SSLove and Deception Ch5 Pg26 Up06/12,IMP Notepg28 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear! but tooo short! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arjun par chillaye bina Rathod ko chain nahin athi hain na, Lol.
Renuka is a suspicious character but I have this gut feeling she wasn't involved in this murder.
Mujhe tho PM par shak hain.
Good job Tina.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :)
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Tina,

I agree with Arjun, and can only attribute Rathore'e sreadiness to accept the suicide hypothesis to hi impatience and his desire to wrap such a tricky and high profile case up quickly and neatly. Where is the motive for a suicide? None.

This said, I am still in wait and watch mode and will await your next chapter before making any more comments.

Shyamala Aunty

like promised please find part b of chapter 4, hope everyone also enjoys this and i've managed to do justice to this story

so lets not bore anyone anymore, and here's

Chapter 4B


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Posted: 12 years ago
phewww awsome update dearrr loved ittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
its getting interesting...

Well waiting to know who the killer is...

nice update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...
case is building up and suspence too
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Posted: 12 years ago
great... its getng intrstng ..:) continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thanks to all those who have liked and commented on my updates.
i feel really happy when people like what i write😳
so like promised here's the third and final part to Chapter 4😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Well as promised, here's chapter 4C, which will bring some light to the case in general or maybe not...😆

Chapter 4C

Everyone were waiting patiently for Chotu to return, but when he returned he was all alone.

"Mr Karti kahan hein?" Arjun asked Chotu.

"Woh Sir, woh kahin nahi mila. Meine ousse phone bhi karna chaha, but woh phone hi nahin outha raha hein!" Chotu replied, " And then none of the security have seen him going out yet!"

"Shree ouska phone trace karo?!" Rathore immediately ordered Shree, "we'll know if he's here or not at least."

Everyone waited for shree to do his work, and finally it appeared that he was still in the house, at least his mobile was. They all followed Shree's guide and went to look for him. While following shree's leads, they finally found themselves in the underground parking of the house. They could see a car with the door opened in the left corner. They took out their guns and slowly approached it. As they neared, they could see someone resting his head on the wheel's of the car, but they were still too far to identify who it was!

"Bahar niklo gari se?!" Rathore shouted and everyone waited for that person to get out. But unfortunately the body wasn't moving at all, in fact it seems that it hadn't even heard them.

Rathore used his hands to hint to Riya and Chotu to go round the car on the other side, and he again repeated his order to that person inside to get out. But nothing. They all grew suspicious about it, and went towards the car fully cautious that it maybe be a trap. As they got nearer they could see that it was a lady, and she was lifeless. Arjun put his gun behind his back, and finally used his hand to lift the head up, they all were shocked on seeing that it was Renuka and she was almost not breathing. Shree checked her pulse, and said, "her heartbeats are decreasing slowly. We must rush her to the hospital, otherwise we'd lose her!"

Rathore wasted no time, and moved Renuka's body behind, got in the car with chotu, and both rushed to the nearby hospital, but not without ordering Arjun and the rest of his team members to look for Mr Karti and to check on the PM.

Arjun and the other's immediately rushed to the PM's study to check if he was safe, but unfortunately once they were outside, they couldn't open the door to go inside. Arjun and Shree knocked repeatedly, but nothing. Finally both decided to break the door open. The sight that awaited when they opened the door was horrifying. In front of them laid a dead body bathing in his blood, and next to it a man standing with a knife dripping with blood and looking scared.

Just then Arjun phone started to ring, Arjun took the call. It was Rathore telling him that they hadn't been able to save Renuka, she had died on the way to the hospital. They'd be sending her body for post mortem to investigate the cause of her death, since she had no other traumatic signs on her body. Arjun just mumbled a yes.

"Rawte, kya hua? Tum choop kyun ho?" Rathore shouted through the phone.

"It's too late, he's dead Rathore, he's dead" Arjun repeated.

"Who's dead?" Rathore asked.

So who according to you is dead?

come on dont be shy? please share your views on this😉

hope this update was upto the expectations.

dont worry, i wont be eating up your head too much with this case, will probably be ending it within next 2-3 chapters😉

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