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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

So bhavna di finaly u r here :D
thank u so much di
ur coment meant a lot ...
its d concept
we glad u liked it 🤗

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

awesome...sooo touching

loved it...

it was beautiful...❤️❤️

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: daydreamer...
awesome...sooo touching

loved it...

it was beautiful...❤️❤️

ThankU dear 🤗

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

part one
Goshh sik recorded Roshni's muder and actually sent it to Arjun goshhh
That's so sick man!!
glad that Sam supported him...
God this part almost left me in tears

second part
beautifull...
Loved what Roshni said to arjun..
so Sik killed himself
great ending.

Beautiful OS drear, loved it <3

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: -BlazingWater-
part one
Goshh sik recorded Roshni's muder and actually sent it to Arjun goshhh
That's so sick man!!
glad that Sam supported him...
God this part almost left me in tears

second part
beautifull...
Loved what Roshni said to arjun..
so Sik killed himself
great ending.

Beautiful OS drear, loved it <3

Thank u so much dear
sik phew :D
🤗

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Its such a awesome OS didu.
And kunhu di u portrayed it as well, fantasticly. Just loved it. Its like i am living this pain. Its just unbearable. And the bloody sik.. CD ..damn.. Just hate him. And couln'd see arjun like this. I knw there will always be an emptiness in his corners of his heart for this pain. Just love the song choice, and its one of my fav. Loved the lines which were on red. Just loved it a lot.

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Vampu <3
its my fav sng too
thanku so much
glad u like it...
love u re
arjun bro pain :'(
sik to pheW

🤗 tightly to u..!

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Thank god .
That bloody sik killed.
Loved the way arjun obeyed to roshni and leave him live life like hell.
The plan is really good. And then finally he is killed.
Still there is pain in his heart. And it is very true, pyar ka dard sirf wahi samajh sakta hai jiska pyaar adhura rah gaya ho..

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

🤗Thank u didu fr this lovely OS. Luv you.

And kunchu di.
Thank u for penning this, as i felt life in your writing.

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
🤗Thank u didu fr this lovely OS. Luv you.

And kunchu di.
Thank u for penning this, as i felt life in your writing.

🤗 🤗