MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 38

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is so beautiful yaar...loved your cute little shayari❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Thank you!

If you have followed my prev posts, I have written about his new look and how she expresses her desire over his clean shaven/stubble look. So, she runs her hands over his cheeks wondering when he'll get back the stubb, and he confirms stating it will grow back by their wedding.

Honestly, having to explain spoils the essence of the scene. But the fact you did not follow gives me a feedback on the lack of clarity in my writing.


No smitha, it was clear.. but the thing is i read maan ff daily so mujhe yaad nhi raha hoga.. n on top of it my exams r going on🥲😩

But ya anyways thankyou so much for interpretation ☺

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kp26


No smitha, it was clear.. but the thing is i read maan ff daily so mujhe yaad nhi raha hoga.. n on top of it my exams r going on🥲😩

But ya anyways thankyou so much for interpretation ☺

oh, no worries dear!! Don't stress, all the best for your exams. You'll rock!! ❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Sam, Forgot to tag you. Plus I wasn't sure if you'd be interested. If you are, do check the 1st post here - link that has an index of drabble shorts.

Thanksss Dear for tagging me.

Thank u so much for considering me as a deserving candidate.

When I don't miss a single post and os related to my sweet sweet AK, how can I miss it ??

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Smitha.... it is pure love..

I like these lines so much


Anuj: Raises his eyebrow in appreciation, "shikhayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se, tum mujhse milne aati ho, usse milne ke baad…."

Really beautiful lines

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful Serene Romantic ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ChirpyKiya10

Thanksss Dear for tagging me.

Thank u so much for considering me as a deserving candidate.

When I don't miss a single post and os related to my sweet sweet AK, how can I miss it ??

That's good to know, I'll remember to tag you going forward.

btw, If you haven't already, do me a favor & read the very 1st drabble nugget. Only if that had come true... we would be saved from the illogical torture. I am sometimes irriated that I need to watch this show because of my love for AK. I am sure many others share this feeling with me 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ChirpyKiya10

Really beautiful lines

Thank you ladies! I can't take credit for it. I am sure I must've heard it in a movie or heard from someone. Remembered to use it here since I felt it was apt. ❤️

I was expecting some shayari since they have depicted AK as "shayar kapadia".

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is the evening of Anu & Anuj’s engagement ceremony; he has come to fetch her from her room.


Here's nugget to let out my imagination run a tad bit wild, whipped up something small 😳

Anu is standing in front of the mirror, her eyes cast downwards. He walks in from behind and encloses his arms around her waist and rests his chin on her shoulders.❤️

Anuj: Basks in the lovely reflection of their image as acouple. Moments later… "Anu!"

Anu: Her eyes still cast downwards, .. "mm…." 😳

Anuj: "dekho na! aaj ye aaina bhi sharma raha hain hume dekh ke"😳❤️

Anu: "huh?" And looks up and meets his piercing gaze. Turns around, resting her palms on his chest

"Aap bahut handsome lag rahe hai…" ❤️

Anuj: "tumse zyaada toh nahi.."😉

Anu: In his eyes, she sees her own reflection. "mein aur bhi khoobsurat lagne lagti hoon jab aaine mein nahi, khud ko aapke aankhon mein dekhti hoon…"😳

Anuj: Raises his eyebrow in appreciation, "shikhayat hai mujhe tumhari aaine se, tum mujhse milne aati ho, usse milne ke baad…."

Then turns her around to face the mirror…. "aaj se hum ek doosre ke parchai hai… jo kabhi saath nahi chodthi…"❤️🤗

Brings his face close to hers, his cheeks brushing hers…

Anu: Turns around and runs her fingers over his cheeks…😳

Anuj: chuckles, closes his hands over hers and runs them along his cheeks "ye ...shaadi tak badh jayega… " opens his arms enticing her for an embrace.🤗🤗

Anu: realizing what he was directing to, her flushed cheeks had conveyed more than what she intended to.

She took cover in his chest while her arms tightened around him.

The drum of her heart beat for him and his for her; and at that moment their hearts soared to the sky free of all worries.❤️❤️


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The scene was beautiful and well executed. Although some minor tweaks to it could have elevated the scene couple of notches higher.

Those poetic lines in hindi can be found in any movie/fiction. Hindi is not my 1st language. The show's professional writers would proably do a better job in writing shayri. I was expecting something along those lines.

Anyway, let me know if you liked this small nugget.😳

confession : ^^ this is better than what they gave us. 🤷🏻‍♀️ sorry not sorry.
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: BaAZiGar0

confession : ^^ this is better than what they gave us. 🤷🏻‍♀️ sorry not sorry.

Ali! ❤️🤗 Long time

Thank you dear❤️

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