Ratri TS :Revenge . Part 3 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow, a new teaser 👏👏
I liked Raghav takiing initiative to take Trisha closer to him 😉 And Trisha's red cheeeks were saying so much !
I too lost when Raghav got lost
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Wow, a new teaser 👏👏

I liked Raghav takiing initiative to take Trisha closer to him 😉 And Trisha's red cheeeks were saying so much !
I too lost when Raghav got lost

Thanks babita, Raghav always find ways to come closure to her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Such a cute and romantic teaser. Raghav pulling her close and Trisha blushing...☺️
Awesome... please continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a romantic teaser can't wait to read update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Such a cute and romantic teaser. Raghav pulling her close and Trisha blushing...☺️

Awesome... please continue soon...

Thanks manisha, will try to post first part tonight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Such a romantic teaser can't wait to read update soon

Thanks will update by tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

CBI Headquarters

All were busy with their pending works. Suddenly a gentleman enters in the office.

Rajbir-"yeh kon hai"

Raghav - "India ka rehane vala nahi hai abhi abhorrent India aya hai, amir ghar se hai aur businessman hai "

Bikram - "that means tumne use pehle se jaante ho"

Raghav - "nahi mene bhi ise pehli baar dekha hai"

The gentleman came near to Raghav.

Raghav - "Hi! Arnav kya kaam hai"

Gentleman-"ji mujhe Trisha diwan se milna hai"

Raghav pointed towards left

Rajbir - "tumne toh kaha tum use nahi jaante phir tumhe uska naam kaise pata"

Raghav - "aajkal ka fashion hai log apne mobile phones par apna naam ya uska first letter likhvate hai Arnav ne bhi likhvaya tha"

In Trisha's cabin

Trisha - "Guys yeh hai Arnav Saxena ek mashoor businessman abhi tak yeh London me the abhi abhi India aye hai.

Bikram smiled at Raghav, his predictions were right.

Trisha -" Toh Arnav ji aap ne cheif ko kis case ke baare me baata rahe the"

Arnav-"yes Trisha if you don't mind I can call you Trisha "

Trisha -" yah sure "

Arnav-" mere father ke friend aur business partner Ashish Gupta ka murder hua hai "

Trisha -" par police reports ke Anusar unhone suicide kiya tha"

Arnav - "aisa nahi hai Trisha Gupta uncle ko na koi depression ya stress nahi tha phir vo suicide karenge mere father ko lagata hai yeh murder business ki vajah se hua hai isliye agli baari unki hai, so please aap log is case ko solve kare aur mere father ki jaan bachaye"

Trisha - "Arnav listen mujhe police ki reports sahi lagati hai so"

Arnav - "thik hai it's my mistake that I came here and yah yeh aap sab logo ko invitation hai mere dad ne ek naye project par party rakhi hai"

Arnav leave the cabin in anger.

Raghav-"boss kya karna hai"

Trisha - "dekho ministry se call aya hai jaana to padega"

Raghav - "is party me chalte hai kai anjaan chehre pata chal jayege"

Trisha - "fine"


Party Venue

Trisha entered the party room in well dressed light pink saree. Raghav and Rajbir was going to wish Mr. Arnav but Raghav stopped in the way and was seeing Trisha as if he was seeing an angel.

Rajbir -" kya hua Raghav ruk kyo gaye"

Raghav-"kuch nahi bas aise hi"

Rajbir noticed that Raghav was staring at Trishaand smiling which normally Raghav don't do with other girls

Rajbir whispered - "Trisha sundar lag rahi hai na"

Raghav-"Bohot zyada!! "

Rajbir coughed and Raghav came out of his stupor.


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Trisha was standing alone at a corner and was lost in thoughts. And suddenly Raghav came near to her and placed his right hand on her waist and pulled her near to him.

Trisha - "Raghav kya kar rahe ho?

Raghav -" tumhe apne paas la raha hoon"

Trisha - "Raghav!!!Leave me mazak mat karo kisi ne dekh liya to.."

Raghav - "to kya me tumhara koi boyfriend to hoon nahi phir kyo ghabra rahi ho ya kahi tum mujhe... "

Trisha interrupted - "aisa kuch nahi hai"

Trisha was blushing. Raghav could see the redness of her cheeks. Trisha was trying to hide it but she was not able to do so. Raghav was so lost in her that he touched her red cheeks. Trisha looked at him in shock .

Suddenly a guy came and tap on his shoulder

Person - "Trisha dewan right"

Trisha - "yes!!"

Person - "tumne mujhe nahi pehchana hum dono training me sath the"

Trisha - "let me guess tum Aditya pathak ho Right"

Person - "Excellent!!"

Aditya - "Trisha tumne bataya nahi ki tumne shadi lar li"

Aditya points towards Raghav. Trisha looked at Raghav angrily but he was smiling waiting for her answer.

Trisha - "aisa nahi Aditya.."

Aditya interrupted - "accha toh yeh tumhara boyfriend hai"

Raghav burst with laughter at his conclusion.

Trisha - "nahi yeh Raghav hai mera colleague"

Aditya - "oh! I am sorry vo mujhe tum dono ko dekh kar laga ki... (Aditya was looking at Raghav's hand placed on Trisha's waist) Well leave it mujhe abhi jaana hoga you both continue"

Raghav was laughing so much. Trisha was so embarrassed due to him so how can she leave him.

Trisha - "isliye kaha tha aisa mat laro tum pagal ho kya? Kuch bhi karte rahte ho?"

Raghav - "jab se tumhe dekh hai pagal hi ho gaya hoon aur... Gor karna ki baat hai Me yeh sab sirf tumhare sath hi kyo karta hoon

Trisha - "an kaam par dhyan de le"

Raghav-"jo hukum meri boss, is party me mr. Arnav ke kai business aur family rivals bhi aye hai "

Trisha -" family rivals kon"

Raghav - "Mr. Sudhir Arnav Saxena ke chote bhai jo saalo se unke business ko apna banana chahte hai"

Trisha - "so he has a motive to kill Mr. Arnav and his partner"

Raghav-"Right par hum kisi par aise shak nahi kar sakte without any proof ke aur yeh Sudhir hume sach batayega bhi nahi"

Trisha - "kese nahi batayega!!!"

Trisha opened her hair clip and walked towards Sudhir.

Trisha - "Hello gentleman kya aap se apka naam puch sakti hon?

Sudhir-" ji mera naam sudhir hai but what's your name beauty "

Sudhir kissed Trisha's hand. Raghav could hear their conversation through Bluetooth. Raghav was so irritated at the scene that he could break Sudhir's teeths at the moment.

Trisha hesitated at the moment but replied -" ji Trisha aap yaha akele baar me aap party enjoy kyo nahi kar rahe "

Sudhir -" khaak party enjoy karoon. Trisha ek baat kahoon Arnav jhoota aur bohot dhoke baaz insaan hai usne mera business band karvake khud itna bada business man ban gaya hai"

Trisha - "Oh tab toh apko bohot gussa aya hoga un par"

Sudhir - "man karta hai khoon kardoo is.. Is Arnav ka"

Trisha got alert-"isliye apne unke partner ka khoon kar diya"

Sudhir drank too much alcohol so he was not able to hear Trisha properly.

Sudhir - "accha hua bhagwan ne use is duniya se utha liya varna me.."

And sudhir became unconscious on the baar.


Trisha - "ispe shak karna obvious hai iske pas sources hai aur motive bhi"

Raghav-"ho sakta hai par phir we don't have any proof for arrest "

Trisha -" hume yaha mojoot sabhi logo par nazar rakhni hogi killer agar inme se koi hai toh definitely Arnav ko marne ki koshish zaroor karega"

Trisha moved forward to involve in the party. Raghav stopped her by holding her hand. Trisha turned and Raghav kissed her hand and

Move from their. Trisha was left with no clue for his action.

Hope you like the update. All comments and suggestions are welcomed. Please like and review.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
thanks for the update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Lovely update Ananya👏
First of all i liked the starting, how nicely you started in a similar manner as in episode 4 of the serial.
great...🤗
Coming to the case... interesting as always...
Raghav admiring Trisha's looks and speaking out what his heart said in front of Rajbir was so cute...❤️
Aditya coming up to them and mistaking him to be her husband/boyfriend... justified on his part as what he saw between both of them, anyone would be mistaken. Raghav laughing his heart out was so cute😉
Trisha going up to Sudhir and using her skills to extract the truth ... just mindblowing👏👏 Trisha usually doesn't do all this but she is ready to do whatever is needed for a case... so mature.
Hats off Ananya... a great story building up...
Loves❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely update Ananya👏

First of all i liked the starting, how nicely you started in a similar manner as in episode 4 of the serial.
great...🤗
I have tried my best to make it like episode, I am glad that you like that.
Coming to the case... interesting as always...
Raghav admiring Trisha's looks and speaking out what his heart said in front of Rajbir was so cute...❤️
Aditya coming up to them and mistaking him to be her husband/boyfriend... justified on his part as what he saw between both of them, anyone would be mistaken. Raghav laughing his heart out was so cute😉
Yes Raghav 's mischievous activity always creates confession like this.
Trisha going up to Sudhir and using her skills to extract the truth ... just mindblowing👏👏 Trisha usually doesn't do all this but she is ready to do whatever is needed for a case... so mature.
Hats off Ananya... a great story building up...
Yes Trisha can do anything to solve the case. For her duty comes first. I hope I fulfilled all the expectations.
Loves❤️

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