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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

@kareena thank u dear
@divya thank u dear
lol nt sure fr more writing
@pari dear dats nt sequel lol a ending...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Waooo i lv red line...
pyar ek junoo hai

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awesome end to Sik...

atleast got to see his death in this OS...

loved the way Roshni made Arjun understand and he also listened to her...

But what surprised me was Sik's actions...he killed himself...

Excellent lines and the end song was perfect!

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Waooo i lv red line...
pyar ek junoo hai
Ohhh my my etani emostionalll mujhe to rona aa gaya,..
ohh sik is so seek...finaly
sik n arjun face to face...
arjun almost kill him..
but stop...
bez of rosh voice..
that scence was to emostional..
n the line..
jinaka pyar adhura,..
was suppubbb...
u both r grateee...
lv this ending..
so finaly sikkk khel is stop,.
he kill himselfff...
realy gra888 osss

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Let me dance first yay..,
heli di party time lol
vidya di
piya di
thank u fr d amazing coment di
love u
hugs

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Amazing...beautifully written...
sikander Mar gaya.wah wah
plz keep writting more n more...
it was just perfect
take a bow ladies..

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Amazing...beautifully written...
sikander Mar gaya.wah wah
plz keep writting more n more...
it was just perfect
take a bow ladies..

phew di girls nt ladies pls lol
thank u di...
means a lot to us..
thank u fr d great coment
more writing nt sure lol di..
heli di thank u so much fr d awesum support
love u my dis

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Let me dance first yay..,
heli di party time lol
vidya di
piya di
thank u fr d amazing coment di
love u
hugs

dont forget to invite me...
realy realy gr888 os its realy tuch my heart...thank u both for such a wonderful gifttt

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pravallika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

lovely OS Pari...

great work both of you...

finally Sikky died..

Loved the way roshni said to him not to take a life...

lovely...and emotional..

loved all the poems...

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nikki08

@nikki08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

hie payal, kunchu Di!!!

finally i read this!!!

and luv u for writing a sequel to this one!!!

oh..i loved this story...

end was really fab...

I had expected Arjun to kill him there and then...but it was good...

kya twist tha!👏

and then, that poor Sikander...killed himself...

huh...such a coward!

nice one!!!😉

and loved the poem!

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