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-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

😭😭😭 This is so painful. Itni chulbuli ladki itna dard bhara story bhi likh sakti hai? Very well written👏 Amazing,Payal👍🏼 Feel very sad.Arjun has a video of Roshni killing? Goodness.Loved SaRjun scene in the last.I hope creatives bhi aisa hi kuch dikhaye.

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

zuby ji 🤗
I m dancing truly
i m on cloud 9
ur coment made my day...
me chulbuli haye thank u thanku
nw d os!
yup its a concept like dis...
cvs i dnt knw uf wo kya dikhaye bt hopefuly 1% bi aisa hua to me shayad aur kuch na chahu...
love u
ps. read dua n dnt kil me!

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shona14

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Posted: 12 years ago

kunchu and payal superb part dear dear 👏👏🤗🤗

i liked this part yipee arjun ne sik ko hara diya...

sik deserved that ..

aww roshni's words ..sik ne khud ko hi goli maar li 😲

last part was touching

arjun screaming roshni showed his pain he was letting his pain to come out in that way...

and mujhko ye zindagi...

superb os...😊

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Are wah re somu di...
ini jaldi padh liya :D
concept like dis
aww arjun bhaiya pain!
thanku di fr reading n liking 🤗

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shona14

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Posted: 12 years ago

haan yaar kya kare interest tha ye os padhne mein so jaldi jaldi padh liya😃

u r most wecum payaliya beta🤗

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona14
haan yaar kya kare interest tha ye os padhne mein so jaldi jaldi padh liya😃
u r most wecum payaliya beta🤗

Love u di 🤗 🤗

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shona14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Love u di 🤗 🤗

i love u too payaliya 🤗🤗🤗

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow... payal and kunchu...

you guys did a great work...

uska khud ka ego le duba...

love it...

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aptl123
wow... payal and kunchu...
you guys did a great work...
uska khud ka ego le duba...
love it...

Thank u di 🤗

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was so beautiful Payal and Helna...😊

I could really visualize the entire incident...😭

A man stabbing his own wife... 😡 and Arjun's reaction to it was so natural... he had lost his Roshni...

And I really don't even want to imagine what was in CD... nooo...🤢

And Sikandar got what he truly deserved...😡

Touching...😭

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