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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow ...

That was amazing :)

I don't know why but while reading this, all the while I had an image of Riya :)

So I'll assume "the person" as Riya :)

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nikki08

@nikki08

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

lovely...

wow Simar di...!! I am in love with this OS...just superb yaar...

even i had the same thought...that Arjun would become emotional...

wow...loved the way you have expressed his emotions...

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow.. wht an OS :) reallie gr8 work nd i surely prefer riya.. cox she is soft nd it suits her bst..:)

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

hey its amazing
riya can portray this better

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Me too thinks it should be riya as till now there is no anything between arjun and aisha whereas with riya there was something

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautiful!!

After longing for something so many years...on achieving it makes go go numb..

Awesome start!!

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

The POV of Arjun after sikander's death was protrayed beautifully. I too always feel that after fulfilling his avenge Arjun would loss his meaning of life,purpose to live.

but a warm hand around his shoulder only can make him move towards a new begining after a dreadful dream.

Even I agree with you. i would not go with this debate that whose hand would be in his shoulder to show him way of life,just want that the hand would never be withdrawn.

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

it was amazing😊...i cant explain it in words!
it was really an emotional start...its actually hard to imagine what he will go through once he avenges roshni's murder finally...u portrayed each n every emotion of his perfectly!
will be waiting for more...great start👏👏