OS: Emptiness by Payal.last part: page 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
PAYAL DI!!!!
itni himmat apki k aap likhna bandh kar doge...
*pout*
payal di agr aapne aise kiya to mai sach mei bohot dukhi ho gayi...
jaao mai aapse baat na karungi...
itz not fair di,
u should keep on writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
@Sumu sry dear dnt be sad
i m continuing joint ff tum bin wid my heli di only
princess thank u dear
@jass thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
first Payal, a very big sorry, only now reading your OS😳, i'm sorry🤗
and what is this?
why should this be your last OS
this OS was very lovely...
it portrayed the emotions of a man, who has lost a lot in his life, actually he has lost everything😭
and as if it wasnt enough, Sik also filmed it and sent it to Arjun on a cd😭
very beautiful and poignant Payal
please you must continue this and make sure Sikander is caught😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
@Tina di thank u fr d awesum coment..
me dancing actually me upset dat no one like my wrk especially any writer..
bt ur coment made me dance di..
u really want i continue dis os ??
tell me di hehe
ur coment made me dance..!
love u di
tc..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Payal_156

@Tina di thank u fr d awesum coment..
me dancing actually me upset dat no one like my wrk especially any writer..
bt ur coment made me dance di..
u really want i continue dis os ??
tell me di hehe
ur coment made me dance..!
love u di
tc..!

hey payal toussi khapha kyun ho
there are many writers who actually liked it dear, and besides your Kunchu di is with you nah😉
yep i want you to continue, afterall you have to make Sikander pay for his cruelty😡
my heart bled when Arjun was breaking😭
and it was a very hearttouching one Payal😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
@tina di..
hayee mera dil garden garden ho gya..
yup my helna di is wid me..me super happy..
di thanku fr d encouragement really appreciate di..
yup di many like it..
bt nt comenting made me really upset
lol khud jab kuch likha to coment ki value ka pta chla..
ok di i try to continue it..
aww di my heart too bled..
thank u di..
love u..!!
i will defo may try to nt to dissapoint u wid other readers..
love u di..
pls keep ur support wid me..di always!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Payal_156

@tina di..
hayee mera dil garden garden ho gya..
yup my helna di is wid me..me super happy..
di thanku fr d encouragement really appreciate di..
yup di many like it..
bt nt comenting made me really upset
lol khud jab kuch likha to coment ki value ka pta chla..
ok di i try to continue it..
aww di my heart too bled..
thank u di..
love u..!!
i will defo may try to nt to dissapoint u wid other readers..
love u di..
pls keep ur support wid me..di always!!

dil garden garden ho gaya😆
it was really very good Payal, so yep you should continue it dear, and take all your time, and if you need help you have lots of friends here nah😉
i'm myself very sorry about it, but i everytime i tried to read on it, i had the wrong post link😳
but finally today i got time to search for it and read it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hi everyone!!🤗
we are really happy with the responses that we recieved for this OS... and the coming up of the sequels proves it that you loved it too...
So we are giving you the last part of the OS: Emptiness...
hope you would like it too...
awaiting your responses...

Continued…

Pyaar , jab apni had par kar junoon ban jaye…

Thab uss adhure pyaar ko chinne walonko…

Maarkar wo pyaar wapas nahi milthe….

Pyaar ek jazba hai…

Jo apki zinagi ko naya rutba detha hai…

The next day was a bit tough one. Arjun was back to his angry man mode. But all knew that this was a mask, the one which didn't have the strength to cover his heart.

It was 4pm:

A call comes in Arjun's cell. he wearily picks it up. "kaise ho mere yaar?"

He didn't need a second to recognize the voice. "SIKANDER!!"

All looks upto him. "are wah aap tho hame bhoole hi nahi. Kamaal hai. lagtha hai ke aap hame kaafi miss kar rahe the. Tho fir aarahe he hum, apse milne!!"

Arj: kaha ho tum??

Sik: are ACP… apko lagtha hai ke me apko bathake aege. Firbhi agar puchliya hai tho sunlo… mien tho aapke shahar ko thabah karne aya hu. agar rok sako tho rokhlo.

Arj: zaroor Sikander.

Sik: aur ek baath puchna bhool gaya? Wo mere gift kaise the? Wo CD??

Arjun who holding onto a glass crashes it in his hands. "Are ACP,i thana bhi gussa math karo. Ab hume milna hai na?? kuch uss waqt keliya bacha rakho."

Arj: hume milna hai Sikander. Aur mujhe koi dar nahi hai. agar kisike paas khone keliye kuch bhi nahi ho, tho dar kis baath ke. Tho milthe hai.

Sik: ab ayega maza… milthe hai… R.M Bazar me…

The call cuts.

Sam: R. M. Bazar?? Wo tho sabse busy gali me se ek hai. waha usse kaise dhoondnge?

Arj: patha nahi, but lets go.

They reach the gali and as Sam had said, it was so crowded. But he was there dressed as a blind man. The team search for him. A blindman passes Arjun and was about to fall down. He catches him and helps him. He feel something off in that touch, but as Sam calls from behind, he goes to Sam. He reach Sam and discuss.

Riya: sir ye apke pocket me kya hai?

Arjun looks his pocket. As he was too busy searching for Sik, he had missed the small chit that the blind man had put in his pocket. He takes it out and is frustrated. He reads it: "same place same time"

Arjun I shivering in anger. "It was him Sam…. Patha nahi ke mere dhyan kaha tha. I missed him." He bangs his hand on the wall.

Arjun gets another call from him. "kya hua ACP?? Wo chit dekhke dar gaye? Are apko wahi jagah aana hoga jaha sab khatam hua tha. Samjhena??"

Arj: samajhgaye Sikander. Par is bar koi cheating nahi. Dekthe hai ke kaun sachme himmathwale hai!!

Sik: lo there akhri khwahish qubool hai mujhe. Aajana…

They reach the same spot where Roshni had died. He could feel the suffocation. He didn't allow the team to come with him. As he Sikander was not a person to be trusted.

But Sam and his team came up as a backup, without informing Arjun.

Arjun walks to the building. Sikander comes in clapping his hands. "manna padega Arjun, dam hai tujme. Par wo ab kuch kaam ka nahi hai!!"

Arj: apna bhashan bandh karo aur aage aao. Do what you want. Let me see your dum now?

Sikander comes in and fights with Arjun. at first Arjun let Sikander to have an upper hand. Arjun was getting beaten very badly. And then he comes up. He beats Sikander black and blue. Sam and team rushes to the spot to see Arjun madly beating Sikander. It looked as if Arjun was very mad and have lost all his consciousness. Sikander was on the verge of passing out.

Sam: ARJUN!! bas chod usse!!

But nothing reached his ears. The whole team started to call him back, but no.

He pushed sikander to a corner and took out his gun and pointed at Sik.

Sik: nahi Arjun, please mujhe math maro…please…

Arjun didn't want to hear it. he pointed his gun at Sik again.

"NAHI ARJUN!!" a sweet voice came from his side. Roshni was standing at his side. "nahi Arjun aise math karna. Aapke hathonse uske bhai mare, tho usne meri jaan li… ab is wajah aap uske jaan lene wale ho. jaan dena aur lena bhagwan ke kaam hai, insane ke nahi. Agar aab bhi uske tharah karege, tho aapme aur usme koi farak nahi hai. aap uske tharah nahi hia Arjun. don't do it. please…"

He looks at her blankly. There Sam and team saw Arjun ready to pull the trigger and now he looked as if in trance. And now Arjun threw his gun at Sikander's legs. They were shocked. They felt Arjun had indeed gone mad.

Arj: nahi Sikander, mien tumhe nahi marunga. Agar meine aise kuch kiya tho mien aur tujhme koi farak nahi hai. tho tum jiyo… issi ehsaas ke saath ke tum bhi mere samne hara tha. Ke tum bhi uthne hi kamzor ho, jithna mien. Mauth tho ek chota sa thofa hai Sikander, aur zindagi ek zeher. Agar tum chaho tho tho ye thofa le sakthe ho apne aapko (looking at the gun) ya kushi se zeher lelo.

He turns and walks away slowly with tears flowing from his eyes.

"BANG" all are shocked to hear a gun shot. All look at Arjun, he turns to Sikander. Sik falls down dead. He had shot hisown head. Failure was something that he had never had, and could never take it. so he killed himself.

Arjun turns back and falls on his knees. Sam rushes to him and sits opposite to him and hugs Arjun.

'ROSHNI….!!!" He screams aloud and breaks down completely.

"pyaar ka dard wahi samajh saktha hai jinke pyaar adhura reh gaya ho…"

mujhko ye jindagi lagti hai ajnabi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

mujhko ye jindagi lagti hai ajnabi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

kya jane mai kon hu

koi ye samjhaye mujhe

kaise mai ye gum sahu

jane kaha se aaya hu

kya jane mai kon hi

koi ye samjhaye mujhe

kaise mai ye gum sahu

mujhko ye jindagi lagti hai ajnabi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

chaw bhi dhup bhi har naye pal hai nayi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Amazign part

loved readin it

loved d way u wrote

payal 1 more chapter likh de 😉
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
keep on writing payal
this part was awesum👏
is sikandar ka kuch karna padega

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