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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it was very nice...

liked d entire portrayal

Arjun fulfilled his ultimate promise

Amazing yaar

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rparash

@rparash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesomely penned down Arjun's emotions and outburst...
Loved it...images kept coming wen I was reading it, as if it's real...:)
Its truly amazing..,:)

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Aukview

@Aukview

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Meant to write this thank you note a long time ago...anyways better late then never 😛

Thank you alll so much for those comments and likes!! Six pages of awesome comments!! Can't say it enough times thank youuu!!

To everyone who asked me to continue...I am sorry guys, always meant it to be an OS. So, I am going to leave it at that...no continuation sorry...

❤️ Simar

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

nice start
i ll go for riya

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Amazing OS

emotions are well portrayed

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I think it should be sameer. no1 knows arjun's pain better than him

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow..

this is the first time i read an ff from Arjun's pov...loved it...

i always flet as much as a tough cop he is , after killing sikander he would feel hollow..

and u potrayed it awesome!!!!

obviously i want that person to be Riya!!!!

no one else!

ARIYA forever

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

i could feel the pain of arjun...

wat a beautiful nd emotional OS

loved it...!

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

very deep writing and expression of words ... please please it should be riya only no one else for arjun

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Aaliya....

@Aaliya_Fizz

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Wow awesome!
I hope to c something like ds happening in show as well..!
Brilliantly written!

p.s: it has to be sakshi..riya is no more..and aisha is for rathod;)

Edited by aliya_begh - 12 years ago