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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

It was so well potrayed...
Really great..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

fantastic OS 👏 loved it

arjun's feelings were written beautifully :) very well written

i will go for riya :) as i can't really imagine aisha as the one comforting arjun... sorry if i offended anyone..

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

superb vry beautiful os..!!!👏

lvd it ...!!!

arjun's pain is described vry well...!!!

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lina.pushpa

@lina.pushpa

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow u hav portrayed arjun's emotion so nicely.. I too hav the feeling that when he complete his revenge , might be he would be completely broken bcoz now he don't have any reason to stay alive .. And while reading this i don't know why bt throughout the reading session i had been imagining Riya comforting Arjun , these are just my thoughts nd not to offend any ones feelings...

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Amazing Beautifully Written
Each Emotion Could Be Feltt
And My Vote Again Goes For My Ariya's Riya
Do Try Continuing This Please As An Ariya FF/SS
Please Please Please:/