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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Az07
So v could c someone is trying to trap Trisha as the culprit hope it's solved soon

To know you have to wait for the next update

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Awesome teaser, hope Trisha is fine... Raghav is really worried for her... Trisha being trapped... continue soon...

Thanks dear. Yes Trisha is trapped in some wrong situation and you have to wait to see how Raghav will help her out in next update

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
lovely story dear .a wonderful starting. it was similar to episode 4 of agent raghav. I always like your way of writing I always feel like I am watching a episode of agent raghav on tv.coming back .loved Raghav admiring trisha and then falling in Rajbirs trap. loved RaTri subtle romance in the party .so trisha friend mistaked raghav as her husband and then boyfriend. that scene was soo cute .thanks for such a wonderful update. loved it a lot. and sorry for the late review

Thanks Tasha, I am glad that you like the update. I miss agent Raghav a lot so I made it like episode so that their will be suspense and mystery. By seeing Raghav and Trisha anyone can say that they are couple. 😉

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome teaser dear loved it a lot

Thanks dear, will try to post it by Sunday

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

After a romantic update, this suspense is scary Ananya !

Loved to see Trisha found by the team and Raghav gets her back !

Will wait !

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: babita..
After a romantic update, this suspense is scary Ananya !
Loved to see Trisha found by the team and Raghav gets her back !
Will wait !

Yes it is little bit emotional. But what happened and how you have to wait for the update. Will post it by tomorrow.

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 2

Whole team was alert and was keeping an eye on Suresh (Arnav's father) . Suddenly their a power cut. A bullet was fired, all the members try to find Suresh . When current was back they found that the bullet was shot in Suresh 's shoulder. And a guy running out

Trisha - "Bikram aur Rajbir tum dono bahar jakar dekho"

Rajbir and Bikram follow the command and search outside but there was no one.

Rajbir - "lagata hai bhag gaya"

Raghav-"vo isi party me tha aur Arnav par nazar rakh raha tha"

Trisha - "Mr. Arnav kya hum guest list dekh sakte hai"

Suresh - "Apko mera manager Dipesh sab help karega"

Raghav - "Bikram ambulance call karo"

Dipesh - "yeh leejiye guest list"

Trisha was holding the register and Raghav came closure to her face. Trisha quickly looked at him and he pretended to be busy in checking the list.

Raghav - "Trisha ek admi hai jo abhi bhi party me nahi hai"

Trisha - "right Mr. Arnav Saxena"

Raghav - "Dipesh Arnav kaha hai"

Dipesh - "vo toh apne kamare me hai unki tabiyat kharab thi isliye"

Trisha - "Bikram zara is Arnav ko neeche lekar ana"

Bikram - "Trisha, Raghav!!! Arnav kamare me nahi hai"

Trisha - "Ho sakta hai usne hi yeh hamala karvaya ho par kyu"

Raghav - "vo toh uske milne par hi pata chalega par pehle hume Mr. Suresh ki security bada deni chahiye"

Trisha - "Right Rajbir aur Bikram tum log Suresh ke sath hospital me raho"

Rajbir and Bikram nodded in yes.

Trisha - "Raghav I think hume ab ghar chalna chahiye kyoki Arnav ko din me hi dhoonda ja sakta hai"

Raghav - "Right chalo me tumhe drop kar deta hoon"

Trisha - "no thanks I will go"

Raghav - "take care!!"

Trisha - "you to"

Raghav and Trisha left the party venue but Raghav sensed that something is going to be wrong but what?

Trisha was driving. The path between her house and party venue was very lonely.

Suddenly she saw someone running from the jungle she applied a break and stop the car. Trisha saw Arnav in such a horrible condition he was bleeding profusely and was crying for help.

Trisha move out of her car and made him sit.

Trisha - "are you ok Arnav? Aur yeh sab kaise hua? Aur tum yaha is samay?

Arnav-" Trisha vo log mujhe maar dalege "

Before Trisha could question him he became unconscious.

Trisha -" Arnav anlhe kholo!! Ab kya karoon, me ise hospital le jaati hoon"

Trisha stand and was hit bya person with a wooden log. She soon became unconscious and fell down.

CBI Headquarters

Raghav-"10:30 baj rahe hai abhi tak Trisha nahi ayi "

Rajbir -" aaj Sooraj kaha se nikala hai boss late hai"

Raghav called her but she did not pick her phone.

Raghav - "Trisha phone kyo nahi utha rahi hai"

Bikram - "ho sakta hai vo chutti par ho"

Raghav - "no Bikram me Trisha ko acche se jaata hoon vo aise chutti nahi leti something is wrong with her"

Trisha woke up near her car and found Arnav missing. She somehow made her stand on her feet and manage to drive her car to her house

CBI Headquarters

Raghav got chief's call about murder of Arnav.

Raghav-"guys Arnav ka murder hua hai "

Rajbir -" what abhi tak hume lag raha tha usne murder kiya tha par kisi ne usk ahi murder kar diya. "

Raghav -" Hume is murder case ki investigation Trisha ke bina hi start karna hoga"

Murder site

Raghav was observing the dead body of Arnav. There was a cut on the neck. He found a ring in the hand of dead body. Raghav take out the ring from his hand with great trouble.

Raghav-"yeh toh Trisha ki ring hai par iske paas kaise"

Rajbir - "aur Trisha kaha hai"

Bikram - "guys yeh dekho fingerprints mile hai chaku par"

Raghav-"Dr. Arti ke pass bijva do "

Raghav was just praying for her safety.

CBI Headquarters

Trisha manages to come to office but she had bandage on her head. Trisha entered the room.

Raghav -" Trisha tum kaha thi aur yeh tumhare sar par chot kya hua"

Trisha narrated the whole incident.

Rajbir - "Trisha Armav mar chuka hai"

Trisha - "kya par kaise"

Bikram - "kisi ne uska gala kaat diya hai"

Raghav was about to say something in between Dr. Arti came with fingerprints report.

Dr. Arti - "Raghav yeh rahi fingerprints report aur I am shocked with the results"

Raghav - "kyo aisa kya hai"

Dr Arti - "tum khud hi pad lo".

Arti passed the report to Raghav. Raghav read it and was stunned for a moment and close the file.

Trisha - "kya hua Raghav kya hai report me"

Raghav - "us knofe par mile fingerprints tumhare fingerprints se match karte hai Trisha"

Trisha - "what!! Kya keh rahe ho yeh kaise possible hai"

Raghav - "accha batao tumhari ring kaha hai"

Trisha looked at her hand and found it missing.

Trisha - "Raghav mujhe nahi pata gir gayi hogi shayad"

Raghav take out the ring kept as a evidence

Raghav-"yeh hume Arnav ki lash ke paas se mili hai"

Trisha - "Trust me Raghav mujhe nahi pata ki yeh ring vaha kaise ayi"

Dr. Arti - "Raghav ek aur ajeeb baat hai jo blood floor pe mila hai us me Trisha ka bhi DNA hai."

Raghav - "Trisha kya hua kal raat"

Trisha - "mujge jo bhi yaad tha mene tumhe bata diya me sach keh rahi hoon At least you Raghav believe me"

Raghav-"mera dil keh raha hai tum nirdosh ho par yeh saboot bhi jhoote nahi hai"

Trisha was stunned as she believe Raghav would trust her.

In Dilip Chauhan's cabin

Trisha - "jai hind sir"

Raghav - "jai hind"

Dilip - "Trisha saare saboot aur gawah tumhare khilaf hai, mujhe na chahte hua bhi yeh kehna pad raha hai that you are suspended from CBI. Ab tum yeh case handle nahi karogi. Wait for the notice."

Raghav - "Sir abhi tak Trisha par lage ilsaam sabit nahi hua hai"

Dilip-"Raghav, I understand your emotions but CBI emotions par nahi proofs par believe karti hai"

Raghav was about to say but Trisha hold his hand under the table. Raghav was looking at Trisha, her face was full of anger and grief. She is such a strong and bold lady so she handled the the situation practically but from heart she was so sad.

Trisha - "sir yeh raha mera batch"

Trisha looked at Raghav and leave the cabin without saying a word. Raghav could see pain and insult of her face.

Hope you like the update. Please share your views on the story, as It means a lot for me.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Nice start to the update... The entire team was keeping an eye on arnav's father but still he got shot during that power cut off.. Trisha going alone and finding an injured arnav... then being hit... so scary... i felt so bad for her...😭

I loved the way Raghav is worried for her, he knows that she never takes leaves easily... he is sure that she is not right at the moment...👏

Trisha being trapped as the culprit behind the murder... hope she is fine... i'm sure Raghav will bring her out of this.

Dilip sir suspending her on the basis of evidences... they have to go against their hearts and minds many times in order to obey the law and order... poor people😭

Hats off to Trisha... she behaves so maturely in such situation also... 👏👏

Lovely story dear... waiting for the next part...

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Nice start to the update... The entire team was keeping an eye on arnav's father but still he got shot during that power cut off.. Trisha going alone and finding an injured arnav... then being hit... so scary... i felt so bad for her...😭
Thanks dear, Yes you will know in further parts how Suresh was shot instead of such atight security.
I loved the way Raghav is worried for her, he knows that she never takes leaves easily... he is sure that she is not right at the moment...👏
Yes Raghav knows Trisha very well he is sure about every habit of Trisha.
Trisha being trapped as the culprit behind the murder... hope she is fine... i'm sure Raghav will bring her out of this.
Dilip sir suspending her on the basis of evidences... they have to go against their hearts and minds many times in order to obey the law and order... poor people😭
Yes I thought Trisha is so strict in her laws but still she can be trapped in such a situation.
Hats off to Trisha... she behaves so maturely in such situation also... 👏👏
Lovely story dear... waiting for the next part...
Dear you will see Trisha 's another emotional part as it's not easy to handle with such a situation where no one is in your support.
Will be posting the teaser soon.