OS: Itni Si Guzarish part 2A pg6 Updated

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

nice update di

this was mainly fb

riya has done that bcoz she was brought in such way

and also she didn't know more abut arjun and roshni

bt she s feeling bad 4 wat she has done

waiting 4 the nxt part...

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shona14

@shona14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

omg beautifull part 👏
never thought that ria bhi aisi ho sakti hai
i hav thought of ria as sweet gal bt strong and expressive ria bhi achchi lagi mujhe
i luvd this part the way she proposed him hmm mujhe to darr lag raha tha ye arjun pata nahi kya karega

keep it up tani update soon😊

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

ohoo noo kashh riya pahele arjun n roshni ki reltionshp ko dtl mein jaan leti...

den ye sab nahi hota

poor arjun ...roshni ki diary ko save nahi kar paya

he strtd blmmng him slf 4 nt able sv hr things

strtd to hate riya ...nrmalyy ye to hona hi tha

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

superb update...!!!

loved it...!!!

wish riya hadn't behaved like that and should have got details about roshni before saying or doing anything...!!!

awww arjun blaming himself for not able to save roshni's things...!!!😭

glad that she felt guilty of her behaviour after knowing the truth...!!!

continue soon...!!!

cant wait for the next part...!!!

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

My dear Purva,

This is a strong chapter, and you have managed to get the essence of Riya's arrogance and headstrongness. She is so insufferable that if this is what you intended her to be, you can take a bow for that.

But, my dear, you cannot make me understand her or empathise with her in the slightest. If she had been my daughter, I would have taken a stout slipper to her and whacked her till she was unable to sit on her backside for a full month. In fact, I would blame whoever it was who brought her up so badly - not just to think that she could and must get whatever she wanted at any point of time, but to have no respect for others and their feelings.

There is no way I can understand a girl who is so lost to any sense of propriety that she literally throws herself at a man. It is cheap behaviour that is simply not acceptable, and there is nothing you can say to whitewash it. She would have been well served if Arjun had been a cad, had an affair with her, and then ditched her, when she would have had no one to blame but herself.

Nor am I saying this because I am old fashioned. Good behaviour and sound principles never go out of fashion, even for fictional characters!

Shyamala Aunty

Most of the part is in flashback this time..actually the whole part.

PART 2 A

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

purva awesome as always...loved it to the core
u have written emotions of arjun very well
riya is so arrogant na...
continue soon
thanks for pm
sry for commenting late

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hi tani 🤗...beautifull work dear...plot is diffrent and too good...but y riya dying aisa mat karo na😭😭😭😭...well go ahead with ur idea...update soon

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

very good piece Purva😳

i dont know whether to agree to what Riya did or find her completely wrong

Inspite of everything, it was her first love and she did act very irresponsibly! she exagerrated a lot, but i guess her character and upbringing is partly to be blamed😭

while on the other side, i understand Arjun's anger also,who wouldnt have hated Riya in such circumstances😭

but i think sometimes we never really get the chance to correct our mistakes till it's too late😭

i was actually hoping that you'd save her by a miracle, but i guess when i read Shyamala Aunty's post, it would completely defeat the whole concept of your OS😭

so please continue, i' m waiting with a box of tissues😭

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

i dont know wheather to justify riya or not.. what she did was wrong n really wrong.. cant blame arjun too.. but what matters is she repents for her behavior now..hope arjun is not too late... n she can fulfill her last wish...

still cant believe she is going to die 😭.. eventhough its highly unlikely.. i hope for a miracle!!!

update soon...

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Disha

@.Brok3nSoul.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Not to misunderstand her??...I wish i could do that.. 😭

How can somebody force themselves on somebody else??...Bad??..No that is an understatement...Horrible Attitude..!!

If I were at his place I would have slapped her the very moment she tried to force herself.. 🤢

No use of repenting now...she should have got her facts corrected in the very beginning..!!

I was hoping that she wouldn't die earlier, I was feeling really bad 😭...but if she does...I would not blame fate now!!...What goes around comes around, I guess! 😳

You depicted her arrogance quite well...I could relate her as person who live by the fact - "I always get what i want". 👏...

Edited by Sinner.gurl - 12 years ago