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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Aww.. great update :) lovd it.. thx for pm..:) continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...tumaare saansen hi kaafi tha raat guzaarne keliye...
wow wow...romantic...cute
cont soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
Omg ... I swear I never expected Arjun n Riya to have late night calls ...
Awww I just totally love the romantic Arjun n the blushing Riya n yes obviously their closeness ...
I even loved the end ...
Great update ...
Plz do update ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear Kunchu,

it is very touching, the depth of the emotional dependence on Riya that Arjun has developed.

In the romantic sequences in the old films, a favourite was the lover singing to his beloved over the telephone. But for a man to sit up for one and a half hours very late at night just listening to his sleeping love's steady breathing is something even very few poets would have imagined. It is extremely sweet and truly romantic.

Shyamala Aunty

ok then.. since all are ready for my new madness.. so am I..
thought of posting it tmrw.. but then had a second thought,.
I may be posting "yaroon.." daily, but may take time for "yadein.." since its not ready.. just wrote 2 chapters now..
so please be with me..
here I start..

YADEIN...

CHAPTER 1:


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear Kunchu,

it is very touching, the depth of the emotional dependence on Riya that Arjun has developed.

In the romantic sequences in the old films, a favourite was the lover singing to his beloved over the telephone. But for a man to sit up for one and a half hours very late at night just listening to his sleeping love's steady breathing is something even very few poets would have imagined. It is extremely sweet and truly romantic.

Shyamala Aunty

thanks a lot ... 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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late night romance on phone awww so sweet 😳
Ariya is already a couple..the naughty moments drove me to Ariyaland 😳
continue soon..loving it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
wonderful start :) loved it
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG VERY NICE PLZZZ DO UPDATE SOON!!!!:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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god itzzz dam gud i lvd ittt..
rat bhar batee uhmm😛 cuteee aww
m also worried 😭 nxt kya hga
superb updateee huggiee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot everyone...
loved your reviews...
next part...

CHAPTER 2:

The ETF team was as busy as usual. The paper works of the previous work were going on in full swing.. Riya, Chotu and Shree were so busy.

A few minutes back Riya had entered the hall with Arjun by her side. They looked normal. But Shree and Chotu looked at each other and smiled approvingly.😊 Its been a while that there is a change in the atmosphere. Arjun was not 'that' Arjun.. but Riya was still that Riya who could never hear a bad word about him. Shree and Chotu had a great time pulling her legs whenever they got a chance.

Arjun went to Rathod's cabin. And she was busy with them.. "tho Shree.. wo file commissioner ko kab bhejna hoga?" she asked still looking through the file. No response. She looked up'they both stood there, arms crossed at the chest with a serious look. She couldn't hold her smile. "are.. ab ye Arjun Sir ke pose mein kyu khade ho?? Punishment hai kya?"😆

"stop it Riya' mazaak ke bhi hadd hote hai.." Chotu said in Arjun's tone. She raised her eyebrows.😉

"Riya.. kaafi din se notice kar raha hu.. tum kaafi badal gaye ho.. na hamare saath baahar aaraha hai.. na teekh se phone pe baath kar raha hai.. bas uske saath hi ghoom raha hai.. kuch tho chuut raha hai.." Shree rubbed his figure just like Arjun.😉 She took a file and hit them both.

"kya keh rahe ho tum dono?? Sharam nahi hai kya?" they laughed together.😆

"Are.. Ri.. bolna.. baath kaha thak badi hai?? Propose kiya unhone?"

"Shree.. chup.. marvaoge kya.."😳 she looked at Rathod's cabin ensuring they were not there.

"aise kuch nahi hua.. par I think its going to happen soon.."😳

"Really?? Sir mentioned something..??" he was so excited.

"wo.. aur propose kare..?? thab tho shayad mein pure zindagi kunwari hi rahoge.. I think mujhe hi propose karna hoga' ho... aaj kal kya zamaana hai yaar... sub kuch hame hi karna padthe hai.." 😳 she laughed merrily until silenced by Rathod's glare..

"kya ho raha hai yaha?? Kaam pure hua hai ki nahi??"

"yes.. sir.. its over.." Shree stammered.

"tho fir ye shor sharaba kyu?? Aaram se bait nahi sakthe hai kya..?" he looked so angry. Arjun stood behind him with a serious face but with a small smile. He winked slightly at Riya. She blushed. 😳Arjun and Rathod went to the cabin again. She was still blushing.

Shree pushed her bringing out of the trance.. "oye.. hoe'kya shrmaana hai.. bilkul nayi naveli dulhan ki tharah.. "😳 she hit him again.. and said "shh'.." Arjun was on the way.. he smiled.. Riya as nayi naveli dulhan'😳

10 am:

"team we have a case.. kuch illegal transactions ke bare mein information mila hai' wo log illegal medicines supply karthe hai.. jo unhygienic hai.. jisse kaafi zyaada side effects bhi hotha hai.. ye log apna ek duniya banaya hai ke.. uske andhar ghusna bohot mushkil hai.. kuch bade hospitals ke kuch famous doctors un logonke saath milke yahi dava prescribe kathe hai.. wo bhi high cost mein.. jisse logonka thabiyath aur bigadthe hai.. aur un logon ko kaafi paisa bhi miltha hai.. is kaam se.. wo supplier, doctors, aur pharmacist ko bohot fayda horaha hai.."

"my God.. wo doctors jo patients ko bachana chahiye.. aise kaise kar sakthe hai" Riya was worried.

"sahi kaha tumne Riya.. aajkal paisa ek aisa cheez hogaye hai ke log usse pane keliye kisi bhi hadd thak ja sakthe hai.." Arjun supported her.

"So team.. jo information hamare pass hai.. wo iss file mein hai.. analyse it." All were going through the file..

someone knocked the door and peeped in. "saab.. aapke chai.." Arjun' s cutting chai wala came in. Riya went to fetch it. She paid him and took the glass. It was so hot. The glass slipped from her hand... her hand was a bit burned by the hot tea... and also the glass shattered on the floor. All looked upto her. Arjun was first to reach by her side and took her hands. "Are you alright? Zyada jale tho nahi?" he was concerned. 😳

She was a bit shocked. She was getting some negative vibes. She didn't hear him... but was looking at his face... she felt someone shaking her.

"RIYA...RIYA... kya hua?? Kuch bolthe kyu nahi ho tum??" he was worried seeing her pale face.

"so' sorry sir... wo' wo'glass.. garam the... toot gaya... sorry..." she stammered... and tried to pick up the glass pieces.

He was worried for her. He hasn't seen her so worried lately. Even her team was worried. He caught hold of her hand.

"it's ok Riya... bas ek glass hi tho hai... its ok.. jao' aur apne burn pe ointment lagao' Shree take her..." Shree pulled her up and took her. She was still looking at him.

"ye Riya ko kya hua? Ek glass tootne pe ithne dar gaya?" Rathod was confused.

"patha nahi..." even Arjun was confused. "Chotu ek dust pan leke aao.." he started picking up the glass piece. But he got a cut on his hands from the last piece. Blood was dripping from his hands. "Rawte... ab tum sambhalke kaam karo? Jao jaake dressing karo.."

Arjun went towards Riya's cabin. There Shree was consoling her. He waited at the door. "yaar Ri.. ithne tensed kyu horahe ho?? Ek glass hi toota hai.."

"patha nahi Shree.. bohot ajeebsa dar lag rah hai.. jaise kuch hone wale hai.." she had tears in her eyes. "Are.. Ri.. please ro math.. ab apna haath do.. Ointment lagana hai.. "😭 Arjun heard him.

Riya's tears.. he could never handle it. He went into the room. Shree was still asking for her hands.. but she was still. When Shree saw Arjun he stood up... he saw blood in his hands. "are.. sir.. ab aapko kya hua.. ithne blood??" Riya was shocked and turned to him. She went and held onto his hands. "ye kya hua aapko?? Ithne blood?" she was so worried.

Shree was really happy to see her concern. Arjun nodded to Shree to leave them. Shree went out keeping the tube in the first aid box. Riya was still looking at the injury. "Riya.. mein teekh hu.."

"chup rahiye aap.. ithna bhi ruff and tough dikhane ke zaroorath nahi hai.. baitiye.." she made him to sit on the chair' she sat opposite to him and started to do the dressing. Tears were dripping from her cheeks. He wiped it with his thumps. He winced a bit when she put the antiseptics.

She cupped the hand.. "sorry..sorry.." she gently blew on the cut. "dard horaha hai.?" He nodded negative. She kissed near to the wounds. "ab dard nahi hoga' ok??" he smiled at her, but her worry was still on the face. She completed the bandage and was about to get up when he caught her hands and made her sit down.

"kya hua tumhe..?ek glass tootke ithne kyu dar gaye? Aur ye tho bas ek choti si chot the.?"

"patha nahi Arjun.. bohot dar lag raha hai.. aise lag raha hai ki kuch hone wala hai.." she sobbed. He wrapped her and kept her close to his hearts.. he could feel his shirt getting socked. 😭

"kuch nahi hoga Riya.. kuch nahi hoga.. mein yahi hu.. and I promise mein tumhe kabhi chodke nahi jaunga.. I love you' always and forever'" she was weeping and he kept her close to him'

PRECAP:

Arjun... bleeding from head...
Riya: "ARJUN..." 😭
comments please...
CHAPTER 3 : PAGE 8
Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago

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