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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Loved the new avatar of Arjun.
Haww...
Arjun,possessive of Riya...
Thts nice.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Loved it what a superb entry continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Wow too good.
kya entry thi Arjun ki.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Read alll parts!!! Amazing Story!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice update 😊
awesome entry
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
great update :) loved it
riya missing him and she called him ullu ke patthe 😆
riya using arjun's dialogue samjhe ya samjhaun :)
ao arjun is back that too in new avatar
love the way he saved riya
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awsum update...!!!
awww riya missing arjun...!!!😳
kya dhansu entry mari arjun ne...!!! loved it...!!!
aate hi riya ko bacha lia sooo cute...!!!
loved arjun's new avatar...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Hey.. Read ur story in one go.. Loved it... Specially the entry of our hero...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
tadaaa... last part of the story... hope you all like it...


He grabbed riya's hand and marched off taking a stunned riya with him……

Riya was too stunned to speak anything…. She just went after him looking at his face….


Was this the face she remembered????? Absolutely no….. it was not….. the arjun she knew was fat, lallu types….. but this guy who called himself as her Arjun…. Well Her Arjun, well built, muscular, handsome more like a greek god😉… his gait, his attitude was killer. She looked around and saw every girl in the campus drooling over him.😳😃


She felt jealous. Yes jealous… how could not she be jealous???? It was soo natural…… he was her only friend and only hers. She was not ready to share him with any one for that matter.😊😊😊


Arjun dragged her to locker room and bolted the door. He spinned her and said with loads of anger.


"who told you to pick a fight with him?"😡

"I did not." She replied equally flaring😡

"why did not you call for help"

"nobody helped me."

"and why is that?"

"he is college bully. That's why"

"why din you kick his a**…. Bachpan main to mujhe kabhi nahin bhakshi tumne????" he added with a smirk….😆😆😉

:wo…..wo…."😛

"wo kya riya…."


"wo kya ka kya matlab???? And you so called mr ASR….. could not you call me even once in last 1 month??"

😃

"riya tumhari memory na pehle se aur bhi zyada week hogayi hai…. I din call you from last two months doll…."

😊

"not again…. Please RJ…. Call me anything but not doll…. Please….."

😊

"aaj bhi tere paas wo doll hai na jo maine diya tha???"


"yeah in my room…. Wait. How do you know?"


"ofcourse maine tere room mein dekha…"

😊

Tu ghar se aaya hai? Kisi ne mujhe kuch bataya kyun nahin??"


"I told them not to…."

Well now Arjun was 25 and riya 23, doing her masters in forensic science… 😊(arjun ka profession, ye aap decide karlo😉)


"kyun?"

"I wanted to surprise you"

"and that is because???"

"to see your dimple smile"

"why?"

"it makes me happy?"

"kaise?"

"pata nahin….. I feel all good…. "

"main na hasti to kya hota?"

"i feel bad"

"kyun?tumhe kya farak padta hai ki main hasu ya na hasu?"

"farak padta hai dammit…"

"why?"

"cos I LOVE YOU…."😊😊😃😃😃😃😃

"finally"

"huh????!!!"

"finally you told me…. Pata nahin mujhe kya ho raha tha itne dinon se… I would just think of you…. Miss you…. Fantasize about you…. I was confused…. I could not analyse my situation…. Was it love o just infatuation….but meri age to infatuation ki nahin hai… to it must be love…. May be I love you…or not I am not sure… but thanks for telling me you love me… it will help me sort out my feelings for you… and……."😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆


"kitna bolti hai ye…."


He swooped down and captured her lips in his…. He slowly nibbled her lowerlip and then ran his tongue over her upper lips…. He took it slow, their first ever kiss….sweet, soft….he coaxed her to open his mouth pleading to allow him to taste her… he pulled her close to him by pulling her by her waist, crushed her to his chest. She gasped and gained access to her mouth and explored her sweet taste every corner…..


They broke the kiss for air.

"wow ri…. You tatse soo good… intoxicating…."

Riya blushed heavily under his gaze…


"riya… I love you, loved from our childhood…. All this time….. I wanna be with you….today tomorrow forever….'

He went on one knee, held out a ring…"will you marry me????"


Riya was too shocked to react…. Every thing was too fast for her…. She suddenly fell on him, unconscious….😆


"ri, ri….. getup dammit……" took his cell out and caleed someone. "sam, keep the car ready… yeah I proposed and she fainted…. Yeah… I ll come now……"

He lifted her in his arms and carried her out in front of whole college…..

After 3 years….

"sab tumhaari wajah se….. aaahhh…… mammaa….

DON'T TOUCH ME YOU DODO…. AAAHHH…..

"

"riya please dekho calm down baby….. don't take stress…"

"stress….STRESS….. AAHH…. I am going to labour and you are asking me nt to stress…. I am in paiAAAHHH………"

"I hate you arjunnn…. Aaahhh"

"ri…….its ok…. Sab theek hojayega…"

"yeah everything will and should. You will be next to me in the delivery room with me. Samjhe ya samjhau???? DOCTOOORRR…. ITS PAINING A LOT……"

Soon she was in delivery room….arjun with her… sameer and the duo's mom's were waiting out…..

After about 4 hours….

Congradulations…. Ek ladka and ek ladki… healthy babies hai…😊.. riya is fine too😊…. But her husband…… well he fainted and is not back to consiousness….."😆😆😆😆😆

Everyone outside started laughing…..

Arjun was up after some time and saw his beautiful wife, and his two nanhi si jaans sleeping peacefully… jhe bent down and kissed his teeno baby's forehead….. riya woke up instantly and hugged him…..

"thank you soo much riya…."

"I must thank you Arjun…. Bdw what shall we name them???"

"hmmm…..amrita and ansh????"

"na… reema and rohit…."

"noways…. How about ariya and akash?"

"ariya nice…. Arnav and not akash…"

Akash"

"arnav"

"riya akash"

"Arjun it will be arnav"

"akash "

"arnav"

"akash'

"arnavvv"

Their family stood out watching them fight like 10 year old kids. They sighed and spoke unitedly….

"in donon ka kuch nahin ho sakta…. "😆😆😆


the end...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
OMG!!!!!
I was waiting for the update,and u did it...
Yay...
Me first to comment.
Love u Pari dear.
I just loved it.
Hawww...
Arjun fainted in labour room...
That was kinda hilarious.
Wow...
Nice names have been chosen for their kids.
Loved the whole story,a lot.

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