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Posted: 12 years ago
Here comes the stalker 😈
Even before the update 😉
Unres... 😉
Sam - Mau ... adorable... 🤗 Loved the way she observed Sam and his frustration and disappointment when his "Ms Aspirin" threw his jacket back at him and snubbed him. She guessed it right that he was attracted to her.
"Something told her that things will change and that had led her to speak her heart to Sam about his attraction. " - Yes, things changed, but not the way they all wished them to be
"He hadn't denied it nor had had he accepted it." - he simply changed the topic * (chk the * comment below)
"No wonder she had fallen for him as he breezed his way in her life just like his name" - This line reminded me of a dialogue from the movie Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam "Sameer... Hawa ka jhonka" 😉
So Sam - Mau got those private moments that they were longing for.
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The blast ... was beautifully written by you 👏👏👏
I was visualizing expressions of both Arjun and Shama - when they were hurling accusations at each other.
And finally the blast ended with their common statement but obviously different meanings for both "Just because of Sam"
So this part answers all my questions that I asked u in PM. Thanks 😉
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Bumblebee and OP - just like the last part, this was again a treat to read... 😊
The pug, the "Mad" comment, pushing the door, chopping the onions, having dinner together... everything was so warm... 🤗
Ayesha's POV was rather more of analysis of situation.
And I just loved the part when Ayesha tells Arjun that he loves Mau and Arjun accepts it without any hesitation.
"He knew what she was going through, she needed a distraction but how could he let her know that distractions doesn't work every time. Acceptance does!"
So true, our denial and constants attempts and efforts to deny something always end up draining us and make us vulnerable and weak. One acceptance, and we feel lighter and get our strength back.
And then the most touching part:

"Ayesha, Sometimes it's all it takes is just a moment to change everything around us. It's not what you wanted in life ever but yes after that moment that's the only thing which could make you happy .Life changes in seconds or maybe just in a dance " - The dance ** (chk the ** comment below)

So Bumblebee couldn't hide her secret from OP. Nothing escapes his eyes 😉
And this was the moment when she didn't need someone who would question her feelings or tell her to "move on", "forget him" kind of advices. The state of mind she was in, all she needed was someone who would just hold her in arms and assure her that there is nothing wrong with her or her feelings. To assure her that he is there for her.
And that is what Arjun did for her. Who else would understand her better. He was going through the same.
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So both Sam and Arjun were in guilt. *** (See my *** comment below)
Sam's flashback when he saw Arjun fighting for Mau and Mau's reaction to him was a high point of this update. I could actually visualize Arjun's rage, Mau's reaction and Sam's confusion 😊
Now a new line crossed one angle of this triangle ... and it became a quadrangle now 😳
Its complicated 😉, but as I mentioned in my first comment, the beauty of this concept and story lies in these complications.
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Now my *, **, *** comments ... actually all of them are related 😊
The Dance** - It changed the equations between Beast and Ms Aspirin or should I say, it made the equations between them more obvious to both of them... I'm really eager to know what exactly happened in that dance from Sam and Ayesha's POV ? 😳
Guilt*** - to be more precise, Sam's guilt... was he just guilty for the reason that was mentioned in that part that, he was in love with the girl, whom Arjun also loved ? Or was he guilty of being attracted to Ayesha, while he was committed to his Mau?
Topic changed* - So Sam has neither denied, nor accepted about his attraction towards Ms Aspirin. But Mau caught him 😉. Was he guilty of cheating on Mau?
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Along with this... i'm really really really curious to know what happened in Arjun's birthday party 2 years back? How did Mau reach there? What was Sam-Mau's first interaction like?
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On the whole... it was a beautiful update 😊
Waiting for more 😊
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Here comes the stalker 😈

Even before the update 😉
Res... 😉

Hopefully its worth it 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a tangled web of relationships
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

Hopefully its worth it 😆😆

well... my longgg comment says it all... u need to have a lot of patience to go through it 😉
Unresed my comment 😊 just below the update.
One more thing... u really made me go mad ... when I saw ur reserved comments here for this update... and saw u stalking Avantika on TLIR 😆😆😆
Here I was waiting for ur update... (not that I was not waiting for TLIR)... but then u were delaying this and I felt like pulling my hair (no I didn't ) 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..😃
Edited by Ketakee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
continue soon.
and thanx for updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear!

An intense complicated entangle of relationships!
Beautifully written and every POV was justified but Mau?? why was she in confusion?
Did a part of her love Sam also? Its just her POV that makes me feel that she is the devil in the triangle and now the rectangle...

Whats OP?

I loved Arjun and Aisha's relationship...a simple friendship or is it more but whatever, its beautiful!
Her judging his love for Shama and he telling her that she put fire in his life was so poignant!

Sam's guilt...I can understand..he loves Mau but may be he is slowly recognizing that it wasnt love when he feels attracted to Aisha

Is he rethinking because he is attracted to Aisha or is he really willing to leave the decision to Mau?

cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
In one word the whole update was very well written...
superb awesome update...
waiting to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Devi Sia!!!🤗

Thank u so much!!❤️

What a wonderful update...
Normally, mein love triangles se pak gayi thi...🥱

But I love this one... (Cuz mujhe phele se pata hai kon kiski saath hoga)😉😆

Bas... "KESE"... thats the question.

So sab ko sabka raaz pata hai, khud ko chod ke😆...

Sam know Mau loves Arjun and Arjun loves Mau..
But doesnt know that he is falling for Aisha and that she has a special place in his heart.
And also that Aisha might also love him.

Aisha knows that Arjun loves Mau and Mau is also a bit different with Arjun..
But no one is reacting because of Sam,
And also that Sam might have some feeling for her.

Arjun and Mau ki baat toh mein nahi karti... Sab jaan kar bhi najaan ban rahe hai.

bas NONE is taking the initiative...

But... Unki iss problem ko MEIN solve karungi nah,.

Kese???

"ROZ ROZ UPDATE KA DEMAND KARKE!!!!"😃

I know I m so good..😛

This update was very nice... specially I loved some dialogues..

Bas ek hi problem thi... "Kitna chota update?'😒🤣

Chalo... No more wasting of time...

Yeh waala update karo...

FAATA-FAAT!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm upadte sia...

so Sam-Mau...nd BumbleBee-OP...are there to comfort each other$..

bt th 4 of thm dnt knw th complications they r complicating even more...

i loved it..

i guess this is th turning point in all their lives

continue soon

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