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Posted: 3 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is holi, Anuj & Anu apply colors on each other.



Here is a clip from my imagination land..😳


Anuj applies color on her cheeks. Anu applies on his, feeling his nerve throb under her palms.😳

Anuj holds her hands, not wanting to let go. He brings her hands to his lips and kisses them with a chirp.😉❤️

Anu blushes in and turns her face away. He brings her hands to rest them on his chest.❤️

Anuj: Anu! He touches her chin and brings her face him and meet his gaze.

Anu: Feels shy to meet his eyes and looks down.😳

Anuj: Will you marry me?😳❤️

Anu: Shocked! Looks up to see him and feels nervous… aap ye kya keh …😳

Anuj: Abhi, yahi… will you marry me right now?❤️

Anu: ye kya bachpana hai?😊


Anuj: His eyes fixed on hers and says in his raspy voice

"Ye rangon ka mela toh ek bahana hai….. iss Holi hume pyaar ke rang mein rangna hai”


take hers hand kisses and says “ yeh peela rang hamari dosti ka”

kisses her cheeks and says “ye gulab rang tumhari Muskaan ka”

kisses her chin and says “ ye hara rang tumhari garima ka”

kisses on her eyes and says “ye neela tumhari nishtha ka”

just when he pauses to look at her…😳


Anu’s phone goes off – “achyutham keshavam… “😳

Anu sees it is Samar calling her, she picks up the call and tells him that she will join them soon…😳🤔

Anuj: asks “ tumhe jaana hai?”😲💔

Anu: shakes her head indicating negative….😳


She takes his hands, kisses them … “ peela rang hamare dosti ka”

kisses his cheeks ..“ gulab rang aapke shraddha ka”

kisses his chin …. “ hara rang aapke sehensheelta ka”

kisses his eyes … “ neela rang aapki nekta ka…”

pauses and looks at him “laal humare pya… ….” and claims his lips😉❤️🤗


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I wasn't planning on posting this until the episode aired. But, did it anyway. Post your comments to let me know if you liked it or not. When I re-reading the draft, I was rofl at the cheesiness 🤣


I am irritated with Shah family always hovering around, 😕so hoping that Anu & Anuj get few mins alone during Holi.


First, i can so so understand and relate to the irritation you get on seeing Shah family, trust me the feelings are mutual.


Okay, Anu ka phone wrong time pe hamesha baj hi jata hai, ye to Anuj bhi janta hai.


Anuj, next time please put her phone on Airplane mode, you might anyways be aiming for a take off next. Right, so let's follow the protocol and avoid any major mishaps.


Ek request please, Samar is cupid in MaAn story, so next time call should come from Pakhi or Toshu. Or alternate Samar can say Baa, Bapuji mandir gaye hai so need to come back for next 6 hours.


You tested my hindi knowledge here, glad i passed the test 🤪


Itne lambe reply, tone aur mood se samajh aa gaya hoga, how much i liked this cheesiness. My bad, let me correct myself, with Anuj's charm everything becomes way too classy. So, thanks for this classy nugget. ❤️

Edited by Km181 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is holi, Anuj & Anu apply colors on each other.



Here is a clip from my imagination land..😳


Anuj applies color on her cheeks. Anu applies on his, feeling his nerve throb under her palms.😳

Anuj holds her hands, not wanting to let go. He brings her hands to his lips and kisses them with a chirp.😉❤️

Anu blushes in and turns her face away. He brings her hands to rest them on his chest.❤️

Anuj: Anu! He touches her chin and brings her face him and meet his gaze.

Anu: Feels shy to meet his eyes and looks down.😳

Anuj: Will you marry me?😳❤️

Anu: Shocked! Looks up to see him and feels nervous… aap ye kya keh …😳

Anuj: Abhi, yahi… will you marry me right now?❤️

Anu: ye kya bachpana hai?😊


Anuj: His eyes fixed on hers and says in his raspy voice

"Ye rangon ka mela toh ek bahana hai….. iss Holi hume pyaar ke rang mein rangna hai”


take hers hand kisses and says “ yeh peela rang hamari dosti ka”

kisses her cheeks and says “ye gulab rang tumhari Muskaan ka”

kisses her chin and says “ ye hara rang tumhari garima ka”

kisses on her eyes and says “ye neela tumhari nishtha ka”

just when he pauses to look at her…😳


Anu’s phone goes off – “achyutham keshavam… “😳

Anu sees it is Samar calling her, she picks up the call and tells him that she will join them soon…😳🤔

Anuj: asks “ tumhe jaana hai?”😲💔

Anu: shakes her head indicating negative….😳


She takes his hands, kisses them … “ peela rang hamare dosti ka”

kisses his cheeks ..“ gulab rang aapke shraddha ka”

kisses his chin …. “ hara rang aapke sehensheelta ka”

kisses his eyes … “ neela rang aapki nekta ka…”

pauses and looks at him “laal humare pya… ….” and claims his lips😉❤️🤗


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I wasn't planning on posting this until the episode aired. But, did it anyway. Post your comments to let me know if you liked it or not. When I re-reading the draft, I was rofl at the cheesiness 🤣


I am irritated with Shah family always hovering around, 😕so hoping that Anu & Anuj get few mins alone during Holi.


This was great piece, sweet with spiciness. But please tell me where was Anu touching initially as bolded, that it was throbbing? ☺️


Every educational on the colours too. 😳

Edited by DJ_3 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#73

Sometimes I wish they are packed off to some other land where there are no shahs...Baaki poori duniya wahan aajaye bas yeh log nahi 😂😂😂

I too wish they get some time off for themselves without any gaowales and gaowalis...

Loving your drabble series...❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Meghuzz

Sometimes I wish they are packed off to some other land where there are no shahs...Baaki poori duniya wahan aajaye bas yeh log nahi 😂😂😂

I too wish they get some time off for themselves without any gaowales and gaowalis...

Loving your drabble series...❤

Sorry tagged the wrong person 🤦‍♀️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: DJ_3


This was great piece, sweet with spiciness. But please tell me where was Anu touching initially as bolded, that it was throbbing? ☺️


Every educational on the colours too. 😳

DJ!! 🤣 He applies on her cheeks, she on his ( cheeks..implied)🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

DJ!! 🤣 He applies on her cheeks, she on his ( cheeks..implied)🤔


But you had a chuckle too, right? 😆 I was like Smitha going bolder, like the colour red.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: DJ_3


But you had a chuckle too, right? 😆 I was like Smitha going bolder, like the colour red.

I realized my bad sentence formation after seeing your post.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

Lovely Smitha...this is a natural/normal expected reaction.

You portrayed it beautifully...But since there is nothing normal in Maan. We will not get anything more than hand hold.

At least we can dream about them through OS.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#79

Sooo beautiful!👏 Would you continue this as voh shaadi wali baat reh gyi😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#80

Beautiful❤️

Y stopped in 4 colours aur bhi toh rang hai na😉😆

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