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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
nice update :)
roshni is his sister :) interesting
can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
wht roshni is sis of arjun 🤣
thanx 4 pm dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
roshini is his sister!!! 😊 😊 😊!! intersting!!!

nyccc update!!!

wat 600 yearsss?????? !!

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
bahut diff concept hai...!
made me curious want to read more...!
rosh sam and arjun siblings haan...hmmm
nice waiting jaldi jaldi update karo😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awsum update...!!
roshni sam and arjun bro sis😲
continue soon...!!!
cant wait to read more...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hola... here is the eng translation of part 1...
i know as these dialogues are in way too much hindi not too simple to read, creates a problem for readers... i assure you ll get an eng version in a day or two after every part...
and this problem wont be for long as soon we ll cum to 2013 from 1800's...
here is the part 1 eng version... i dont know how good it is... so bear me...



"o my... whats going on???? I have soo many brothers and sisters and dad never cared to send anyone to me... wait... o no...is he just like me??? Is that why he is sending sameer to me???? I ll write him back and get details... he takes a quill and starts writing...

Respected father,

My greetings to you. Pass on my greetings to mom too...

Lemme come to the point directly.

Is sameer just like me?? Is this the reason you don't want to keep him with you??? If it is so, then please don't do this to him.. don't separate him from you... only I know how lonely I feel being here.. I don't want my brother to undergo the same pain...he is just seventeen... even then if you feel its appropriate to send him to me, I am here with my arms open for him. you need not worry about him. he will be safe with me. I ll teach him everything.i ll give you my word on this. I ll be waiting for sameer..

And about me returning home...!! I don't think it's the right time for me to be back. But I ll be back.

Seeking blessings from you and mom, yours,

Arjun.

******

He waved his hand and came in in a beautiful Pegasus...

"hey my Pegasus... take this letter to my dad... aaa...

I forgot that you don't stay with me... I forgot that you don't understand English. Take this letter and give to dada. On your way stay away from any eye, esp from bhadrak's men. samjhe ya...

Now you can go...

Pegasus went of of the window and he sat back.

******

"george... where are you???? Get two guest rooms ready by tomorrow... I am having guests...my brother is coming..."

"yes master. Anything else?"

"make sure no one disturbs us esp my brother...you understand???"

"yes master..."

******

He spent that night anticipating the arrival of his brother.

Next morning...

He woke up from the uncomfortable couch where he had dozed off the previous night...

He heard sweet tinkling sound of anklets running towards his room. He stood up and called out...

"ROSHNI... WHAT ARE YOU DOING?? YOU STARTED YOUR ANTICS AS SOON AS YOU ENTERED???"

"uff bhai..how did you know that it was me?"

"yes...how could I not know? Only you can jump around in this way.."

"yeah that is 100% true"

"bdw how is mom? Where is my younger brother??"

"mom is fine. And sameer might be somewhere here. May be he is seeing around the mansion. Wait I ll call him..."

"no need roshni... he is going to stay here... so its better he is well versed with the mansion and its surroundings. And George is there to help him out if he needs..."

"George works here even now??its amazing... even after bearing your temper tantrums, he is here... wow... I am truly impressed by him...

(she clapped her hands in glee...)


Suddenly...

"didi... this mansion is soo beautiful and vast... even I was lost in it... its no less than a maze...you too join me na..."


A handsome boy of about 17 came and started pulling roshni away.


"whats going on? Roshni is speaking to me right..?" came thunderous voice of Arjun.


"wo... me... i..."

"brother, this is sameer, our youngest brother. He is very innocent.. so dad din want to send him alone... sameer, this is our elder brother Arjun. We ll be staying with him from now on..."


Sameer immediately went and bent down to touch arjun's feet to take blessings..

"bless me brother"

"let all success be yours...get up now"

"why do you not live with us in uthpala nagari brother?

"I am not there from past 600 years sameer... I am traveling around the world... that is why I was not able to come to you after your birth..."


do lemme know how you find this...


yeah... arjun is 617 yrs old and the story is in 1800...
and sameer is just 17 years which makes him almost 600 years younger to him...
this story ll take unexpected twists and turns in future...
keep reading...

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
thx for eng translation yaar
it's really nice
omg arjun is 617 years old
diff concept
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Baba re... Sach main SUPER-NATURAL!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
wow wow i love supernatural i luv vampires so if arjun is a vampire then i;ll be the biggest fan of ur ff. it seems very interesting so if u can will u plz send me pm wen u update nxt part cz i think i've started luving ur ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Pamalo

wow wow i love supernatural i luv vampires so if arjun is a vampire then i;ll be the biggest fan of ur ff. it seems very interesting so if u can will u plz send me pm wen u update nxt part cz i think i've started luving ur ff.



i would love to...
do send me a buddy request...


Please note: may be in a day o two i ll update next part...
if i have my pc under my control...

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