OS: Emptiness by Payal.last part: page 7 - Page 5

Originally posted by: tani23

Amazign part

loved readin it

loved d way u wrote

payal 1 more chapter likh de😉

thank u di
bt sry dis os ends only wid dis way..hehe!!

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

Awesome...

Thank u dear

Originally posted by: shona14

keep on writing payal
this part was awesum👏
is sikandar ka kuch karna padega

Thank u dear
phew dis is d end of d os..
omg siki die ab aur kya krna h rofl...
thank u dear..!

this part was superb :) loved it

Originally posted by: fatima15

this part was superb :) loved it

do write
more OS's like this :)

thank u dear...

Originally posted by: despicable_me

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hayee ni Payal! 🤗very good yaar!👏👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Beautifully written Payal & Kunchu! Bravo👍🏼</font>

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<font size="3" color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Pyaar , jab apni had par kar junoon ban jaye…</font>

<font size="3" color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thab uss adhure pyaar ko chinne walonko…</font>

<font size="3" color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Maarkar wo pyaar wapas nahi milthe….</font>

<font size="3" color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Pyaar ek jazba hai…</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#333333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Jo apki zinagi ko naya rutba detha hai…"</font></font>

<font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Dayum! Too good!👏</font></font>

phew di yay
u comented
thank u di ..
me dancing..!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Thank u dear
phew dis is d end of d os..
omg siki die ab aur kya krna h rofl...
thank u dear..!

haan sik died par main soch rahi hu os mein sik itna cruel hai to real lyf mein i mean serial mein to aur zada cruel hoga to isliye uska kuch to karna padega

Originally posted by: naughtykittyyy

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">waooo payal kya likkha hayy awsmmm</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">trulyyy bas cmnt dene ke liye nahi bol rahi hooon i m touchd wid it</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">plzzz add andr 1 part plzzz</font>

Thank u di
omg kya likhu
siki khatam paisa hazam lol
end os ka
kya likhu hehe!!