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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Chapter 5

Nice update Ritu...Nice to read further...it reminded me of the entire series once again in one chapter...felt so nostalgic...eagerly waiting to see how the mystery of Vidushak gets solved through your narration...

Loved it and really loving your writing Ritu...😊👏

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Directional.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Chapter 4

Nice chappy dear...Trisha's family supporting him along with Trisha in times of need and he letting out his grief through his tears is so much needed for him...at the same time so heart touching...I loved the narration dear...Thanks for the update...😊

Thanks so much.. 😊

Your comments encourage me so much. 😳

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Directional.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Chapter 5
Nice update Ritu...Nice to read further...it reminded me of the entire series once again in one chapter...felt so nostalgic...eagerly waiting to see how the mystery of Vidushak gets solved through your narration...

Loved it and really loving your writing Ritu...😊👏

Even I'm feeling very nostalgic while writing this ff.. thanks again for commenting..

😳

Edited by Directional. - 8 years ago

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Babita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Chappy 4 :

I liked how Raghav wanted to throw all his fears with tears, but all he inhale were the worries ahead and what happened to the team and especially to Bikram. He knows that Trisha is a boss every where, but also knows that he won't be spared to be asked and the convo that's awaited.

Loving the track, looking so natural and the way it should have to be. Thanks Ritu, Loves 🤗

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Babita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Chappy 5

Loved how Trisha tried to normalize things with Raghav. her intention is so clear that as a whole team, they all are ONE and what ever has happened is not raghav's fault and he must get rid of his guilt. Loved how later, Raghav took notice of Trisha and her attire and his feelings and weakness that should not be open to vidooshak !!

Loving Raghav's looks towards Trisha 😉 and love in between the lines ❤️

Thanks Ritu for such loving updates 👏👏

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hello Ritu ❤️🤗

Am Swati. Sorry i cud not get your story with time, as i was out of town and didn't come here often.

Read all the parts, and loved how you have woven the script after the ending of the show👏

Meticulously you have given a fine twist and turn to the tale ahead, that forms a wonderful package of a team and their bond and their life moving on.

Loving that you have picked the RaTri angle as well. We, somewhere missed it in the show, and now loving the track as it's coming up with your pen and beautiful descriptions!

Thanks dear for making this forum elated with your awesome presence! Welcome to the Forum 🤗

Luv ya ❤️🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Hello dear... 😊

Sorry for being late... 😳

read the last 4 parts.. gotta go for the special bond this team shares... ! Once again... got back to the memory lane n loved the magic of Raghav's team as picture abhi baaki hai... ⭐️👏

Loved to see a romantic angle coming up... as Raghav has started thinking in that way... n thats a lovely sign for your readers Ritu... !!!

Nice updates... ! Loved how you have tackled Raghav's inner tremor n his feelings for his mates as Bikram all the way gave away his life for him...

Hope the vidooshak story gets unfold...n they learn the truth that it was not the Boss ,,, but vidooshak in disguise... !

Thanks dear... n God bless... !

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Directional.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: babita..
Chappy 4 :
I liked how Raghav wanted to throw all his fears with tears, but all he inhale were the worries ahead and what happened to the team and especially to Bikram. He knows that Trisha is a boss every where, but also knows that he won't be spared to be asked and the convo that's awaited.

Loving the track, looking so natural and the way it should have to be. Thanks Ritu, Loves 🤗

Thanks a lot dear, love you too..😳

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Directional.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: babita..
Chappy 5

Loved how Trisha tried to normalize things with Raghav. her intention is so clear that as a whole team, they all are ONE and what ever has happened is not raghav's fault and he must get rid of his guilt. Loved how later, Raghav took notice of Trisha and her attire and his feelings and weakness that should not be open to vidooshak !!
Loving Raghav's looks towards Trisha 😉 and love in between the lines ❤️

Thanks Ritu for such loving updates 👏👏

Aww Babita, all your comments are so encouraging.. thanks much..❤️

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Directional.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Hello Ritu ❤️🤗

Am Swati. Sorry i cud not get your story with time, as i was out of town and didn't come here often.

Read all the parts, and loved how you have woven the script after the ending of the show👏
Meticulously you have given a fine twist and turn to the tale ahead, that forms a wonderful package of a team and their bond and their life moving on.
Loving that you have picked the RaTri angle as well. We, somewhere missed it in the show, and now loving the track as it's coming up with your pen and beautiful descriptions!
Thanks dear for making this forum elated with your awesome presence! Welcome to the Forum 🤗
Luv ya ❤️🤗

No problem Swati, I'm so elated that you liked it.. thank you so much for your comment and such a nice welcome.. thanks a lot... Luv u too 😳

Keep reading dear..😊

Edited by Directional. - 8 years ago