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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
hey nice story dear

Arjun n ria fighting as kids

kitna ladte hain dono😆

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesme concept ..
thx 4 PM.
jaldi continue karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awsum start...!!!
loved it...!!!
riya and arjun fighting...!!!!😆
riya pulled arjun's hair...!!!!😆
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!
plz pm me whenever you update...!
thanx...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
e lo ji...main wapas aa gayi with second part... tussi enjoy shenjoy karo...
aur humka thoda replyia karke bataidiyo ki kaisan laga ee story...😉



part 2

"maa….. maaa…. Meri badminton kit kahan hai?mujhe nahin mil rahi hai……. Maa…….."


"uffho Arjun… ye kya hai beta…tum kya apni koi bhi cheez apni jagah nahin rakh sakte?? Tumne kal classes se aane ke baad usse kahan rakha tha?"


"maa maine to usse cupboard ke nichle hisse mein rakha tha… ab wo wahan nahin hai… mujhe der ho raha hai…"

Suddenly they hear giggling sound. Yes ofcourse, who else can it be….. the prankster Riya. Arjun rushed to balcony and saw riya waiting for himwith his bag.

"riya, wo mera hai… what are you doing with it? Mujhe dedo, I am getting late."


"haha Raute…. Sapne mein…. Agar ye chahiye to aake lelo…. Aao aao….aake lelo…. Mere peeche bhaag sakte ho kya tum?? Pumpkin.."

"maa dekho na….she is teasing me again… main healthy hoon to who mujhe ye sabhi naamon se chidati hai…"


"arju… wo tumse choti hai na…. usse gussa nahin karte beta…."


"choti my foot. Ab usse mujhse koi nahin bacha sakta. Riya…………."


"beta ruko….. uff kya karoon main inka.."



Arjun ran out chasing her… yes he was a bit fat…onl a bit. Mere 87 kgs….. and she was lean. She made him run after her every corner of the garden, climb up and down every stair they could see ahead. Arjun was tired. Of course yes, he ll be….


Suddenly, "AAhhh….mamma main gir gayi…. Aahhh…. Mammaa…. Aunty…. Please koi meri help kardo….." she cried hard…

Arjun ran as fast as he could. He sat on his knees next to her.


"kisne kaha tha tujhse ki itni tezi se bhagne ko? Gir gayi na? clumsy thi, clumsy ho aur clumsy rahogi. Dikhao kahan chot lagi hai?"

Riya showed her knees, which were badly bruised.


He gave her his hand so that she could get up. She tried but pain shot up in her ankles and her knees. She sat down cring…


"mujhse nahin hoga Arjun….. its paining…. Hey bhagwaan…. Kya main langdi ho gayi? Arjun ab main kabhi chal nahin paaungi…. Hamesha do laathi ke sahaare pe chalna hoga… I ll look so ugly with crutches….. arju…"


"agar ek aur word boli na to sach mein main teri taange tod dunga nautanki…. Pata nahin maa aur aunty tumhe kaise jhelte hai…."


He bent down and swooped her in his arms and started walking towards the house..

She kept staring at him…


" aditi kya hum sapna dekh rahe hai??? Mujhe jaldi se chutki kaato"

"ouch, aditi….."

"manu, ab inme dosti to hai… ghagde ke peeche chupa concern hume aaj tak dikha nahin tha" aditi said cheekily….

"bhagwan kare ye sach ho…" replied manu


In the room

"tune meri help kyun ki? Mujhe uthaya kyun? Main to tujhe pasand nahin hoon na…?"


"will you shut up for two min riya? Lemme first treat yoyur wounds… thuds dard hoga…." With that he twisted her sprained ankle and she screamed loudly.


"mere kaan ke parde phaadne hai kya tujhe..?"


"tune aisa twist kyun kiya? Aur tune abhi tak mere sawaal ka jawaab nahin diya….."


"1stly, tera ankle theek karne ke liye. Answer for the second is kit um meri dost ho. Bhale hi we fight you are my 1st friend, even before sameer.. samjhe ya…samjhau??"

This was their life when Arjun was 16 and riya 14……



to be continued...
may be one o two parts more to go...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
aaww...😛.
that was shhoo cute...Reallyy...
plzzz update soon n add me too plz..i dnt knw how to send request...n pmz me for all ur stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

aaww...😛.

that was shhoo cute...Reallyy...
plzzz update soon n add me too plz..i dnt knw how to send request...n pmz me for all ur stories...


definitely i ll... do accept my buddy request dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Love this.
Dosti. Jhagde ke peeche chupi hai.
Aur pyaar, dosti ke peeche.

Lovely concept.
And.
Very well written.

Kudos to you!

And. I'm definitely looking forward to your next update.

I've sent you a buddy request. Please do accept.
And. If possible, do send me PMs for your Ariya stories!
Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Awww arjun was so sweet,agar mein riya ki jagah hoti toh arjun ko chodthi hi nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
so cute and sweet
they are so lovely when kids😳
haye Arjun was 87kgs😆
but loved his concern😳
please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Lol arjun 87kgs rofl..
sweet update dear
loved it

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