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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
whole update was so emotional...😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

awsum update...
very emotional...
poor riya... :( so much in pain...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch5.

Few days pass by.Riya starts to forget the pain.She feels the loneliness inside her and Arjun's life.When alone,she starts cursing herself for snatching away Arjun's happiness. But,for the sake of Arjun,she remains happy. Shree and Chotu come to visit her in her home.They always try to make her feel happy by telling her jokes.
She smiles but not from the heart.

After 1 month.

"Shyam,jaldi karo.dekho zara,Panditji aaye ya nahi. Chotu,saare security checks ko dekho.Check if something has been left or not.Shree,check whether the food has been made or not.Arjun,kahaan hai tu?", Rathod ordered everyone.
Arjun: Main yahin hu,Rathod.
Rathod: Thanks,Riya ko le aane keliye.
Arjun: Its ok.Isme thanks bolne wali kya hui? Riya teri behen hai,aur,Ankita meri.Usse toh yahaan hona chahiye thha.Waise,where are they?
Rathod: Ankita and Riya are making my baby get ready.
Arjun: Hmm... Chalo.lagta hai Panditji aagaye hai.


In the hall.

Rathod and Ankita sits with their daughter on the ground where the pooja and the naamkaran ceremony is being held.Panditji chants the mantras,applies mangal tikas on Rathod,Ankita and their daughter's forehead.
Chotu and Shree look at them.
Shree: Saach mein,Chotu.Humari Ri bohut strong hai.Dekh,kaise apne gham ko bhulake Rathod sir aur Ankita ki beti ke naamkaran sanskar mein aaye hai.
Chotu: Baat toh sahi hai.Samajhna hoga,apni Ri humare Arjun sir ki biwi aur humari dost jo hai.

After a while,Panditji checks through the horoscope chart made for their daughter.
Panditji: Rathod ji,apki bacchi ki kaam bohuthi shubh hai.Bhagwaan ne apke ghar Maa Saraswati aur Maa Lakshmi ke roop mein apki beti ko bheja hai.Apki beti ka naam,"M" ya "E" shabd se shuru hoga.Aap logo ne kuch naam socha hai?
Rathod: Panditji,meri behen ne meri bacchi keliye naam sochke rakkha hai. Kyun,Riya?
Riya: Haan,bhai. Agar aapki aur Ankita ki ijazat ho toh.
Ankita: Sure,Riya.
Rathod passes the baby to Riya.For a moment,Riya thought,she was holding her own baby daughter.Her eyes welled up.It was noticed by Arjun.He entwined his hands with her and assured her and encouraged to go on.
Riya nodded her head.
Riya: Panditji,iss pyaari si bacchi ka naam,"Mehetva Sameer Rathod" hoga.Pyaar se hum sab isse Ehmiyat kehke pukarenge.
Rathod and Ankita were shocked.
Ankita: Meri bacchi ka isse accha naam aur ho hi nahi sakta,kyun Sam?
Rathod: I totally agree with u,Ankita.I loved the name a lot. Thanks,Riya.
Riya: Welcome. Yeh hai,
Mehetva Sameer Damsingh Rathod,aur,iska nickname,Ehmiyat.
Panditji: Wah. Riya beti.Naam bohut hi shubh aur accha hai.Mubarak ho sabko.Aajse,iss bacchi ko Mehetva Sameer Damsingh Rathod ke naam se jani jayegi.

After an hour,after the ceremony ends.

Rathod: Thank You so much,Riya,for keeping my daughter's name.I am blessed having you as my sister.
Riya: No,bhai.Infact,i am blessed,that,i got the opportunity to name your child,Ehmiyat.
Ehmiyat ka matlab,"Importance".
Hum sabke jeevan ka Ehmiyat.
Humari zindagi mein Ehmiyat ki bohut hi zyada ehmiyat hai,kyun?
Arjun: You are right,Riya.
Shree: Hmm... Agar,aap sab ki baatein khatam ho gai ho,toh,lets take a family picture,kyun rathod sir?
Rathod: Neki aur Puch Puch...

Shree makes everybody stand together,in a group.
The photographer starts clicking the pictures of everyone,with,"Mehetva Sameer Damsingh Rathod Ehmiyat."


The End.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

lovely update yr...
riya trying to be strong for arjun's sake...
awww riya ne bahut pyara naam rakha hai sam aur ankita ki daughter ka...
ooo the end? story itni jaldi khtam :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: devildiva21




lovely update yr...


riya trying to be strong for arjun's sake...


awww riya ne bahut pyara naam rakha hai sam aur ankita ki daughter ka...


ooo the end? story itni jaldi khtam :(





yup...
Story khatam,but,isska sequel chahiye ya nahi?
Jaldi batana?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hai zebbie
read it in one go
it was very emotional
riya's miscarriage and all
at last it had a happy ending
and abut having a sequel
ha i need one
waiting 4 that
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -SREE93-

hai zebbie

read it in one go
it was very emotional
riya's miscarriage and all
at last it had a happy ending
and abut having a sequel
ha i need one
waiting 4 that



oh!!!!!
Thanks a lot,for liking it.
Yup,i m going to write a sequel for it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
great ending :) loved it
love how riya was trying to be strong for arjun's sake :)
the name was so cute :)
why did you end it? :( that was such a good OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: fatima15

great ending :) loved it

love how riya was trying to be strong for arjun's sake :)
the name was so cute :)
why did you end it? :( that was such a good OS




thanks for liking it.
I ended this OS with a thought of writing a sequel of it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
lovely update yr...
riya trying to be strong for arjun's sake...

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