MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

I had missed these earlier, read all now in one go. Wow just wow, these are superb 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is making gujjiyas in shah house kitchen. Anuj walks in and asks her why she is in the kitchen while the rest of the family is celebrating.

Here is an alternative, right from la la land!😳😳

He walks into the kitchen behind her clasping his hands around her waist.🤗 She is startled, turns around to face him, he looks disappointed.😔 She reacts with a questioning look. He lets go of her and turns off the flame. She stands wondering what he is doing.

Folding his arms across his chest, he asks her “ meri Anu, kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai?” (don’t recall what else he said)

Anu: Feels awkward not knowing what to say – “Mujhe aise kaam karna bahut achcha lagta hai. Khaana pakana, ghar ka kaam…. “☺️

Anuj: cuts her off abruptly and says “khaana pakana achchi baat hai, lekin Shah parivaar tumhe naukrani ki tarah treat kare,ye galat baat hai”😡

Yeh, baat mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga ….ke sab waha thyohaar manaa rahe hai aur tum yahaa…. “ is now very angry.😈😈

Anu: Jaane dijiye ne….😳

Ye lijiye, gujiya taste karke bataiye… ke..😛

Anuj: Aise akise jaane doo? Mujhe kuch nahi taste karna..😡

Anu: arey, aap itni si baat pe gussa..

Anuj: 😳😈.

Anu: Reaches out and holds his hands - Koi mujhe kaise bhi treat kare, mujhe farak nahi padtha. aap mujh pe aise haq jatate hai, itna pyaar karte hai,… yahi mereliye kaafi hai,…. ❤️And plants a kiss on his hands.😉

Anuj: turns his face away expressing his disappointment.😔

Anu: smiles at him, tip toes and plants a kiss on his cheeks.😳 Ab shaant ho jayiye……😳

Anuj: Naughtily hides his smile and acts as if he is still mad at her and pouts

Anu: Comes close to face him, stares in his eyes, sees her own reflection and comes further close and kisses his lips.😳❤️

Anuj: Looks at her and smiles , still pouting

Anu: Bahar chale, thyohaar manane?😲

Anuj: Aise kaise… hum 4 din se mile nahi,… thodi der mere paas… he holds her arms and closes her in his grasp.🤗❤️

Anu: koi dekh lega…😲

Anuj: dekhne do. Hum aisa kya galat kar rahe hai? Mein apni hone wali biwi se pyaar kar raha hoon…❤️❤️❤️

Anu: Baa dekhenge toh bahut badi museebat mein phas jaaongi… chodiye… trying to free herself from him😳😲

Anuj: Tightens his grip around her…. Tabi chodoonga jab tum mujhse waada karogi..🤗

Anu: kaisa waada?🤔

Anuj: Yahi ke, jab bhi shahs tumhe pareshaan kare, tum chup nahi rahogi, tum unka har baat nahi maanogi, Sabse important, tum bhi thyohaar manaogi, sabki tarah enjoy karogi.❤️

Anu: accha baba, phir se aaise nahi hone doongi…Promise!😊. Ab toh chodiye..😳😳

Anuj: aise kaise chode doo? agar tumhe nahi pata, toh jaan lo ki promise ko aise seal karte hai...... Presses his lips against hers😉😳😳

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How many such scenes have we seen in movies/soaps etc? Why cant we get something like this ( without the kiss, ofcourse)?

haaye..☺️

Smithu di... Dil hii le lo aap bas..🤧❤

Itna adorable hai ye..❤🤩

Koi mujhe back hug de do please inka..😭🤧

Aur aapki ye wali anu meri fav hai..❤😍

Mere liye bas ye hii hai vo scene..❤

Beautiful piece di..loved it..❤

Thank you for tag di..❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Je baat Smitha.

This is the version we all thrakis want😀😀. Yesterday when he walked away from shahs with that swag, I was like yeh banda kuch karega aaj but na. Thank u that you made our dream come true and along with that you included the gyan which we all want to give to Anu.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Wow Smitha wonderful.


This was so sweetly depicted and in line with the characters.


By the way, everyone one is calling you Di? Any reason or maybe I should pay my repects too😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: DJ_3

Wow Smitha wonderful.


This was so sweetly depicted and in line with the characters.


By the way, everyone one is calling you Di? Any reason or maybe I should pay my repects too😁

Please use my name, like you do. 🤗

That is sapna(kenika), who I interact with in another forum. She usually addresses most others as "di" 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Hey, Smitha


Read all the drabbles in one go!

They all are fab!


Really love this cute and mushy alternative to the scenes we get. Makes me fall in love with MaAn a little more.


Keep them coming

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Scene: Anu and Anuj are having some time together before he leaves for the night. Recites shayari and asks her to promise that he will be first one to apply color on her.

V watches them and decides to ruin it. 😈He is waiting at her door with color in his hands….


A clip from la la land would proably look like this....😳


She opens the door and is about to apply color on her. … 😡

Anu: Holds his hands😈

V: Kya hua? Darr lag raha hai? Laughs deviously! 😈Saath mein udaas bhi hoga ke apni boyfriend tumhe pehle rang nahi laga sakta..😈

Anu: Laughs…🤣 aap bilkul namoone lag rahe hai….🤡 Koi aapko dekhke nahi keh sakta ki aap 3 bacchon ke baap hai.🤢

Aur rahi baat mere boyfriend ki, hum dono ek doosre ke rang mein phele hi rang chuke❤️ aap jitna bhi kosis kar le, hamari holi ke rang mein bhang nahi daal sakte..... walks away leaving him baffled.

Flashback….Prev night V leaves from there fuming in jealousy😈

Prem k dhai akshar ko me.. Holi k gulaal se likh dunga..

Anuj: Waada karo ki kal…….

Anu instead of promising –

Anu: Looks up to meet his gaze, she has turned red. Kal kissne dekha… aapke gaal par mera haq, holi ke rang se nahi, par aise likhna chahoongi and kisses him on his cheeks 😘❤️😉😍

Anuj: Smiles at her…. Par mere paas rang nahi hai…😒

Anu: koi baat nahi….and presses her lips against his.. 😘❤️😉 ab aapke paas bhi rang hai.😳

Anuj: Places several kisses all over her face.🤗😉😳❤️😍



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ye kuch zyaada ho gaya..🤣 but what if this happened? 🤡 How do you think she will avoid V?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu and Anuj are having some time together before he leaves for the night. Recites shayari and asks her to promise that he will be first one to apply color on her.

V watches them and decides to ruin it. 😈He is waiting at her door with color in his hands….


A clip from la la land would proably look like this....😳


She opens the door and is about to apply color on her. … 😡

Anu: Holds his hands😈

V: Kya hua? Darr lag raha hai? Laughs deviously! 😈Saath mein udaas bhi hoga ke apni boyfriend tumhe pehle rang nahi laga sakta..😈

Anu: Laughs…🤣 aap bilkul namoone lag rahe hai….🤡 Koi aapko dekhke nahi keh sakta ki aap 3 bacchon ke baap hai.🤢

Aur rahi baat mere boyfriend ki, hum dono ek doosre ke rang mein phele hi rang chuke❤️ aap jitna bhi kosis kar le, hamari holi ke rang mein bhang nahi daal sakte..... walks away leaving him baffled.

Flashback….Prev night V leaves from there fuming in jealousy😈

Prem k dhai akshar ko me.. Holi k gulaal se likh dunga..

Anuj: Waada karo ki kal…….

Anu instead of promising –

Anu: Looks up to meet his gaze, she has turned red. Kal kissne dekha… aapke gaal par mera haq, holi ke rang se nahi, par aise likhna chahoongi and kisses him on his cheeks 😘❤️😉😍

Anuj: Smiles at her…. Par mere paas rang nahi hai…😒

Anu: koi baat nahi….and presses her lips against his.. 😘❤️😉 ab aapke paas bhi rang hai.😳

Anuj: Places several kisses all over her face.🤗😉😳❤️😍



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ye kuch zyaada ho gaya..🤣 but what if this happened? 🤡 How do you think she will avoid V?

fikar not, kuch zyada nahi hua. In fact, aur bhi zyada ho sakta hai, u have our permission.🤣
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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu and Anuj are having some time together before he leaves for the night. Recites shayari and asks her to promise that he will be first one to apply color on her.

V watches them and decides to ruin it. 😈He is waiting at her door with color in his hands….


A clip from la la land would proably look like this....😳


She opens the door and is about to apply color on her. … 😡

Anu: Holds his hands😈

V: Kya hua? Darr lag raha hai? Laughs deviously! 😈Saath mein udaas bhi hoga ke apni boyfriend tumhe pehle rang nahi laga sakta..😈

Anu: Laughs…🤣 aap bilkul namoone lag rahe hai….🤡 Koi aapko dekhke nahi keh sakta ki aap 3 bacchon ke baap hai.🤢

Aur rahi baat mere boyfriend ki, hum dono ek doosre ke rang mein phele hi rang chuke❤️ aap jitna bhi kosis kar le, hamari holi ke rang mein bhang nahi daal sakte..... walks away leaving him baffled.

Flashback….Prev night V leaves from there fuming in jealousy😈

Prem k dhai akshar ko me.. Holi k gulaal se likh dunga..

Anuj: Waada karo ki kal…….

Anu instead of promising –

Anu: Looks up to meet his gaze, she has turned red. Kal kissne dekha… aapke gaal par mera haq, holi ke rang se nahi, par aise likhna chahoongi and kisses him on his cheeks 😘❤️😉😍

Anuj: Smiles at her…. Par mere paas rang nahi hai…😒

Anu: koi baat nahi….and presses her lips against his.. 😘❤️😉 ab aapke paas bhi rang hai.😳

Anuj: Places several kisses all over her face.🤗😉😳❤️😍



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ye kuch zyaada ho gaya..🤣 but what if this happened? 🤡 How do you think she will avoid V?

the way I watch fiction to skip the harsh reality of life, same way I read your drabbles to skip the harsh reality of fiction🤣

This is called fiction me fiction ghusana👏😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu is making gujjiyas in shah house kitchen. Anuj walks in and asks her why she is in the kitchen while the rest of the family is celebrating.

Here is an alternative, right from la la land!😳😳

He walks into the kitchen behind her clasping his hands around her waist.🤗 She is startled, turns around to face him, he looks disappointed.😔 She reacts with a questioning look. He lets go of her and turns off the flame. She stands wondering what he is doing.

Folding his arms across his chest, he asks her “ meri Anu, kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai?” (don’t recall what else he said)

Anu: Feels awkward not knowing what to say – “Mujhe aise kaam karna bahut achcha lagta hai. Khaana pakana, ghar ka kaam…. “☺️

Anuj: cuts her off abruptly and says “khaana pakana achchi baat hai, lekin Shah parivaar tumhe naukrani ki tarah treat kare,ye galat baat hai”😡

Yeh, baat mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga ….ke sab waha thyohaar manaa rahe hai aur tum yahaa…. “ is now very angry.😈😈

Anu: Jaane dijiye ne….😳

Ye lijiye, gujiya taste karke bataiye… ke..😛

Anuj: Aise akise jaane doo? Mujhe kuch nahi taste karna..😡

Anu: arey, aap itni si baat pe gussa..

Anuj: 😳😈.

Anu: Reaches out and holds his hands - Koi mujhe kaise bhi treat kare, mujhe farak nahi padtha. aap mujh pe aise haq jatate hai, itna pyaar karte hai,… yahi mereliye kaafi hai,…. ❤️And plants a kiss on his hands.😉

Anuj: turns his face away expressing his disappointment.😔

Anu: smiles at him, tip toes and plants a kiss on his cheeks.😳 Ab shaant ho jayiye……😳

Anuj: Naughtily hides his smile and acts as if he is still mad at her and pouts

Anu: Comes close to face him, stares in his eyes, sees her own reflection and comes further close and kisses his lips.😳❤️

Anuj: Looks at her and smiles , still pouting

Anu: Bahar chale, thyohaar manane?😲

Anuj: Aise kaise… hum 4 din se mile nahi,… thodi der mere paas… he holds her arms and closes her in his grasp.🤗❤️

Anu: koi dekh lega…😲

Anuj: dekhne do. Hum aisa kya galat kar rahe hai? Mein apni hone wali biwi se pyaar kar raha hoon…❤️❤️❤️

Anu: Baa dekhenge toh bahut badi museebat mein phas jaaongi… chodiye… trying to free herself from him😳😲

Anuj: Tightens his grip around her…. Tabi chodoonga jab tum mujhse waada karogi..🤗

Anu: kaisa waada?🤔

Anuj: Yahi ke, jab bhi shahs tumhe pareshaan kare, tum chup nahi rahogi, tum unka har baat nahi maanogi, Sabse important, tum bhi thyohaar manaogi, sabki tarah enjoy karogi.❤️

Anu: accha baba, phir se aaise nahi hone doongi…Promise!😊. Ab toh chodiye..😳😳

Anuj: aise kaise chode doo? agar tumhe nahi pata, toh jaan lo ki promise ko aise seal karte hai...... Presses his lips against hers😉😳😳

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How many such scenes have we seen in movies/soaps etc? Why cant we get something like this ( without the kiss, ofcourse)?

I'm not gonna watch anupama anymore from tomorrow coz you have raised my already high standards way toooooooooo high😪

now i will pretend that this is the written update of the episode and will live happily ever after 😌

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