new SS: Supernatural part 1 eng version updated

hola amigos...
i know ki mere 2 SS and 1 FF ongoing hai...😛
but kya karoon... dimaag to mera kaha sunta nahin...😆😆
lo aagayi ek aur kahaani leke...😊
hatke hai... poora bandalbaazi...😆😆yahan action hai, romance hai, emotions hai...
padhke batayiyega zaroor...

and ha... isme lots of "SHUDH HINDI" dialogues honge jinka main english translations doongi...
but i ll continue this only when i get sufficient comments and likes... and updates week to 10days span mein hoga...only when i get good response... warna main to isse wahin stop kardungi...

here i go...




~prologue~

1800's...

Italy...

A man in his late teens was sitting and swirling his wine glass...

he had a letter in his hand...from...

Raja Pratyush...

O how much he hated this name.

It was because of him he could not go out into the world. If he had not married her, he would not have had born and lived this life... in seclusion... away from his own family...all alone... work for people like everyone does... run from one place to another hiding and changing identity... how much he hated it...

He now gets to know after all these years he has a younger brother.

Brother...

What relation was it?

Was it same as that which all siblings share in this world??

O was it something different...

He never knew relations... no one told him what relations are...no one... everyone was busy in their own business...

It was marshal... well it was his present name though... who knows what his next identity ll be... a man who lived all his life except his first 18 years all alone...

He opened the letter and read it...

Priya putra Arjun...

(aarrgh... it was long time someone had addressed him like this...he resumed reading)

Hum bhalibhanti jaante hai ki aap humaara ye patra padhkar prasanna nahin honge... jaante hai putra ki aapko lagta hai ki humne aapko door karke aapke saath naainsaafi ki... par ye atyant aavashyak tha... haalaat hi kuch aise the ki hume na chahte hue bhi aapko humse alag karna pada. Hum aapse bohut pyaar karte hai Arjun... aapke lautne ki aasha mein hai...

Vishay yah hai ki aapko to ab tak maaloom ho chuka hoga ki aap ka ek bhratr hai.. wo abhi abhi youvvan ko praapt hue hai...aap samajh chuke honge ki hum kya keh rahe hai... hum unhe aapke paas bhej rahe hai... unhe hum humaare paas nahin rakh sakte...unki aur sab ki jaan khatre me hai...unhe khud ko sambhaalna aap sikhaayenge... aasha karte hai ki hum niraash nahin honge... aap ke bhraatru ka naamdehya Sameer hai. Aap wahan unka naam badaliyega aur unhe humaare taur tareeke sikhayiyega Arjun..

Aapki maatashree ne aasheerwaad bheja hai.. apna khayal rakhiye...

Sada yashaswi bhava...

ishtartha siddhirastu...

he folded the letter back and closed his black eyes...

ENG TRANSLATION OF LETTER.

my dear son Arjun...

I very well know you are not happy to read this letter from me... I know son, you feel that it was injustice towards you to send you away from us...but it was necessary.circumstances made me unwillingly separate you from us. I love you a lot son and I am hoping that someday you would be back...

The actual matter is...u might have got to know that you have a younger brother... he has just out his teen age.. you got what I am to say... I am sending him to you as I cant keep him with us. His and every other person's life is in danger here. You ll teach him how to control himself.. I hope I wont be disappointed. And your brother's name is sameer... you need to change his nae there and teach him our ways of life arjun...

Your mother has blessed you... take care son...

Let victory always be yours...

May all your wishes come true..

to be continued...

who ever read this, please do spare two minutes and comment saying how it is... good o bad...appreciation o criticism... i welcome both...

and pls dont ask me about the couples...

i ll see the response i get and then ll upload next part... may be next week o in 10 days...

and yeah ll give eng version of letter soon...

so drop ua comments😊😊

prologue: up

part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77689994

part 1(english):
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77740097

nice update
different concept👍🏼
so arjun is the price😃 wow
waiting for the princess entry😆 & sameer
continue soon

Yayyy... Awesomeee...
I love shuddh hinddi...
Loved it...

Omg... For d first time someone put Sameer as younger bro of Arjun...
Wowww...loved loved loved it my pyari behna pari...
Hugsss...

Do update soon dear... Sm eagerlyyy waiting for ur update...
Itsss sounding superb...


**claps claps claps**
**hugsss**

great start :)

nice and different concept...!

Looks really intesrting and i hope theres a love story and i hope its riya please let it be riya !!!!!!! :D

awsum start...
interesting and different concept
wow story in shudh hindi...eagerly waiting to read more...
continue soon...

wow!!!sameer is d younger brother of arjun!!😊 😊 😊 😊!!!

hola...
here is a teaser for you all...

why did you all not tell me about him earlier roshni? After all sameer is my brother... much like me.just like me.cursed immortal.. half vampire and half angel who neither fits amongst vampires nor in angels... why roshni???

hehe...😉
but lemme remind you all...
next part tabhi hoga when i receive responses...
arre yaar how will i feel updating when i get soo less resposes when no. of views are good????
and thanks who have commented and liked this story.big huggs...🤗
so kya main good number of responses expect kar sakti hun?
if i dont get, i ll stop this just like i have stopped waaris.
sorry if being rude.

vampiresss..!!!!