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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww soo cute... " Sab tumhaari wajah se" GOSH!! i Laughed soo loudly that ek minute k liye to main hi shock ho gyi thi!!! LOL!!! nyways,, AMAZING UPDATE!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
superb ending :) loved it
she was so lost in him :)
loved their confession :)
love the way arjun proposed her :) and riya fainted 😆
the hospital scene was so funny 😆 poor arjun fainted after hearing that riya gave birth to twins
loved the name discussion
thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
So cute climax loved the way arjun fainted. Great work. Do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Omg me rofling
wat a end..
pari dear tumne dil jeet liya
i really enjoy ur writing
loved it..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
superrrbbb endinggg!!!!

hehehe!! its soo awsomeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
omg omg omg fabulous update great ending
loved this ariya so much
omg 1st riya fainted after arjun proposed her🤣
now arjun fainted in labour room😲🤣
loved the way riya taunting him for the labour pain🤣
still they r fighting like babies even after they got babies😆
omg these guys r freaking adorable😳😉
loved them so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
kitna cute update!!!!!!!hayyeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
riya in labour nad shouting at Arjun...sweet!
and arjun behosh hogaya🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
i was laughinhg reading the whole update!
aapki writing ko kisis ki nazar na lagaye!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
wow...fantastic SS...enjoyed reading t a lot...hope u will come up with another one soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
loved the ending
both parts were amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...!!!
their kiss was hot...!!!😉☺️ loved it...!!
lol riya fainted after arjun proposed her...!!!😆😉
hahaha riya cursing him for the labour pains...🤣!!!🤣
omg ye kya arjun fainted in the delivery room...!!!🤣
arjun riya ka kuch nai ho skta they are still fighting like babies😆😉
loved the ending...!!! amazing...!!!

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