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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello buddies,
This is my first os ever so I want pm anyone know this may be a crap it's a mere thought of mind. Please bear with me.

*Pyara Sach-

Jo Insan har waqt Sbki khushi chahata h
Sabke baare me Achcha sochta h,
Sabki fikr karta h
Wahi insan
Hmesha Akela reh jata h... Its true..

Arjun a super cop who has golden heart...wid amazing skills to solve any case...he never failed in any his mission till now...!!
as he is one of d best cop in d department so he has equally enemies...
he is a honest cop for whom duty come first.. he is married to a sweet angel name roshni who is teacher by profession...arni meet at during a school function of roshni as arjun is d chief guest of d function..but as said people who is honest hv to pay some value for their honesty...
department is very happy wid d work of arjun so d department decided to reward arjun for his work... arni goes together fr d ceremony bt destiny hv its own plan...d car in which arni travels have a bomb fitted by d enemy of arjun...arni together sit n goes to d ceremony by dat car...
unfortunately arjun busy wid a call in phone but roshni sees d bomb n throw arjun out of d car..
arjun unable to think what happens widin few seconds..! suddenly car blasts leaving arjun dumbstruck..people nearby in d way saw arjun unconscious n let him put in d hospital..
arjun at a critical condition...but doctor save him anyhow bt arjun becomes dead by inside...
he only rembers roshni face n d sweet moments spend wid her...he totally breakdown!!


Teri nigaahon ke teri hi raahon ke
Kareeb se gayi jindagi
Tujhe kyun dekha na tujhe kyun jaana na
Shikaayatein karu ya nahi
Thami hai yeh saansein, pari hai yeh aankhein
Sahu kaise abb yeh faasala

Bin tere bin tere bin tere...
Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere

Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere



Kuchh bacha hi nahi darmiyaan
Saans leti hai abb yeh duriyaan
Dil nahi jaanata raahon mein
Haath se haath chhute the kahaan
Kyun najar ke kinaare tute hai khaab saare tu bata
Suna suna sam hai khaali khaali jahaan hai abb mera
Bin tere bin tere bin tere...
Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere

Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere


Plzzz comment of u like it.

Thank you





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Payal! 🤗

Short and Nicely written! : )

Such a tragic death of Rosh! 😭

And i agree! 😕

Jo Insan har waqt Sbki khushi chahata h
Sabke baare me Achcha sochta h,
Sabki fikr karta h
Wahi insan
Hmesha Akela reh jata h..

P.s- love that song in the end! : (


And it wasn't crap at all! 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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first lines
well said n do continue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Payal... my dear sister🤗
This was such a beautiful OS... Short, Sweet, emotional👏
This really doesnt feel like your first attempt😉
Loved it to the core 👏 *Claps claps**
awww this was really heart touching for me...🤗
Write more short Os's dear😊 would love to read short ones😉
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wao true line dr,
sabki khushi chahane vala ,
last mein akela reha jata hai,
i feel bad for arjun ,
poor roshani,
What a tragic death,
tumhen to es concept per ss ya ff likhana chahiye,
anyway conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
payal : short n sweet story

🤗 for u

loved d lines in d starting

Roshni's tragic death😭

Expecting u to write more😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome Line..just amizing...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awesome. Its really good. Plz continue...I hope u'll do..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Res!!*edited*
Payaloo Congrats on your first work.
Its very nice.
The background story is quite different, so it feels fresh to read.
Over all, its amazing.
Love you Payaloo... You're very talented at writing dear.
Edited by Love_Arnie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was just awesome n brilliant dear
loved it so much
keep writing more

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