole... it was a beautiful update 😊
Waiting for more 😊
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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