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Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Awww Payal dii!!! continue karo naa plss pls

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: --ARIA--
Awww Payal dii!!! continue karo naa plss pls

Khatam
lol ye ni btaya ye kaise tha :p

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PoohLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Amazing one guys,it was emotional and could really feel arjun pain in that...just loove loove it👏🤗

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: PoohLover
<font color="#9900FF">Amazing one guys,it was emotional and could really feel arjun pain in that...just loove loove it👏🤗</font>

Thank u bharti behna 🤗
Glad u like it n feel it.. :)

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Unknown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

payal di!!!!! it was amazing👍🏼👍🏼...

like the power of love is sooo evident & very visible in arjun's character... it was emotional & i felt really sorry for arjun.. the guy just seem to get a break these days!!!!

and his want to avenge his love's life... haiii, maaar daalllaa😳

roshini's imgae appearing & arjun talking... hai tear-jerking😳.. and sikky shot himself *gasp*, even he has a little moral sense🤔 (a little tooo late don't u thing brother (this one was for sikky)😛)

should have conti with this OS didu👏..

now me off to read 'Dua'😆😆

and last but not the very least thanks to @kunchu as welll for the collaboration😊 🤗

Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Awwie pari
thanx fr d long cment dear
no doubt sik a jerk
glad u like it 🤗
kunchu di mujhse bhi elder h so cal her di
warning pls take tisue
paper fr reading dua!
<3
my dream dua ss..!!

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Unknown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Awwie pari
thanx fr d long cment dear
no doubt sik a jerk
glad u like it 🤗
kunchu di mujhse bhi elder h so cal her di
warning pls take tisue
paper fr reading dua!
<3
my dream dua ss..!!

hehehehe, i like writing long comments😈...

i like very much didu...

oh sorrry kunchu di... i didn't know... sorrry😳😳..

& thanks payal di for pointing that out😳😳

okie, reading dua after dinnnerrr... chinese!!!! yummmy

okie will be ready with tisssues😃😃

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: gujjupari

hehehehe, i like writing long comments😈...
i like very much didu...
oh sorrry kunchu di... i didn't know... sorrry😳😳..
& thanks payal di for pointing that out😳😳
okie, reading dua after dinnnerrr... chinese!!!! yummmy
okie will be ready with tisssues😃😃

🤗

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Part one

oh my god! i was so not in the picture of seeing arjun break up like this, it bought tears to my eyes and i was holding them long to make my vision clear so that i could read further. me so touched that i am not able to read next part..and moreover, tune mere jana is my favorite i cried knowing the back story of this song too so imagining arjun in it was more painful!

but curiosity gets the cat, it took me too. i literally cried and then stopped abruptly to read more.

phew!

part two

awww this was awesome, no dragging a part and finishing the business at hand! me liking it! yay! finally sik dead and arjun happy, (happy to kill him).

this was so awesome, i didnt know you write so well..i am sorry i couldnt reply fast coz i lost the link and then searched it out again..it was difficult coz this post was made by kunchu na..so thought it was some other ff..but finally read the title and read it full!! aah..bliss! reading sik die..!

well continue writing okay! loved it, payal!

MUSKAAN.