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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi! i m new here

I 'm writing a new twist

if arjun had 2 small children twins one Aryan and second Rajni

please let me know shall I start it?

part 1,2,3 updated

Edited by gfjhsdu - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Welcum dear n go ahead..!!

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

welcome to arjun forum

please do continue

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

welcome to the forum dr...
interesting concept...
continue soon...

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi i'm back with my story

i will refer

arjun as RJ

sameer as SAM

aryan as ryn [age 5]

rajni as rjni [ age 5]

and others as usual i will have ria in the story

a new twist in Arjun

rj's phone rang

rj:hello..ji ma me abhi aata hu

rj to sam :sam!i ll've to leave now itself

sam :what happened?is eveything ok?

rj -i do no.

at his mother's place

rj -ma sab thik to he na?

ma-nahi.kuch thik nahi he.bacche jab se ghar aaye he kuch bol nahi rahe chup-chap baithe he

rj going to their room

[they dont know that roshni has died]

ryn&rjni -papa-aap hame garden me ghumne kab le jaoge???

rj-beta -chalo hum log aaj ghumne chalte he.

taking them to car

ryn-papa!hum sam mama ko bhi saath le chale?

rj-thik he chalo

it was weekend & there was no case

at ETF office..

rj going in.. -sam aaj bacche hum dono ke saath garden jaana chahte he.

chotu,sri&ria dont know dat rj has children.they r shocked.

sam-ok waise bhi aaj koi case nhi hei chalo hum bhi baccho ke bahaane ghum lenge.

ria-sir if u dont mind can we meet ur kids??

rj -ok come

all 5 go to car

ryn&rjni-papa kitni der kar di ?

rj-baccho dekho tumse milne koun aaya hai?...ye tumhare sam mama,ye chotu unkl,ye sri unkl aur ye ria aunty.

sam-hello bachoo..kaise ho?

kids-hum thik he.papa hume bhuk laagi he kuch khana he.

all go to rj's house and eat.

kids-papa!! ab hume khelna hai!

chotu-bacho main tum logo ke saath khelta hu

sri&ria -main bhi.

kids-mama aap nahi khlenge?

sam-thik hai me bhi khelt hu

they all play rj also plays.

I want replies whether to continu or not

next part will be comedy & full of masti.

Edited by gfjhsdu - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gud start dear
do cont...
kids was nyc !!

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

great start :) loved it

the kids are so adorable

continue soon

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely start...!!

continue soon...!!! kids were cute...!!

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

welcome dear in Arjun forms.
Your concept is really very nice, it based on Ariya,
Ariya is my favourite couple,
Kids are amazing , nice start.
Continue soon

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

nice story
u shuld cont sooon

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