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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

God you gave me a shock with the dead Renuka!! And who is dead now?😲
Please update soon before I die out of curiosity...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Well, Tina, it seems to me that there are too many bodies littering the place, and if the latest corpse is either that of the PM, or the man with the knife is the PM, I must tell you that it strains one's credulity.

In the PM's house, there is practically no privacy, and there are security guards and servants all over the place. There would have been a guard outside the PM's study all the time. I cannot understand how such large scale killings can take place in such a tightly guarded environment, but I shall look forward to your sorting it all out in the next few chapters.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: haruhi26
Well as promised, here's chapter 4C, which will bring some light to the case in general or maybe not...😆
Chapter 4C

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Oh no! Renuka's dead, and who else is dead? Can't wait to read more!

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Nice update :) i think minister is dead

update soon

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

who is dead ???? i want to know update soon!!!!!!!!😃

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Well, Tina, it seems to me that there are too many bodies littering the place, and if the latest corpse is either that of the PM, or the man with the knife is the PM, I must tell you that it strains one's credulity.

In the PM's house, there is practically no privacy, and there are security guards and servants all over the place. There would have been a guard outside the PM's study all the time. I cannot understand how such large scale killings can take place in such a tightly guarded environment, but I shall look forward to your sorting it all out in the next few chapters.

Shyamala Aunty

Good observation😆

Frankly i dont know much about the PM's house and security, except what i already watched in movies before.

and i agree that there's not much privacy in such a place...

now for the lack of servants, most were out due to the festival of karva chauth from the previous day, and due to the death of Mrs Simi it was agreed that noone would enter till the investigation doesnt get over.

Aha, now for the lack of security guards, well mainly all are found outside, and very little inside in my story, cause there's is CCTV almost everywhere in the house, and someone monitoring it 24hr round.

and well the PM being alone, then the only explanation was that he wanted to remain alone after what he has gone through.

N well i can't say more about the rest cause then i'd be giving everyone the hint of who's the killer...

Trust me, i'd make use of each errors and loopholes i left in my story later to my advantage😳

But thanks for pointing them out to me😳

i love critical analysis😆

n yep in Renuka's case, i never said she was murdered or anything, just that she was unconscious and gradually her heartbeats decreasing, that also is a form of suspense😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM
Hey.. I know who's it!! Its either the PM(will u risk to kill the pm,no u wont I think!) or Mr. Katri or may be someome else...!!
Actually i dun wanna kill the suspense of ur story.. So m not tellin u..!!🤣
jokes apart!!
Gr8 job dear... The suspense is just edge of the seat types!!
Its like m watching the serial...
Waiting for the mystry to unfold..!!
But if you're ending the case then is it the end of the ss too?? I mean it had vry less ArHea till now!!
Thanks for the pm...
Take care and update soon!!

😆 so you dont wanna kill the suspense, hence not telling me about the killer and victm,

good one shuchi