LIFE GOES ON..completed(PLEASE LOOK TO PG 31 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow ! i just finished reading all the parts they are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼 plz pm when u update plz plz!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear,
I am the most new reader of your FF..I know after listening this you might be angry on me but I really want to appologize for not reading it before..I hope you will accept it 😳

Coming to the updates,I have read it in one go & I was like reading any novel contains all emotions of life,duties,passions of human being 😃

The first few parts where the letters were described between two besties filled my eyes with tears 😭 the bond between them was like a magic.Its taken my heart away 😊

The journey of ETF &Arjun from Riya to Sapna,from consoling Sapna to befriends with her,from duties to their lives were heart touching 😛

I know that I have written so long but just could not help myself from expressing it..you are a brilliant writer dear 👏 👏 I will be waiting for it from now desparately..If possible do pm me 😃
love,
Sree 🤗🤗
Edited by KiSha13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
nice chapter
precap was intersting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: KiSha13

Hi dear,
I am the most new reader of your FF..I know after listening this you might be angry on me but I really want to appologize for not reading it before..I hope you will accept it 😳

Coming to the updates,I have read it in one go & I was like reading any novel contains all emotions of life,duties,passions of human being 😃

The first few parts where the letters were described between two besties filled my eyes with tears 😭 the bond between them was like a magic.Its taken my heart away 😊

The journey of ETF &Arjun from Riya to Sapna,from consoling Sapna to befriends with her,from duties to their lives were heart touching 😛

I know that I have written so long but just could not help myself from expressing it..you are a brilliant writer dear 👏 👏 I will be waiting for it from now desparately..If possible do pm me 😃
love,
Sree 🤗🤗


thanks a lot dear friend...😳 its really great to know that you are liking it... didn't know that my attempt would make me this much happy..
now to all the writers over here in Arjun forum..I have read every single one of them.. keep up your work buddies...👏👏
thanks again.. will try to update soon... bye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update

In Precap, Is he flirting with her??? Fingers crossed for an YES
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
thanks everyone... hear comes the next part...


CHAPTER 13 :

The case was solved soon. All the arm dealing was stopped at right time. Latheef and his gang were caught by Rathod and his team. After all formalities they left to visit Arjun and Sapna.

In the hospital, Sapna was sitting near his bed. Rathod was happy to see her concern for Arjun. "ab ye Rawte ka ghayaal rakhenga.. I hope he wont push her out of his life.." Rathod said to himself.

"sir' good morning Sir. Aap yaha..? " she was happy to see them.

"ha waha ab sub teekh hai.. hows he? Abhi thak utha nahi?"

"kal raath ko ek baar utha tha.. phir so gaya.. shayad abhi uthengi.." at that time a nurse came in. "excuse me Mrs. Rawte.. aap ko doctor bula rahi hai'" All were shocked to hear this. "Mrs, Rawte..?"😲

"mein' par yaha'" she was trying to not to look at the shocked faces. 😳 "don't worry maam, aap jab thak ayengi mein yahi rukthi hu.. please jaiye.."

She looked at them and went out soon. "yaar ye Sapna suchme character mein chagayi hi '" chotu was amused. 😆Arjun was waking up slowly.."oh Mr.Rawte aap uth gaye? How do you feel now?" he was disoriented at first.. but soon.."they know my real name.. that means'" he was wondering. He looked and saw his team but Sapna was missing'" shayad aap aapke biwi ko dhuund rahe hai..right?" he was shocked again.. "biwi..??"😲

"don't worry sir. Wo doctor se milne gayi hai.. you are so lucky sir.. wo aapse bohot pyaar karthi hai.. she was so worried when she brought you here. Jab doctor aapko treat karnese mana kiya tha..wo tho doctor ke collar hi pakadliya tha.. or kaha ki wo unhe nahi chodende' doctor tho dar hi gaya tha.. " all were amused.." ok mein doctor ko bula tha hu'" she went out. All were not sure how Arjun was going to react.. they knew it was a sensitive topic.. "shree zara wo file dena'" he went through the medical reports. And saw her signature. "Mrs.Sapna Arjun Rawte'"😳 he read aloud.." oh no.. aaj tho Sapna gaye kaam se'" shree said. Even Rathod agreed.

She came back from doctor' s cabin. Arjun was sitting up. All had a look in their face. She was a bit confused." Sir aap uth gaye'" Arjun kept looking at her. "case is solved Sapna.. ab tum ye biwi ke role chod sakthi ho.." Sapna got it "so now he knew it.."

"sorry sir I know aap mujhse naraaz hai.. but yaha bohot problem tha.. aap ithne serious.. or ye log police or aapke gharwale ke wait kar rahe the.. isliye.."

"tho tum meri biwi ban gayi? Tum Arjun Singhania ke wife the.. Rawte ke nahi.."

"sorry sir.. but anjane mein huyi..I was so tensed.. that's why.. I'm sorry." Her eyes were moist. Before Arjun could say anything, Rathod spoke up.." Sapna.. tum hotel jao or aaram karlo.. pure raath yahi the na.. go '" she just looked at Arjun and went back.. Arjun was already missing her.

In her room she was so upset. She felt so lonely there.. and slowly slept.. after 2 hours she got fresh and went back to hospital. The team was talking about the case. Though Rathod was filling Arjun with his work, he knew that he was not listening.. Sapna came in. she was in a plain white salwar with red duppatta. She dint have the sindoor or mangalsutra.. Arjun felt bad..the trio noticed it.😉 Doctor came in to check him. He wanted to get discharged and go to Mumbai. But doctor stopped him for traveling long distance for at least 2 days.. at last Rathod ordered him to stay back. And Sapna to help him. Arjun didn't want her to stay back. The two men quarreled for a while. But she was silent. At last decision was made.they will stay back.. but different rooms..

Team went back. Sapna was trying to help him but in vain. She tried to feed him. But he didn't allow. "sir aap mujhse gussa hai.. ok.. par wo ghane pe math nikaliye.. nahi khaoge tho or beemar hoga.. or zyaada time mujhe bardash karna hoga.. ab yahi plan hai tho ok .. math khayiye '" she was angry with him.

Arjun was shocked and amused to hear her.. he allowed her to feed him. Then had his medicines from her.. "Mrs. Rawte'" sister came in.. " I am not Mrs. Rawte' its Sapna.. just Sapna.." she snapped. Arjun kept looking at her. "ab in dono ko kya hua' shayad pati patni ke bheej jhagda hogaya hoga' how romantic'" sister kept thinking.. "ok then maam.. inke medicines ke time hua hai.. ye bathane ayi thi.."

"he already had it' thankyou.." sister went back. Arjun was asleep for most of the day time..

In the evening she was giving him food.. "doctor ne kaha ke kal shaam ko discharge kar denge.. kal raath ko hotel mein rukhthe hai or next day morning ko nikalthe hai' but I'll drive'Rathod se ne bhi yahi kaha hai.."

"ok.." after he had food she was about to get up.."tum nahi khaoge..?" he asked.

"nahi.. bhoog nahi hai.." Arjun knew she was still disturbed. "ab agar tum nahi khaoge tho beemar hojayenge' or fir or din mujhe tumhe bardash karna hoga' agar yahi plan hai tho teekh hai.." he gave back her own dialog.😉 She couldn't help her smile. She too had her food. But she didn't notice him smiling.😊 After food she sat in the sofa looking at him. He was lost in his thoughts and slowly slept. She slept after some time. Later at mid night Arjun woke up and saw her sleeping peacefully in sofa. Sometime later he too slept.

Next day went uneventful. She was caring as usual. By 4 pm he was discharged and reached hotel by 5 30. She slowly lead him to bed. He was still weak. she gave him water and told him to relax. When he was settled, she said " Rathod sir ek or room arrange kiya hai.. mein next room me hi hu.. 311 mein. Kisi cheez ke zaroorath ho tho please bulayiye.." he was a bit upset. Now he was getting used to her. " ok.. I'll call you.."

She reached her room. She had expected him to ask to stay back. "tum bhi na Sapna.. pagal ho.. why will he ask.. wo aise kyu kahega.. tum bhi na.. ek dum stupid ho.." 😳she told to herself. She got freshed up and was constantly looking at her phone expecting his call..

It was dinner time. She called him "sir dinner time hai.. mein aapkeliye khichdi order kiya tha ..lekar aau..?" he was not sure." Nahi tum khalo.. I already had dinner.. thode bhoog lag rahe the ..isliye.."

"oh.. its ok sir' you take rest.." she cut the call but was upset. she called reception "sorry room 312 keliye jo khichdi order kiya tha wo cancel karna tha.. lagtha hai unhone kuch or order kar liya tha'"

"nahi maam.. 312 se koi order nahi aya hai.."

"what.. are you sure?"


PRECAP:

"Sir, apne aap ko ithna dard math dijiye.. "

Arjun opening his heart to Sapna...


comments please...😉

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
wow nice story
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
As usual great update ...
Awww sapna is so caring ...
Plz update the next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww this was such a cute & Romantic update..love how they are like stealing glance from each other 😳😳

I remember Riya's word that may be not her but she want someone in Arjun's life who would teach him to live again & Sapna is fulfilling her bestie's dream 😊

very very nice update & precap sounds interesting 👍🏼 thanks for pm dear 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just a small thought... if Sapna was on screen...whom would you like to see in her role?
just keen to know, how much you all liked the character...😉

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