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@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

@Mithu- Chota Update

Wahin aakar pitungi tujhe😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sips_crazy
@Mithu- Chota Update

Wahin aakar pitungi tujhe😛

Mera kaam aasan kar dogi aap!!😃

Yaha hi rakhke aapse update likhwaungi...😉

Do din mein pura FF khatam karwa dungi...😎🤣

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awesome update dear!

An intense complicated entangle of relationships!

Beautifully written and every POV was justified but Mau?? why was she in confusion?

Did a part of her love Sam also? Its just her POV that makes me feel that she is the devil in the triangle and now the rectangle...

Whats OP?

I loved Arjun and Aisha's relationship...a simple friendship or is it more but whatever, its beautiful!

Her judging his love for Shama and he telling her that she put fire in his life was so poignant!

Sam's guilt...I can understand..he loves Mau but may be he is slowly recognizing that it wasnt love when he feels attracted to Aisha

Is he rethinking because he is attracted to Aisha or is he really willing to leave the decision to Mau?

cont soon!

@Vidzi- OP stands from Optimus Prime for the transformers..Bumble bee bhi wahin se liya hai

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago

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princess2507

@princess2507

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Awsome update!!!
Relations r always complicated!!
Luved op and bumblbee!!
Want to read more and more now!!
Cont sonn!!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Awww its too cute.../

Love each & every wrd...

👏👏👏👏

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Phew.. Finally.. Here we go! 😉 😳

I am soo sorry for not having read this one before..

This has to be one of the best works on AF, I've ever read Sambha.. And I really mean it.. 👏

You said writing grey shades was your forte and my dear, it really is!

Arjun, Ayesha, Sameer and Maushami.. Each one of them is right and wrong, black and white, selfish and yet innocent..

What I loved absolutely about this one is the relationship dynamics shared between the characters..

The Beast and his Aspirin.. Attraction, fights, (a dance) or maybe just a slow realisation that you've actually found the right one does the trick.. Though we dont yet know what led to them tying the knot, I am soo glad to witness a new side to Rayesha.. Beautiful is the only word! 😃

Sameer-Mau/ Arjun-Shama : These prem kahanis are really mushkil but nonetheless very brilliantly sketched..

Sameer was her solace and yet she had to drift away from him..
Arjun was the one who scorched her and yet she couldn't stay away from him, could she?

But Arjun and her were in a relationship before she went missing did she?

And OP-Bumblebee were my favorites!! ❤️ Too cute..

Phew.. Too many questions, doubts and confusions which will only be answered as you update..

So, please Sambha.. Jaldi jaldi update-wa karo and get rid of that writer's block..

Waiting to read more.. And thank you for all those PM's.. 🤗

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Wow!!!A long update.Aaj long update day hai shayad.😉Thank you 🤗

Well to start with the two ladies,SMART😎 will be the appropriate word for both of them to understand the two men beside them

Mau's question to Sam:

"You know, you are attracted to her, Arjun' s Bumble Bee"(Ye maara chauka)👍🏼

Aisha's to Arjun:

"You love her don't you(Ye gaya 6)👍🏼

Starting with Sam-Mau

An imperative conversation between the two but they made it sound funny.

She hit his correct nerve about him being attracted towards Aisha & his neither denial nor acceptance about it.

About Sam being in guilt for him being in love with the girl whom his best friend is in love with or him being attracted towards Aisha in spite of being in relationship is not very much clear for now.About Mau,she is still a mystery.Will have to wait to get things to get explored.

Arjun-Mau

Unke conversation mein Pissed off hi sunai de raha tha.😆😆😆

"Relationships dont always make sense. Especially from the outside"--Sarah Dessen

This perfectly describes their relation.

There is one loose end about Mau meeting Arjun at Sameer's birthday.Waiting for that as well.

Arjun-Aisha:

I so very much love these two here.🤗Its theirs relation that is free from all the complications i feel.Manna padega Aisha Arjun se onions katwaya.😆😆

Both of them had hit each other's correct nerve.

Sometimes it's all it takes is just a moment to change everything around us.

Life changes in seconds or maybe just in a dance.

Not only the beast but Miss Aspirin too was affected by their closeness.😃

"Sleep Ayesha, I am there "😛

Aisha's state of mind was superbly handled by Arjun. Ofcourse who can understand hers state of mind better than Arjun as he too is going through the same state.

An update with a complicated entangled relationship & It was Aisha's entry ie. the 4th angle of this complex love story who broke this entangled relationship I feel.

Oh yes how can i forget Comedy Circus among the foursome was super super hilarious.😆😆😆

Describing Arjun's present state in one line

"You're the fire burning inside of me." ? Kelvin O'Ralph

Well again the same question of What made Sameer move on so easily & get married to Aisha?

Waiting for the next update

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Awesumwa update di
lov it
so mau loves bro n bro loves mau ;)
grt o o sam bro :p
thanx fr d pm di

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

hi sia di...🤗... awesome update👏👏... well i my brain was oscilating between mau arjun n sam...beleive me each time i read it i'm like who i'm ?😆 super confused... mau shama ...is terribely strained btw sam n arjun...unknowingly... sam loves mau ...but does mau too?...or it was jsut her frnship for sam? and then the way aisha judged mau for arjun loved it...aisha and arjun's bonding awe...😃... so asprin and sam relation 😆...bumble bee n arjun ko milwa do na plz😉... u said right ! its time for mau to be selfish for herself ...and it will solve everything...! update soon🤗