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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
What a q'stn yaar???????
Pls continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Unique concept and Nice start.
Loved the story nd concept.
The kids r adorable...
Please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
sorry for posting late.
th story is continud now .
some new characters added
Amisha-sam&rj 's old friend.

part-2

a new twist in arjunin evening rj takes kids& all to park.
in park,

kids playing.chotu,sri&ria playing with them.
sam&rj watching them&smiling.
amisha comes with her husband dev.
sam&rj-amisha??

amisha-hi sam,rj.tum kaise ho?kitne saalo baad mil ahe hai hum.hugs rj & then sam.

rj-tum nahi sudhrogi.bilkul bachpana nahi gaya.

sam-waise amisha,ye tumhare saath kaun he?

amisha-y,he is my husband-dev.y mujhe america me mile.

rj-amisha,tum america se kub loti?congrats 4 ur marriage.

amisha-me abhi kuch din phle aayi.&thank u.waise tum dono kaise ho?ghar par sab thik?rj,roshni kaisi he?

rj-[tears in his eys]😭wo mujhe chod kar chali gayi hamesh ke liye.

amisha-hamesha ke liye?😕mujhe samjh nahi aaya.
😲

sam-roshni ab is duniya me nahi he.😭

amisha-😲😭sory,rj,mujhe bilkul pata nahi tha.ye sab kab hua ,kaise?

sam&rj became silent.after some time

rj-rathod,ab hme ghar jana chahiye.

sam-ha raute kaafi der ho chuki he.

amisha-rathod,raute ?ye kya?sam ka rathod aur rj ka raute ?😲tum dono chup mat raho bolo ye kya he bataao.?apni bff ko nai bataoge?

sam-amisha,hume der ho rahi he .

amisha-der?sam,tumhe kab se der hone lagi ?tum to mere saath rehne ke liye hamesha tayar rehte the?

chotu [to rj] sir,bacho ko bhuk lagi he,unhe khana he.

amisha-bache??rj,ye kiske bacho ki baat kar rah he?

rj-mere bache amisha.[to chotu]chotu,tum bacho aur sri,ria ko lekar car ke paas jao,hum aate he.

chotu goes.

amisha-rj,mujhe apne bacho se nahi milvaoge?

sam-amisha,chalo me tumhe milvata hu rajni aur aryan se.

amisha&sam going to kids.rj stops amisha.

rj-dur raho meri life se.plz dont interfere in my life.

sam-ye tum kya kar rahe ho raute?tum apni best frnd se ye keh rahe ho?hosh me to ho?

rj going to car.sam takes amisha &dev with him to car.

rj-bacho car me baitho.sri,ria chalo saath me.

ria-sir,rathod sir aur chotu hamare saath nahi aayenge?
rj-wo thodi der me aa jayenge.

ria-sir ,wo park me aapke saath kaun thi?

rj-apne kaam se kaam rakho.dont interfere in my life.

ria[slowly]-sri,aaj kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha?
srri-ha thoda ajjeeb lag raha hai.

car stops.
rj-ryn,rjni,kya khaoge?

coming out of car.in front there r few shops uncle sam pizza,ice creme shops & all.bhind them,sam,chotu,amisha&dev also come.

ryn&rjni-[looking at sam] unkl sam!!
rj-
[does not notice sam & others] unkl sam?😲 bacho ko aaj piza khana hai?unhe to piza nahi pasnd.

[amisha,chotu,ria,sri-laughing]

amisha-rj,tum sam ko gadha kehte the na?tum usse kam gadhe nahi ho.

sam-acha to mujh gadha bhi kehta tha ye bander.

rj-tum sab yaha?aur ye gadha ,bander sab kya laga rakha he?😡

amisha-acha to tum ye bhi bhul gaye ki gadha,bander aur chipkali kaun the?plzzz rj tumhari yaaddasht to sab se tezz thi ye kya?

ryn&rjni-papa!!hume ice kerme khani he.
all r eating icekrme.

amisha-rj ab to dimaag thanda ho gaya na ya aur icekreme khani he?waise bhi tumhari favrit icekreme khane ke aad tumhara gussa shant ho gaya hoga he na?

rj-amisha,aapni bakwaas band karo.samjhe ya samjhau??

am-😡raute! ye kyea tarika he ami se baat karne ka?apne gusse p kaabu rakhna sikho.bacho ke saamne to kam se kam.

kids-papa!ye aunty...ye aap ki frend amisha aunty he na.

rj-tumhe kaise pata?

kids-daadi ne hume inki photo dihayi thi,inki story bhi sunayi thi.

amisha-acha beta tum aryan aur rajni ho na?

kids-ha aunty.aapke baare me bohot suna he humne.

amisha-rj!tumhare bache bahot pyare he.bilkul roshni ki tarah he.

rj-ab bahot der ho chuki he hume ghar aana chahiye.bacho chalo ca me baitho.rathod tum chotu,sri n ria ko har drop kar dena.me bacho ko ghar le jaata hu.

kids-nahi hume mama ke saath jaana he .mama aap humare saath har chaliye na. amisha aunty aap bhi aayiye.

rj-bacho aaj nahi kal aunty aa jayegi.aab chalo.

sam-amisha, tum aur dev har chle jao kal milenge.
[in car-sam,chotu,sri&ia together]

ria-sir,aap bura na maane to ek baat puhu?

sam-ha ria pucho

ria-sir wo aaj o park me thi wo kon hai?

sam-wo humari bachpan ki dost hai.hum teeno collee tak saath the.

ria-teeno?

sam-ha me, amisha
aur raute.hum ne bahot masti ki hai.bachpan se lekar college tak.phir wo america chali gayi.aage ki padhayi ke liye.

their house comes.he drops them.
sam goes to his house.
...
this is all for today.
plz coment.
thank u.






Edited by gfjhsdu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
great update...
sam amisha arjun convo at ice cream parlour was funny...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
aryan :papa sunday ke din bahar gumne jaana.
arjun :chalo beta etf office chalte.
rajani :papa kitni baar toh gomh kar aa chuke .
arjun :beta ek baar phir chalte.
rajani : nahi papa waha ek dukhi aatma reheti h jo kabhi hasati nahi rathod ek pagal saand reheta chotu. ek bandar raheta jo bina baat hasta reheta h. aur ek baar lisa aur ayesha aunty ne hame bahot pita kyoki hamne unhe ek baar keh diya chalti ho ki khandala.
arjun :nahi beta wo tumari maa saman h aisa nahi bolte.
rajani & aryan :kaya papa aap apne hi chakkar mein pare rehete.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
What????????????????


Arjun ke bachhe hai...and what abt riya...

Jaldi update karo...and welcome to forum...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Part 3
at amisha & dev's house..
dev-ye sab kya tha amisha?
ami-kya?
dev-tumne mujhe kabhi is arjun aur sameer ke baare me nahi bataya.why didn't you tell me amisha why??
ami-vo vo..
dev(😡)-vo vo kya? koun he vo tumhare? dost ya kuch aur?
ami-SHUT UP DEV!! tumhari himmat kaise hui rj aur sam ke baare me aisa kehne ki?
dev-to tum ne mujhe kabhi un dono ke baare me kyo nahi bataya?
ami {her phone rings-on phone}ha bolo sam,tumne phone kyu kiya?
dev-{putting the phone on loudspeaker}
sam-vo vo me tumhe sorry kehna chata tha.
ami-sorry kya tum har baar ki tarah phir se rj ki aur se maafi mangna chahte ho? o just stop it sam..har baar galti vo kare aur maafi tum maango yeh thik nahi he.
sam-koi baat nahi ami .vaise bhi aaj raute ne jis tarah tum se baat ki vo bilkul thik nahi tha.vo tumse is tarah kaise baat kar sakta tha?
ami-sam vo me tumse baadme baat karti hu mujhe kuch kam he.rakhti hu ,bye.
sam-bye.
ami-dev,tum ye kya kar rahe ho?meri phone par hone wali baate sun rahe ho?kyu?
dev-pati hu me tumhara.mujhe haq he jaanne ka.tum kisse baat karti ho,milti ho?
ami-to tum mujh par shaq karte ho?
dev-{slapping her} tumhari himmat kaise hui ye sab kehne ki?
ami-bas dev bohut hua.😭 🥱
she becomes unconscious.
next part will be updated soon...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
part 3

next day
in evening...
kids-papa aap hume aaj mall me le chalo na.
rj-thik he tum dono tayaar ho jao.
sam-on phone-raute tum mujhe abhi reliance mall ke bahar milo.
rj-thik he me 10 minit me pahuchta hu.
AT THE MALL..
sam-raute,hume khabar mili he ki yaha kuch hone wala he.lekin tum yaha baccho ko kyu le aaye?
rj-vo me baccho ko mall lekar hi jaa raha tha ki tumhara phone aaya.
sam-ye jagah baccho ke liye thik nahi he.tum inhe kahin aur le jao.
rj-ok to me inhe game zone me le jata hu.
sam-tum rehne do,inhe ria lekar jaegi.
rj-ria vo bhi yaha he?
sam-ha , me poori team ke saath aaya hu.
there comes Amisha with her husband Dev.Ria was just going to dash with Dev.
dev-ria!tum yaha?
ri-maine aapko pehchana nahi.maine aapko kahin dekha hai.
dev-junglee billi!!
ri-(hugs him)bhaiya..aap US se kab wapas aaye?itne saal aapko hamari yaad nahi aayi?
dev-vo kya he ki me kuch busy ho gaya tha.waise inse milo ye tumhari bhabhi he.amisha
ami-hi ri..dev ne bataya tha mujhe tumhare baare me.nice to meet you.tum rj ke baccho ko lekar kaha jaa rahi ho ria?
ri-rj??vo kon he?
ami-me arjun ke baare me baat kar rahi thi.
ri-me in dono ko lekar game zone jaa rahi hu.rathod sir aur arjun sir ko kuch kaam tha isliye.
ami-to rj aur sam bhi yaha he?
dev-nice!to humari un dono se phir se mulaqat ho jaegi.
ri-me jaati hu varna mujhe daat padegi.

chotu to sri-ye dono mele me bichde hue lagte hai.
sri-kon?
chotu-are ye ria aur dev.
sri-haan.

sam-sri aur chotu tum dono main gates par nazar rakho.raute aur me yahan nazar rakhte he.ye amisha aur dev yaha?
ami-rj aur sam tum dono kya baate kar rahe the?
sam-kuch nahi hum case discuss kar rahe the.


some people wearing masks came there.
one masked person catches hold of amisha putting knife on her nech.
person-koi bhi apni jagah se nahi hilna chahiye varna iski zindagi khatam kar doonga.
sam-raute jao.
person-koi hilna nahi.
rj-me use bacha loonga.
person-ae chokre jyada shanpatti mat kar apni jaan pyari he to chala ja.
rj-tum use chod do.
ami-rj plz mujhe bachao.

suspence continues in next part...
plz tell me how it is...thank you for reading..





Edited by gfjhsdu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
part 4

Arjun saves Amisha.
dev-thanks Arjun.thank you for saving amisha.
rj-me to apni duty kar raha tha.amisha ki jagah koi aur bhi hota to me yahi karta.thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi he.
dev-thik he lekin ek treat to banti he.amisha ke haato se bana khana khane ke liye ghar aana padega.apne saath Sameer ko bhi le aana.
sam-kya kaha tumne?amisha ne banaya hua khana?!!amisha tumne khana banana sikh liya he na thik se?
dev-thik se? matlab ?me kuch samjha nahi?
sam-kuch nahi..thik he hum dono kal shaam aa jaenge tumhare ghar.tum aaoge na raute?
rj-nahi..mujhe kal baccho ko lekar bahar jana he.
ami-oh come on rj.tum bacho ko bhi le aana saath me.
rj-nahi..me baccho ko bahar khane par nahi le jaata.
ami-thik he tum akele hi aa jana.
dev-tumhare liye to treat he arjun tum nahi aaoge to accha nahi lagega.
rj-ok i'll try.
dev-to kal shaam 7:30 baje.
nxt eve..
sam-to tum chal rahe ho na amisha ke ghar?
rj-nahi..
sam-it's an order.tumhe chalna padega.
rj-ok..
sam-me tumhe thik 7:15 ko lene aa jaunga.be ready.
rj-ok.

At 7:15..outside arjun's home..
sam-ye raute kaha reh gaya?
rj-me yaha hu.ab chalo.

At amisha's home...
dev-amisha ye log kab tak aayenge?
ami-tumne unhe 7:30 ka bola he to wo 7:29 se pehle pahuch jaenge.
dev-7:29 se pehle?!!ok let's see.
at 7:28 doorbell rings..amisha opens the door..
ami-hi sam! hi rj!
dev-(are baap re!ye log to kuch jyada hi punctual he.)hello sameer,arjun.thanks for coming.
they talk about here and there.
dev-aap teeno kaafi acche friends ho.right?
sam-..ha ..shayad..the.
dev-waise tum log kaise mile the..i mean kab?
sam-..vo ..kuch..
rj-hum teeno ka school me first din tha.hum first me hi the tab dosti hui thi hamari..
ami-tumhari yaaddasht aaj bhi kamjor he sam.aaj celebrate karne ke liyeek aur wajah bhi he.
sam-konsi wajah?
ami-ab to mujhe yakin ho gaya ki tumhari yaaddasht sach me kamzor ho gayi he.
sam-raute!tumhe kuch samajh me aa raha he ye kya kehna chahti he?
rj-rathod !!aaj hi ke din 22 saal pehle hum mile the pehli baar.
ami-exactly.
sam-mujhe pata tha.me to bas tum dono ki test le raha tha.
ami-tum nahi sudhroge sam.
dev-tum log apne kisse sunaao na .i love stories.
sam-hum logo ne kaafi saare classes bunk kiye the movies dekhne ke liye,phir bohut kuch he kya bataye kya nahi samajh me nahi aata.lekin tum amisha se puchna.usne sab kuch ..
ami-tum logo ko bhuk nahi lagi kya?khana thanda ho raha he.
dev-chalo khana khane.aaj ka special khana amisha ne khud banaya he.
at dining table..
sam-raute !sambhal ke khana,aaj ka khana amisha special he.
rj-par khane ki khushbu to acchi aa rahi he.
sam-amisha!khana konsi hotel se order kiya he?it's tasty.
ami-maine khud banaya he.
sam-😲(coughing) tu..mne??
dev-are bhai itna shock kyu ho?khana amisha ne hi banaya he.
ami-ha.maine sikh liya he.
rj-itne saalo me kuch to sikha!
dev-are?!tum dono aise kyu keh rahe ho?
sam-kyuki jab ye khana banana sikh rahi thi to apne ssare experiments ye hum par karti thi.yaad he mujhe vo din aur vo dish jo amisha ne pehli baar banayi thi.
dev-kaisi thi vo dish?
sam-..vo..bahut..
rj-badhiya thi.aisi dish aaj tak kisi ne na to banaayi hogi na khai hogi.
dev-are!itne suspence kyu create kar rahe ho ?saaf-saaf batao na.
rj-uss sabji me namak jyada tha aur masaale kum,rotiya ya to jal gayi thi ya kacchi thi,daal me panni jyada tha aur chawal to pake hi nahi the.abb samjhe ya samjhau??
ami-rj!tumhari ye 'samjhe ya samjhau' waali aadat nahi gayi ?
dev-amisha!tum ise arjun kyo nahi kehti?rj kyu kehti ho?
ami-vo ise radio sunne aur sunane ka bahot shauk tha.hamesha ye aur uska radio.isliye hum ise RJ kehte he.abb samjhe ya samjhau??
rj{stares at her}-khir paas karna zara.

after the dinner..
they both leave..

baaki kaa next part me...
thnx 4 reading...

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