OS: Ehmiyat ch5 pg6 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Great story...very emotional...
Keep it up yaar!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ankita2804

zebbie... my comment proves how much skilled writer u r... that reaction was from d victim Ankita... not from d reader Ankita... :-) :-)
so dont say sorry :-) i didnt blame u...
bt i was very much driven into d story dt the reaction came on its own...

sorry if u felt anything bad... nt dt was nt all intentionally done... :-) :-) **hugss*




its ok,babes.
I didnt take anything seriously.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
great update :) loved it
ankita gave birth to a baby girl :) how sweet
feeling so bad for riya 😭 she lost her baby
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

awsum update...
very emotional...
feeling bad for ariya...
hope everything is okay soon...
continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
#25
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
omg really nice update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
good os. but i m😭😭😭.so sad ariya lost their child.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Ch4.

Shree goes out and looks for the Doc.
Shree: Doc,Riya phhir se behosh ho gayi hai. Ap jaldi chaliye.
Doc: Ok.Nurse,quick.

Shree brings in the Doc.The Doc checks her condition.After a while,the Doc speaks up.
Arjun(worried and nervous): Doc,Riya phirse behosh kyun hogayi? Usse kuch hua toh nahi?
Doc: Dekhiye,Mr.Rawte. Shock ke wajah se Riya behosh gayi hai.You shouldnt have told her the truth now,but,Sooner the Better.Saach batake apne accha kiya.Agar apne baad mein bataya hota,toh phir,saach sehen nahi karpati. She will regain consciousness within half an hour.
Arjun: Thank you,Doc.
Doc: Riya ko bohut pyaar aur care ki zarurat hai iss waqt.Ussse khush rakhiye,jokes sunaiye,hasaiye,etc. This will help her forget the pain.
Arjun: Sure.



After a while,Ankita and Rathod with their daughter comes inside Riya's ICU.They saw her sleeping.Ankita was feeling very guilty after seeing her.She ran towards Riya.She held her hands and started crying.
Arjun went to her and patted her shoulders.
Ankita turned around and hugged Arjun.
Ankita(In tears): Arjun,i am really sorry.Meri wajah se Riya ne apna baccha khoya hai.Main tumhara gunehgaar hu.Mujhe maaf kardo,Dada.
Arjun: Choti,apne aasu pocho.Yeh sab Bhagwaan ki marzi hai.Jo hua,so hua.aab humein yeh sab beeti baatein bhulke aage barhna hai.Riya ko sambhalna hai.Riya ka dekhbhal karna hai.Iss baar na sahi,par,agli bar,hum try zarur karenge,kyun,Rathod?
Rathod: Right,Arjun.

After half an hour,Riya gains consciousness.
She looks at Ankita and her daughter and gets emotional.Tears fall from her eyes.Ankita goes forward and wipe her tears.
Ankita: Riya,aab rona nahi.Yeh sab Bhagwaan ka marzi thha.Beeti baatein yaad rakhke apne aap ko dard maat do.Hum hai na tumhara khyal rakhne keliye.Waise,tum toh meri bacchi ki maasi hui.Maasi toh maa ke samaan hoti hai.Hum dono milke iss do maa o ka pyaar denge.
Riya(in tears): Do maao ka pyaar deke main isski maa toh nahi banjaungi.Phhir bhi,agar tum aur Rathod sir chaho,toh,main tumhari bacchi ka naam rakhsakti hu.Maine jo apne bacche ke baare mein socha thha.usse jo sanskar dena chahti thhi,wohi sanskar main tumhari baby ko dena chahungi.
Rathod: Sure,Riya.Tumhari yeh wish bhi puri hogi.Agar,sab se pehla haq tumhare aur Arjun ka banta hai.
Riya: Thank you,Bhaiya.

Precap: Riya keeps a name for Ankita and Rathod's baby.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
poor riya!!
kya woh kabhi bhi maa nahi ban pavogi??😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
whole update was so emotional...
😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.
cant able to stop tears from my eyes...
cant able to see riya and arjun in pain...

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