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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

Raghav ran towards her but she already left the office.


8:00pm

Raghav - "Trisha kaha hai phone bhi switched off hai"

Raghav's phone rang up and he saw the Trisha's mom calling him. He pick up at ones.

Trisha's mom-"beta Trisha abhi tak nahi ayi uska phone bhi switched off hai kya vo tum logo ke sath hai"

Raghav understood that Trisha did not told her mom about her suspension. He too hide that.

Raghav - "ji aunty vo kisi kaam se gayi hai she will return"

Raghav told lie from Trisha's mom for her sake. But now he was more tensed as she was not at home so where she was.

Rajbir - "Raghav tum kya soch rahe ho me jaanta tum Trisha ke baare me soch rahe ho"

Raghav came out of his thoughts.

Raghav-"me jaanta hoon Trisha ne yeh murder nahi kiya hai"

Rajbir - "par saboot vo bhi toh jhoote nahi hai"

Raghav - "Saboot banaye bhi ja sakte hai par me nahi manta ki Trisha ne Arnav ka murder kiya hai"

Raghav was driving to his home when he suddenly remembered that he saw Trisha's farmhouse keys in Trisha's hands

Raghav drove his car towards Trisha's farmhouse.


Farmhouse

Raghav entered ring the bell but nobody opened it so he opened it his nail cutter.

Raghav saw that the drawing room was messed up, all the things were fallen here and there. He started fearing a lot. He heard a cry from the room. He moved towards bedroom and found Trisha sitting on the bed with her hairs opened. She was crying badly and do not notice that Raghav is in. Raghav saw a wine bottle half emptied and a wine glass with a lipstick mark. He understood that Trisha had drunk first time.

Raghav - "Trisha tum yaha kya kar rahi ho, apna phone bhi switch off karke rakha hai aur yeh kya haal bana rakha hai tumne apna"

Trisha - "Raghav leave me alone please"

Raghav hold Trisha in her arms and saw her face red due to tears.

Raghav - "Trisha kya hua tum ro kyo rahi ho"

Trisha - "kya hua?? Mujhe CBI se suspend kar diya gaya Arnav ke murder ki vajah se, I don't care duniya kya sochti hai par tumhe bhi yeh lagata hai mene murder kiya hai"

Trisha lost her balance but Raghav supported her.

Raghav - "tumne sharab pi hai"

Trisha-"haa par tum yaha se jao leave me alone "

Raghav -" mujhe pehle bhi tum par yakeen tha aur aaj bhi hai tum ne Arnav ka murder nahi kiya hai and I will proof it"

Trisha - "Raghav please jao varna tumhari job chale jayegi"

Raghav - "Mujhe mansoor hai aur yeh meri problem hai"

Trisha - "tumhara career, tumhara maksat sab khatam ho jayega"

Raghav - "Hi sakta hai par vo bhi meri problem hai tumhe kyo itni fikar hai meri"

Trisha - "because.. I love you"

Trisha fall on his chest and became unconscious due to alcohol. Raghav took her in his arms and drove the car to his house

Raghav was still thinking about the Three magical words she said to him but he can't reach any conclusion because Trisha had drink a lot and was saying in it's effect.

Raghav placed her on his bedroom, but her hands were still behind his neck. He tried to move then Trisha hold his hand right hand. Raghav could see a beauty lying on his bed but he need to control his emotions. He slept near Trisha.


Morning

Trisha woke up with slight head ache, she found herself lying on bed.She thought about the night but concluded it as a dream. She tried to move but found Raghav sitting beside her. She understood that it was not a dream whatever she said to Raghav was in real life. She was nervous how Raghav will react to her talks. Raghav feel some hair strands on his face and woke at once. He saw Trisha sitting on bed. Both eyes met but suddenly Trisha thought of night and turn her face. Raghav don't know what happened, he thought it might be due to sudden trauma last night. After sometimes Trisha look back and pointed towards her hand which Raghav was holding. Raghav immediately leave it.

Raghav - "Tum tayar ho jao me tumhare liye breakfast le ata hoon"

Trisha nodded


She dressed in her casual wears. Raghav walked inside the room with breakfast tray in his hands

Trisha - "Thanks Raghav and kal raat jo bhi hua uske liye I am sorry"

Raghav - "Sirf sorry se kaam nahi chalega you have to promise me ki tum kabhi aisa kuch nahi karogi"

Trisha - "I assure you me kabhi aisa nahi karungi"


Raghav - "Us raat jis admi ne tumpar hamla kiya tha uske baare kuch specific yaad hai jaise usane kya pehana tha ya phir koi awaaz"

Trisha - "zyaada kuch nahi... Ha yaad aya usana apne Right hand me ek ring pehni thi... vaise hi.. Jaise Mr. Suresh ne pehani thi"

Raghav - "ab is Suresh se milna hoga vo hi hume kuch bata sakta hai"

Before leaving for office. Raghav came to her.

Raghav - "Trisha apna dhyan rakhna Bye!!"

Trisha smiled sweetly.


Raghav called Rajbir and Bikram and told them to meet Mr Suresh. During this, Raghav went to local police station to find information about Suresh And Arnav.

Police inspector - "Sir Suresh saxena!! Vahi jiske business partner ne suicide kar liya"

Raghav - "ji haan!! Mujhe is Suresh aur uske baare me jitni detail apke paas hai vo mujhe dijiye"

Police inspector gave him a file to read

Raghav-"yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Yeh hai Suresh saxena aur Arnav saxena "

Raghav pointed towards photos given by police inspector. Raghav take out his phone and show him some photos.

Raghav-" aap in dono ko jaante ha"

Police inspector -" ji nahi! Mr. Suresh ka bohot bada business hai aur vo toh teen saal se India aye hi nahi"

Raghav thinked a little bit, suddenly his phone ranged.

Rajbir-"Suresh hospital me nahi hai"

Raghav - "kya!! Oh no jaldi se mere ghar pahocho Trisha ki jaan ko khatara hai"

Raghav drove the car to his house as fast as he can. He was continuously trying Trisha's phone but it was switched off.

Trisha was cooking food for her. She heard some noise from bedroom's window. She became alert.

Trisha - "kon hai vaha bahar niklo"

No one responded. She take out her gun from drawer and move towards bedroom. She saw a man wearing mask attacked on her. She was struggling to protect herself suddenly heard noise of car and the man hit her with the vase and made her unconscious.

Raghav-"Trisha kaha ho tum"

Raghav heard some noise and entered his bedroom and found Trisha lying on the floor.

Raghav - "Trisha ankhe kholo"

Raghav heard a laughter from behind. He turned back and found Suresh standing with a gun in his hand.

Raghav - "Suresh ulf Ahmad shah kya chahte ho humse"

Ahmad - " badla!! I want Revenge from you and your Trisha"

Ahmad was about to press the trigger of his gun but Raghav cleverly take his gun and shoot him.On his leg.


Interrogation room

Ahmad - "Haan main tum dono se badla lena chahta tha mere bhai ki maut ka badla usne kya bigaada tha tum logo ka"

Raghav - "Bhai!! Naveen ki maut ek hatsa tha hamne use bacgane keliye apni jaan laga di par afsos vo desh ki shahid ho gaya "

Trisha - "Naveen ek bohot accha aur nek insaan tha jisne desh ke liye kurbani di par tum uske bhaai ho yeh jaankar sharam ati hai"

Raghav - "tumne Arnav ulf Javed ko kyo mara vo toh tumhara sathi tha"

Ahmad cried - "me aap dono ko marna chahta tha isliye mene nakli I D banakar Suresh saxena ban gaya. Javed ko dheere se dar lagne laga usne yeh kaam karne se mana kar diya isliye mene use raaste se hata diya aur khood pe goli chalayi jisase koi mujhpar shak na kare mera plan thik ja raha tha Raghav agar tum time par nahi ate toh mera badla pura ho jaata"

Raghav-"is kaam ke liye tumhe tumhara bhai bhi kabhi maaf nahi karta"

Trisha - "le jao ise"



Trisha and all the team members are busy with the case formalities. A gentle man enters in the cabin.

Raghav - "are Mr. Arnav Saxena aap yaha"

Arnav - "ji main aap sab ko thank you bolna chahta hoon, aap logo ne ballistic Arnav aur Suresh ko pakad kar mujhe aur papa ko ek musibat se bachaya hai"

Trisha - "Thanks ki koi zaroorat nahi hai its our duty"

Arnav - "ek request hai aap logo se kya aap mere dad ki party hai so aap log please party me zaroor ayiye"

Trisha - "actually hum log nahi a payenge..."

Arnav interrupted - "no Trisha please aap log ayenge toh hume lagega you accepted our thanks"

Raghav and Trisha said together - "ok!!"

They look at each other and smiled widely.

Party venue

Trisha was wearing a navy blue colored long gown. She was standing alone and was waiting for her team members. Suddenly feel a guy beside her. She saw Raghav standing and wore white descent shirt. He was looking so handsome that she stared him for a minute.

Trisha - "Raghav kitna late kar diya me kitna akela feel kar rahi thi"

Raghav - "mere bina!!"

Trisha was stunt but replied by twisting the topic.

Trisha - "vaise kuch loge"

Raghav ordered two glasses of wine.

Trisha - "do glasses kyo??"

Raghav - "kyo? tum nahi peeyogi"

Trisha - "Raghav me sharab nahi peeti"

Raghav smiled - "ek hi jhoot ek hi admi se kitni baar bologi"

Trisha remembered the night and started blushing but hide it.


Lawn

Raghav and Trisha was walking.

Raghav and Trisha was holding a glass of wine and saw a couple standing a bit far from them. They could hear their talks and looks like the man had drunk.

Man-"me ek baat kahoon tumse tum please naraaz mat hona I love you "

He kissed her hand and ask him to marry him.

The lady standing with him got stunt.


Trisha -" nashe me log kuch bhi bolte hai "

Raghav smiled


The lady agreed for marriage.


Raghav -" aur aksar sach bolte hai sahi kaha na Trisha "

Trisha was lost in her thoughts and came out of it.

Raghav-" Kya soch rahi ho"

Trisha - "Raghav ek sawal poochu us raat mene jo bhi tumse kaha kya tum bhi mere baare me vaisa hi sochte ho"

Raghav remembered that she said him - I love you.

Raghav came close to her

Raghav - "I love you"

Trisha was stunt, Raghav thought that she is not ready for this.

Raghav - "dekho Trisha I am sorry mujhe tumse aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha.."

Trisha kissed him passionately, Raghav too responded and both were lost in each other.

Raghav opened his eyes and saw Trisha closed her eyes due to shy. He hugged her tightly.

Rajbir entered the lawn in search of members and got the biggest shock, he saw both of they hugging tightly like couples.

Trisha saw Rajbir and got aparted.

Trisha - "Rajbir tum yaha? Matlab baki team members kaha hai"

Raghav saw Bikram and Swati coming their.

Raghav - "Hi!! Everyone"

Both Raghav and Trisha waa blushing so hard that the redness is visible and in the same time awkward too.

Rajbir - "Bikram, Swati hum log chalte party me"

Bikram-"Raghav aur Trisha tum log bhi chalo na"

Rajbir - "nahi vo log nahi a sakte"

Raghav and Trisha understood that Rajbir has saw them

Swati - "kyo??"

Rajbir-"Kya hai Raghav aur Trisha ko ek naya case ke baare me discuss karna hai so.. "

Bikram and swati was confused but still they agree.

Raghav and Trisha witness a beautiful night spent with each other.

Hope you like the update. Please like and review for improvement. All suggestions are welcomed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Ananya 🤗
I loved this part as it dealt so emotionally with Trisha and her mental condition.
She went to her farmhouse and locked herself and drunk. She was not able to digest the fact that Raghav thought that she was an accused.
Loved how Raghav took her charge and she said those three magical words !
Loved him taking to his home and taking care of her. The morning was an embarrassment for her, and she could not utter much. I liked how Raghav pacified her and left for office with her full safety in mind.
The case got disclosed and the revenge came into existence. The culprit wanted to have revenge from him and Trisha. But he was wrong in knowing the fact that his bother gave his life for the country.

Raghav knew that her life was in danger and rushed to his home and caught Suresh on time. Though Trisha got injured, but they caught him on time and on the dot.
Loved the party scene. ! Most lovely !!!
The navy blue gown of Trisha complimented Raghav's white shirt. Both were looking stunning and made the confession and got their first kiss of love !🤗 ❤️
Beautiful moment and loved how Rajbir saw them and then asked swati to leave as they have to discuss the case of their own life !😉
Lovely, outstanding and awesome ! 👏👏
Ananya, i just got bowled over during the last scene. Very finely penned down. Thanks for this interesting story and it's outcome of Raghav loving his life and Trisha loving her love !
Thanks and huggies and loves ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Ananya... just loved every bit of it...
Firstly starting with the way Raghav getting worried for Trisha when he realised that she had not reached her home... and he telling others that she can't be the one who murdered arnav and that evidences can be fake but his belief in her innocence stands with her always... lovely👏
Felt so bad when i read that the drawing room was in a mess and he heard cries from the bedroom😭... the way you presented Trisha's state was mindblowing... i could imagine actually seeing her like that.👏... just wonder where did she get that wine bottle from..???😉😉😉 just kidding...
The way Raghav told her that he believes her innocence in this case and she confessing her love for him under the effect of alcohol and then Raghav taking her to his house and taking care of her... so romantic and emotional❤️ he realised what she was going through when noone was believing her... their love needs no evidences to believe each other...
Raghav pacifying her in the morning and then going to office for work so that he can prove that she did not commit the crime... he would not let her be suspect for long...
Raghav getting worried on realising that her life is in danger and driving as fast as he could was so obvious... he reached there on time and saved her...👏
The way the case got solved was well planned by you... that was awesome...
The best part was the party scene... the way they both could confess their love for each other was sooo romantic...❤️🤗
Loved how Rajbir took the others away so that they could enjoy their privacy... lovely
Thank you so much for another mindblowing story... hope you continue to write such wonderful stories in future as well.

Note: just one thing, i was initially expecting her colleague Aditya to be involved in some way as i was wondering the reason for his introduction in the story... but after you finished, he was nowhere involved... so was it that he was just introduced as a person being randomly present in the party who knew Trisha pehle se and who was mistaken thinking both of them to be either husband wife or a dating couple... ?
Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awesome update
So all this was planned to take revenge from Ratri by Ahmed MU about his brother's death
These kind of MU do happen and sometimes people go through wrong ways in the sadness of the loss of ur beloved ones. I liked the way you showed Trisha's emotional stress she was so hurt that Raghav asked about the evidence against her. Of course he trust her but he should have said that b4 in office itself if he has done that she won't have emotionally this much stressed
Anyways I loved the support he gave to her and his worry said all what he feels for her and Trisha in the effect of alcohol confessing her love for him they sleeping together in a bed and the awkwardness shared next day
Raghav worried for her as she is in danger
The party lawn scene was too good the confession the kiss the hug witnessed by poor Rajbir and he wisely took other's away for there privacy leaving Ratri blushed
Over all it was a perfect update it had romance, emotions, thrilling aspect and friendship
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update dear loved this soo much .soo this all was done to take revenge from RaTri .such a interesting case simply loved it a lot .loved all the RaTri scenes simply awesome. the drunk Trisha scene was soo cute raghav taking Care of her and she saying I love you was such a cute scene .and finally their confession was soo cute could literally imagine rajbirs expression when they say RaTri hugging like a couple. thanks for such a wonderful story. loved it soo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Ananya 🤗

I loved this part as it dealt so emotionally with Trisha and her mental condition.
Yes Trisha was so shocked when Raghav suspected her.
She went to her farmhouse and locked herself and drunk. She was not able to digest the fact that Raghav thought that she was an accused.
Trisha is a strong lady but still she have heart so I showed emotional part too.
Loved how Raghav took her charge and she said those three magical words !
Loved him taking to his home and taking care of her. The morning was an embarrassment for her, and she could not utter much. I liked how Raghav pacified her and left for office with her full safety in mind.
Raghav was guilty for his behavior and he can't see her in this situation so he took her to his home. He knows that Trisha confess her love but still he had to wait because she said in her sub consciousness.
The case got disclosed and the revenge came into existence. The culprit wanted to have revenge from him and Trisha. But he was wrong in knowing the fact that his bother gave his life for the country.
Yes the misunderstanding results in such a big case.

Raghav knew that her life was in danger and rushed to his home and caught Suresh on time. Though Trisha got injured, but they caught him on time and on the dot.
Raghavs prediction is always right when it comes to Trisha's life.
Loved the party scene. ! Most lovely !!!
The navy blue gown of Trisha complimented Raghav's white shirt. Both were looking stunning and made the confession and got their first kiss of love !🤗 ❤️
I made it light romantic, I am glad that you like it babita.
Beautiful moment and loved how Rajbir saw them and then asked swati to leave as they have to discuss the case of their own life !😉
Rajbir was so stunt, he has a doubt but it will come true was not expected.
Lovely, outstanding and awesome ! 👏👏
Ananya, i just got bowled over during the last scene. Very finely penned down. Thanks for this interesting story and it's outcome of Raghav loving his life and Trisha loving her love !
Thanks and huggies and loves ❤️
Thanks dear this compliments means a lot for me.
Loves to you. ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Awesome update Ananya... just loved every bit of it...

Firstly starting with the way Raghav getting worried for Trisha when he realised that she had not reached her home... and he telling others that she can't be the one who murdered arnav and that evidences can be fake but his belief in her innocence stands with her always... lovely👏
Raghav realized his mistake somewhere in his heart he was confident that she can't do that.He got panicked when he knew that Trisha is missing.
Felt so bad when i read that the drawing room was in a mess and he heard cries from the bedroom😭... the way you presented Trisha's state was mindblowing... i could imagine actually seeing her like that.👏... just wonder where did she get that wine bottle from..???😉😉😉 just kidding...
Trisha though a strong lady has emotions amd heart which was hurt by Raghav's behavior. Trisha belong to a High class family so mostly they have their own bars arranged in their houses but I must say that your deduction power is very nice.
The way Raghav told her that he believes her innocence in this case and she confessing her love for him under the effect of alcohol and then Raghav taking her to his house and taking care of her... so romantic and emotional❤️ he realised what she was going through when noone was believing her... their love needs no evidences to believe each other...
Yes Raghav heard that magical words which he wanted to listen from years but still he was such a man who cares for her and can't take advantage of her situation so he had to wait.
Raghav pacifying her in the morning and then going to office for work so that he can prove that she did not commit the crime... he would not let her be suspect for long...
Raghav getting worried on realising that her life is in danger and driving as fast as he could was so obvious... he reached there on time and saved her...👏
The way the case got solved was well planned by you... that was awesome...
Thanks dear actually it was a revenge which was made like a case to trap Raghav and Trisha.
The best part was the party scene... the way they both could confess their love for each other was sooo romantic...❤️🤗
Loved how Rajbir took the others away so that they could enjoy their privacy... lovely
Thank you so much for another mindblowing story... hope you continue to write such wonderful stories in future as well.
I want that Ratri should confess their love happily so I made it light romantic. Rajbir got his biggest shock but want them together with a happy life.

Note: just one thing, i was initially expecting her colleague Aditya to be involved in some way as i was wondering the reason for his introduction in the story... but after you finished, he was nowhere involved... so was it that he was just introduced as a person being randomly present in the party who knew Trisha pehle se and who was mistaken thinking both of them to be either husband wife or a dating couple... ?
Aditya was just a colleague and I added to show Ratri scene

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Trisha though a strong lady has emotions amd heart which was hurt by Raghav's behavior. Trisha belong to a High class family so mostly they have their own bars arranged in their houses but I must say that your deduction power is very nice.

Thanks a lot i just wanted to make the review light hearted...😉👍🏼,
Thanks for this lovely compliment


Aditya was just a colleague and I added to show Ratri scene

Okay got it... actually this RaTri scene was awesome...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update dear loved this soo much .soo this all was done to take revenge from RaTri .such a interesting case simply loved it a lot .loved all the RaTri scenes simply awesome. the drunk Trisha scene was soo cute raghav taking Care of her and she saying I love you was such a cute scene .and finally their confession was soo cute could literally imagine rajbirs expression when they say RaTri hugging like a couple. thanks for such a wonderful story. loved it soo much

Thanks Tasha, I am glad that you like the update I made it little emotional and little romantic to make it light story. I love that youloke the last part, I personally too like it when Raghav flirt with Trisha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Awesome story, really loved it a lot

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