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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 3

The plight of Raghav is evident in everyone's thoughts here and all of them are convinced that when he has Trisha with him, he will be fine sooner or later...nice moment when Rajbir pulls Swati to the backseat😛...

Waiting for RaTri moments dear...please update soon..😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Beautiful narration...it's really wonderful...⭐️👏

Thanks dear..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Thanks for the update Ritu😊

Part 2

As expected, you have nicely portrayed the bond between the team members in this part...how everyone has been praying for Bikram's recovery and the relief on seeing him okay...nicely written dear...
Yes the silence of Raghav is a worrying factor for all of them...

Waiting to see how this story unfolds...

Well done dear...thanks..😊

Thanks a lot..😃

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Chapter 3

The plight of Raghav is evident in everyone's thoughts here and all of them are convinced that when he has Trisha with him, he will be fine sooner or later...nice moment when Rajbir pulls Swati to the backseat😛...

Waiting for RaTri moments dear...please update soon..😊

Thank u.. i had fun writing rajbir's part..😉

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Originally posted by: nishi05
Beautiful narration...it's really wonderful...⭐️👏
Thanks dear..

Thank u.. keep reading.😊😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Bikram's cheeky tricks are purely a lovely bond of his team with him. Loved the update Ritu 👏👏

Raghav's silence is a worried thing, but as his team is there and specially Trisha is there to hold him back, why to worry, right ?? 😉

Loving the beautiful track, thanks, Loves ❤️

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Originally posted by: babita..
Bikram's cheeky tricks are purely a lovely bond of his team with him. Loved the update Ritu 👏👏
Raghav's silence is a worried thing, but as his team is there and specially Trisha is there to hold him back, why to worry, right ?? 😉

Loving the beautiful track, thanks, Loves ❤️

Thanks a lottt babita.. 😃 and yes, no need to worry abuot Raghav when Trisha is there..😆

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Chapter 4

He was lost in thoughts when suddenly the car stopped. Raghav found himself outside Trisha's house. "You've forgotten to drop me , boss."
"I have forgotten nothing. You'll stay here tonight. I've already informed my parents about this. They are waiting for us. So you're going to step out of the car and come inside with me. Without arguments."
Raghav stepped out and followed Trisha to the door. She pressed the door bell and they waited. Just before the doors opened, Raghav said, softly, "Thank you" and then he stepped inside followed by her.

Her mother took them inside. One look at her and Raghav understood that she had been worried too. They were told to freshen up immediately and come down to have dinner within fifteen minutes. Raghav smiled at her authoritative attitude. Like mother like daughter, he thought. He went to the guest room and entered the shower. And then the floodgates opened. All the confusion, the betrayal, the anxiety, the worry and the all consuming fear that he had experienced for the last thirty five hours expressed themselves with the uncontrollable tears. His body shook with their force. His tears mixed with the water. He felt tired, exhausted and above all, he felt terrible grief. He let his tears flow. It was cathartic. He knew he needed it.

When Raghav returned to the bedroom, he saw white kurta and pyjamas folded and kept neatly on the bed for him. He changed and went to the dining table. Trisha was helping her mother in arranging the dinner on the table. Her father was sitting on the sofa and watching tv. He called Raghav and patted the empty place beside him on the sofa, silently telling him to sit. They watched the tv together, silently, waiting for them to be called for dinner.

Raghav stood in the balcony. During the dinner Mr and Mrs Diwan hadn't asked anything about the entire ordeal other than inquiring about Bikram's health. They spoke about other things. Raghav knew why they behaved that way and he was very grateful. Someone knocked at his door. On opening it, Trisha entered. They both went to the balcony. Raghav knew what was coming.

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Chapter 5

"What are you going to do now? Still want to leave CBI?" Trisha broke the silence first. She knew that the only way she could distract him from this gloom is by talking about their plan of action.
"I still can't believe that it was chief all along."
"Answer my question first."
"I have no answer" Replied Raghav.
"Okay, then tell me what you're thinking." Silence. "Raghav?" Trisha tried again.
"What do you want to know?"
"Everything. No more secrets Raghav. This is not your fight anymore. This time, he has attacked all of us. He was holding such an important position for such a long time. He has fooled everyone. We have to find him. All of us together."
"I'm confused, very confused. I could always feel that he keeps a watch on me. But never in my wildest dreams did I think that it could be him. I really don't know what to think anymore." He paused.
"Lately, he had been contacting me in various ways. He sent me mails, sometimes called me on my cell. He even helped me with the case in which Rajbir was framed for murder. I used to think, how he knew so much about me, about my whereabouts. Now I know."
"Why is he fixated on you?"Trisha asked.
"I don't know. The only connection I have with him is that he was my father's patient before he murdered him."
"And he let you go?"
"Yes. But before he left, he said that he knows I think he is wrong, but it doesn't matter if the way is right or wrong, the goal should be right and that I am his goal. "
"What? You are his goal? What does that even mean?" Trisha looked baffled.
"I don't know. But it is true that he had always been fixated on me. Even this time, he behaved as if all of this was a game where I was his opponent and kept challenging me. Everything that happened with you all, happened because you were with me. Bikram got shot to save me."
"You are being silly Raghav. How can you blame yourself about what that man did? We are all victims here, he is the villain, who put us in this situation. Always remember that." Then, on a softer note, she continued, "Besides, we risked our lives from the moment we joined CBI. And you would have done the same thing for Bikram. Look, he is okay now and will completely recover in few days. I think we should look forward instead and try and catch him before he does more harm. And Raghav, one more thing, we are in this together."

Raghav looked at her for a long time. She was wearing a simple, light blue cotton t-shirt and loose, white cotton pants. Her hair was open and blowing in the light breeze. She looked ethereal. Raghav had been thinking only one thing since Bikram gained consciousness and the doctor announced him safe. What if it had been Trisha? He had been shaken to the core when Bikram got hurt. It would be impossible for him to remain sane if anything happened to her. What if vidushak comes to know about his weakness? "What if he hurts you next?" Raghav finally blurted out.

P.s. awaiting your comments..😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 4

Nice chappy dear...Trisha's family supporting him along with Trisha in times of need and he letting out his grief through his tears is so much needed for him...at the same time so heart touching...I loved the narration dear...Thanks for the update...😊

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