OS: Emptiness by Payal.last part: page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone!!!

I'm back and this time with an OS, whose idea is by myown Choti, Payal. was just helping her a bit being her Di. please go through it.. and comment to HER!!!
so here it goes...

EMPTINESS.

pyar ek takat..
jab ho jaye to zindagi badal de
aur kho jae to aapko bdal de

It was not the first time that after completing a case Arjun had lost his control on the culprit, Rohan. He had held his collar and beaten him black and blue that Rathod and Chotu pulled Arjun just to save the Rohan from Arjun's wrath. Not that Rohan didn't deserve it. but to bring that man to justice and that too 'alive'.

Arjun pushed Sameer and Chotu who were holding onto him and rushed to his cabin and slammed the door hard. No one dared to go to meet him. Not even Sameer.

Arjun sat on his chair, and now to hold back the tears was impossible. The lady who was murdered had the stab at her stomach, just like 'her'. For a while Arjun had felt that he was watching Roshni's death again on front of him. But he didn't know that the one who did it was her own husband, Rohan. And that too just for the money and property that she owned and made it to look like a planned robbery case. Arjun lost all his control when he saw the dead body and when it was clear that Rohan was the culprit, he lost all his control.

Ho love of mine..
with a song and a whine..
You're harsh and divine..
like truths and a lie..
but the tale end is not here..
I've nothing to fear..
for my love is yell of giving and hold on...
in the bright emptiness..
in a room full of it..
is the cruel mistress ho ho o...
I feel the sunrise..
that nest all hollowness..
for i have the way to go.. not come...
And i feel so lonely yea..

There's a better place from this emptiness..
And i'm so lonely yea..
There's a better please from this emptiness.. yei yei yei ya...

Roshni... the love of his life... brutally murdered by Sikander, just because he killed Sik's brother in an encounter??? What was her mistake in it?? what did she do??

And that too infront of his eyes. If his hands and legs were not tied that day, Sikander would not have been successful to that. his constant begging to leave her alive... went to deaf ears...

"Roshni ko chod do Sikander..."

And he had laughed as a maniac...

He kicked Arjun hard and she screamed for him. The pain in both the pair of eyes filled Sik with more energy.

"kill me Sikander not her..."

Sik: acha aur tumhe marker mujhe kya milege Rawte?? No tumhe tho thadapna hai... zindagi bhar...

only if he could do something... Then Roshni would have been alive... she would have been in his life...

But no... and with all that, was that Sikander not happy that he filmed it and sent it to him...

If the death had killed Arjun, then the CD had left him a living corpse.

And now, even after a long time , he didn't know how he was alive...

He took his keys and walked off to the parking lot. He drives as a maniac to his home... his long forgotten home...

He went to their room and and opened the drawer where he had placed the CD, in a wish to never touch it again. He gathered all his strength and played it again. He sat on the floor with tears rolling down his cheeks. "ARJUN..." she screamed. He closed his ears and started to cry out loud.

Sam went to see Arjun. but he was not there. He looks for him and someone informs him about going out. He knew where he would be going and calls up his team. "team lets go!!"

Ri: par kaha sir?

Sam: I said lets go!!

They were worried to see him so angry, so they run behind him to the SUV. He drives off to Arjun's home.

Sh: sir, ye kiska ghar hai??

He dosen't answer and bangs the door. "ARJUN!! darwaza kholo!! ARJUN!!!"

No one opens it. "Chotu break the door." He breaks it and all rush in.

Inside Arjun was lying on the ground crying out. Tears were flowing endlessly and the sight brok e everyone's heart, esp Sameer's. he pulls him up from the ground to the sitting position. "Arjun hosh me aao!! Don't tell me you were watching that damn CD again!!"

Arjun just looks at him and hugs Sam. "SAM!! I need him. I just need to see him. Aur usse mare bina mien chain se nehi bait sakthe. Do something Sam. Bring him to me... please..."

Sam loses all his words no. he just hugs him tightly. "I promise you Arjun, I'll bring him to you. Aur isbar koi bhi kaanun tumhe nahi rokhenge... I'll see to that!! I promise.!!"

Arjun knew that were not the mere words. Its true from the heart. And he was waiting.. and so was Sam...


Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, Dard mera, Haaye..!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera

Aashiq tera
Bheed me khoya rehta hai, Jaane Jahaan
Poochho to itna kehta hai

That I feel so lonely
There's a better place than this
:Emptiness

And I'm so lonely
There's a better place than this
:Emptiness, Yeaheah!


NB: she says its her last OS, so please deal with it!!

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago

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princess_pari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di its just awesome... i was felling that i was really living that moment...
i have a small request di...
i wanna write a sequel to this in roshni's pov...
can i, if you dont mind????
only with your's and payal di's permission...
Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_pari

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">di its just awesome... i was felling that i was really living that moment...
i have a small request di...
i wanna write a sequel to this in roshni's pov...
can i, if you dont mind????
<font size="4">only with your's and payal di's permission...</font>

</font>


Thank u dear
rosh pov is already written by sinner.gurl aka my disha dear
sry unable to give u link by mobile
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156


Thank u dear
rosh pov is already written by sinner.gurl aka my disha dear
sry unable to give u link by mobile



o... i din know that... its k... i was soo touched by this story that i instantly wanted to write...
chalega... next time kabhi likhungi...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so heart touching nd emotional... shit man i'm crying... Arjun's pain its really hard to handle...bloody Sikki he captured everythn nd send it to Arjun that ws more brutal than wat he did...Loved the way Sam ws dere for Arjun... while watchn that epi i really wished Arjun to beat Rohan for wat he did...B*****d he ws evn justfyn the murder...
wat ws dat Payal's last OS???? hw cn u do that Payal?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG awesum loved it

payal nice idea

n both of u wrote it ...seriously amazing work

OMG arjun's outburst was seriously 😭

Liked d way sameer supported him

Sik is 🤬 he recorded her death in d CD

Felt bad for Arjun😒

nice work!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
awesome OS guys :) loved it
arjun's outburst was so heart touching 😭
sikander is so sick 😡 he recorded roshni's murder and send it to Arjun
loved the way sameer supported him :)
the song was great :)
great work 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great one... 👏

My eyes welled reading the part when he begged that SICK!! Sik to kill him instead of her! 😭
Also, the part in which he pleaded Sameer to bring that creep to him!..Touching! 💔
________

@princess_pari

o... i din know that... its k... i was soo touched by this story that i instantly wanted to write...
chalega... next time kabhi likhungi...


Heyy...of course you can!! 😛...Copyright nahi hain mere uss song pe! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Pari u may write dear acc to u..
@leki di thanku di..
me quit writing as me a crap writer only continue wid tum bin..
@tani di thank u di
@rami thank u dear
@mithu thank u dear
@prohelika thanku dear
@ ramya thank u dear
@pihu thank u dear

@Radhika thank u dear
@fatima thank u dear
@disha yup dear no copyright lolz
thank u dear fr comenting n liking..
me stop writing
i believe me a crap writer
only continue wid tum bin cos of heli di..!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply incredible...u both rendered me speechless...the title is apt for the OS...Emptiness...just Emptiness.
Edited by its-bk - 12 years ago

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