new SS: Supernatural part 1 eng version updated - Page 2

is that ariya or arni?😕

Originally posted by: madmadona

is that ariya or arni?😕

i assure no arni.
as for ariya, i am not sure... lets see if i can continue this i ll think about his better half...
i need comments...
if i dont get responses from my readers, i am going to stop...
i hope i need not do that

dont even think about stopping it!!!!!!

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

dont even think about stopping it!!!!!!

nice concept...vampire..angel...nice😊

cont soon!

oki... i wont...
i promise...😊
but i ll update it only if it reaches 4th pg...😊
till then...
i and u all need to wait...😊

hey please dont stop

tadaa... m back with my shudh hindi bakwaas.😆😆
bear me... i ll upload english translation later today...
m early cos i am not sure i ll be able to come often next one o two weeks to update ss...i wont be having pc under my control...
and one more thing... arjun is living in foreign country so he knows many languages other than Hindi. so he ll be conversing in english too...
i dunno Italian so imagine him to be speaking in Italian with servants and localites when dialogues are in english...
hop4e you like the update...

"o my... whats going on???? I have soo many brothers and sisters and dad never cared to send anyone to me... wait... o no...is he just like me??? Is that why he is sending sameer to me????he is going to make nother son of his an orphan with all his family... I ll write him back and get details..."

he takes a quill and starts writing...

Poojya pitashree...

Aap ke charano mein koti namaskaar. Maatashree ko bhi humara pranaam kahiyega...

(i actually dont want to but they are my parents...)

Main seedhe vishay par aata hun.

Kya sameer bhi mere jaisa hai jiski wajah se aap usse apne saath nahin rakhna chahte??? Agar aisa hai to aap krupaya usse apne se alag naa kare.. hum yahan kitne akele hai ye sirf hum jaante hai aur nahin chaahte ki humara chota bhai bhi usi daur se guzre...abhi wo sirf satrah saal ka hai... agar phir bhi usse bhejna zaroori hai to hum baahe failaye unka swaagat karenge.

Aap chinta na Karen wo humare saath surakshit rahega.. hum usse sakalavidya paarangat banayenge pitashree... hum aako vachan dete hai... hum sameer ka intezaar karenge...

Aur rahi baat humare ghar waapas lautne ki, shayad abhi uskeliye sahi samay nahin aaya pitashree... magar hum zaroor aayenge...

Aapke aur maatashree ke aasheerwadaabhilashi,

Arjun

*******

He waved his hand and came in in a beautiful Pegasus...

"hey my Pegasus... take this letter to my dad... aaa...

Hume maaf kijiyega... hum bhool gaye ki aap humaare saath nahin rehte aur aap ko english samajh nahin aata... ye lijiye...patra... isse aap pitashree ko denge aur raaste mein kisi ke nazar nahin aayenge khaas kar Bhadrak ke guptcharon se... samjhe ya... ab aap jayiye..."

Pegasus went of of the window and he sat back.

*******

"george... where are you???? Get two guest rooms ready by tomorrow... I am having guests...my brother is coming..."

"yes master. Anything else?"

"make sure no one disturbs us esp my brother...you understand???"

"yes master..."

********

He spent that night anticipating the arrival of his brother.

Next morning...

He woke up from the uncomfortable couch where he had dozed off the previous night...

He heard sweet tinkling sound of anklets running towards his room. He stood up and called out...

"ROSHNI... AAP KYA KAR RAHI HO???AATE HI MASTI??"

"ufff... bhraatashree... aap bhi na... aap ko pata chal gaya ki wo hum hai??"

"haan... pata kaise nahin chalega?? Itna uchalkood to keval aap hi kar sakti ho na..."

"haan... wo to shat pratishat sach hai..."

"maatashree kaisi hai??? Aur humara chota bhai kahan hai??"

"maatashree bilkul theek hai... aur sameer yahin the... avashya mahal dekhna gaye honge... abhi bulate hai unhe..."

"rehna dijiye roshni... unhe ab se yahin rehna hai... behtar hoga ki wo iss jagah se parichit ho... waise george hai unke madad ke liye.."

"george aaj bhi aap keliye kaam karta hai? Aashcharya hai... aap ke khrod ko sehkar itne saalon se kaam kar raha hai wo... unse to hum prasanna hai...

(she clapped her hands in glee...)

Suddenly...

"didi... ye mahal to itna sudar aur vishaal hai ki hum to ek baar keliye raasta bhul gaye... ye mahal koi bhoolbhulaiyya se kam nahin hai... aap bhi chalo na..."

A handsome boy of about 17 came and started pulling roshni away.

"ye kya ho raha hai yahan???? Roshni humse baat kar rahi hai na..." came thunderous voice of Arjun.

"wo mai... hum..."

"bhratashree... yahi sameer hai... humara chota bhai...abhi bhi naadaan hai wo... pitashree ne inhe akele bhejna uchit nahin samjha... sameer...ye hamare bade bhrata arjun hai... aaj se hum inhi ke saath rahenge..."

Sameer immediately went and bent down to touch arjun's feet to take blessings..

"aashirwaad dijiye bhratashree..."

"yashaswibhava.. uthiye..."

"aap to uthpala nagari mein nahin rehte humare saath... kyun bhratashree?"

"hum pichle 600 saal se wahan nahin rehte sameer... hum vishwaparyatan karte hai... isiliye hum wahan aapke janam ke baad aa nahin paaye"

to be continued...

sorry all, i made roshni arjun and sam's sister...

she is too gentle for me, delicate, a perfect angel... she ll play an important role in everybody's life...

and yes i dunno if it is ariya arisha samsha... i have not decided anything...

sorry once again...

pls do like and comment...

Take ur time dear
very new concept
loved it
gud update
all d best dear..!
Omg rosh sis!!
phew kya kru read or nt..!!!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Take ur time dear
very new concept
loved it
gud update
all d best dear..!
Omg rosh sis!!
phew kya kru read or nt..!!!!

kya karun... when i wanted to add his sis, gentle caring angel, nly name came to m was roshni...
but she is a perfeect character i assure you and bond betn arjun roshni is very specia,...
padh bhi lo di...😊😊

Hmm ok pari dear only fr u..
in my pov wenever i imagine arjun sis i imagine myself rofl
jokes apart
kumud of saraswatichandra aka jennifer best!!

nice
aww sam & roshini r his siblings nice
but why arjun is away from his family
(sorry my hindi is not good)
still waiting for princess😆
hope it's ariya
update soon