OS- If riya would be there./upd pg-43.*imp note-pg47*sorry - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Great OS plz continue and if u do plz pm me the updates :)
This OS reminded me of how much I wish Riya/Sana was still there :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesome 😊
same would've happend if riya ws der...
missng her a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
lovely
this is exactly what i want in the show
fabulous
i wish she is alive in the show now
awww feel crying😭
miss her so so much in every episode
Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
This was really great! Please do continue. Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
fantastic OS :) loved it
you wrote what could have happen if riya was there
i can imagine this scene
loved her concern for arjun and
love the way arjun assured her that he will be fine
great job 👏
can't wait to read next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Guys thank you thank you thank you very much...

Mujhe laga ye thought sirf meri hai bt ...

You all guys are in same condition as mine.

So i have decided to post the every further episode of arjun including riya...

Are u guys are with me..
Pls view your thought if u liked..

Thank you again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
ohh yes...!!! great idea...!!!
plz do that...!!
would love to read it...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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.Part-2


arjun and chotu left for the location. Arjun have found out the next ' best'.
He ran towards the resturant.
Here riya was still tensed for arjun.
She requested rathod to pair her up with arjun.
Rathod can understand her feelings towards arjun. How tensed she was, when arjun had entered the security protected room to save the woman.
It was very hard to control her then.
So he allowd her to go.
And riya runs towards her destination. She can hear the convo between shree and arjun.

She was driving the SUV in a speed that had turned into a aeroplane.

Arjun hve found the bomb.
It is a very highly explosive one.
Arjun kept the two bomb in the that bag. Chotu was with him.
He informed rathod that he wll go to the lake so that it couldn't harm public.

Riya heard that. She was now very near the location where arjun was.

Here shree was very tensed for arjun that he is with the bomb and there is only 2 mins left for the explosion.

Shree- sir ..pls aap waha se bahar jaiye ... Sir pls ..sir time bahaut kam hai.

Rathod was shocked but he have to keep faith on arjun .

Here riya was numb, she have no idea what to do. She just pulled up the gear and wheeled her SUV towards the lake.

He took the bike , wear d helmet and left the place. He was riding the bike very speedly.
He have only one thought in his mind that he have to do this.
He won't stop now..

Riya was so nervous and her hands are trembling in fear ...
The fear of losing him..
She never thought that she would fall for any man like ACP arjun suryakant raute...
She herself don't know what she feel for him.
But every time her heart skipped when he was in danger.
She also have seen something in his eyes for he in the every moment when their eyes met.

But she still looking for the answer form her heart ...but no response...
She have seen the care in his eyes
when she was in stretcher of the hospital and the word spoken by him she still remembers..
'Doc kuck bhi kijiye lekin isse bacha lijiye'... 'Toh kariye na doc , kis chees ki intezaar kar rahe ho'... Riya apni aakhein khuli rakho ..kuch hi der mai docs tumhara blood transfusion kar debge'...riya pls..riya don't give up on me ...riya pls..

But He is able to cover his feelings by showing the pain in his eyes..
And riya , she everytime lost in his eyes trying to figure out the intensity of the pain which she tought that he was hiding..
Only 30 secs are left ..
Arjun runs like a maniac .. He jumped out of the bike ..

Everyones heart is beating very loudly as compared to the normal pace..

9..8...7...
He threw the bag in the lake and

'booom'

riya comes out from her thoughts when she heard the noise..

She hits the break..her heart stopped beating ... She screamed
'nooo'!!!

But for her goodness she found herself in front of the lake.
There is the bike which was lying on the ground..
She jumped out of the..
But what she viewed there was made hr expressionless..

Mr. Arjun suryakant raute was standing there holding the railing as if enjoying the view of any fire crack..

Shree heard the scream of riya
shree- riya...riya.. Riya r u there..
He also heard the boom .
But he was only praying the god to keep everyone safe.
Shree- riya..riya sun rahi ho..

Riya - arjun sir thick hai shree..
The only words comes out of her mouth..and cut the call.

She leaned to the SUV ..closed her eyes and tears started rolling down from her eyes..
She thought ..agar arjun sir ko kuch ho jata toh woh kya karti . Kaise sambhal ti khud ko..

Here arjun turned and see the suv was there .. He don't need to guess that it was riya.. He knew it must be riya..
And yeah she was there...

He saw her tears ... How badly he wanted to run to her and wiped all the tears of her eyes...
He don't know the answer but every time he saw her crying he couldn't hold himself to not to go to her..
Every time be it the kanika murder case , or be it the mahato murder case or riyaz murder case he was only there for her to console and pacify her.
Which he thought for no reason.

He just want to figure out the girl in front of him.. Yeah she is the girl who shallowed the bacteria..
And that day he couldn't avoid the eye contact between them when she gave sindoor to alok for putting that on the maang of alok's beloved bride.. Or today the girl who saved his life by overcoming her fear onlt for him...

He slowly walked to her... Her eyes are still closed ..
He moved his hands into his pocket and took out his hanky and inserted into her palms ..
She opened her eyes..

Arjun- tum keheti thi na.. Annt mai hamesha meri hi jeet hoti hai..

She nodded

arjun- main tumhe galat sabit nahi kar sakta tha..
And he walked away as always he does leaving a more confusing riya.

Here his words echoing in her ears.


But this time arjun turned to her and to his surprise she was wiping her tears with that hanky... As if it was his incomplete work

Again this girl proves him wrong
He turned and walked away...




So guys pls tell me how is dis ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Amazing update.
Touched my heart.
Agar Riya sach mein zinda hoti,toh aisa hi hota.
Saach mein,it really touched my heart.
Love u dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
heart touching!!!!
awesome...!!!
for you gal👏
ur make it very really...!!!
hope riya was still there in the show...!!!

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