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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Lovely start to story.
Liked the way the story started with entire team enjoying in free time. They have become like a family now. The truth and dare game was interesting... loved how you made us recall gauri and rajbir's relation. i'm sure if she continued with the serial, their relationship must have progressed.
Trisha praying that she should not get a chance was so sweet... but she had to be caught. Her unanswered question, i'm sure that would be addressed later in the story.
Now coming to the case... interesting with no clue as yet...
The way Raghav used his deductions was fabulous👏👏
Trisha must have been so shocked when he did that act and Rajbir entering the room and finding them so close... he had to be doubtful of their relation..
All in all a great story in the making...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely start
Loved the truth or dare game and question to Trisha was left unanswered
Loved the case too
The way Raghav came to conclusion that someone who is close to Ragini is murderer
Loved Ratri scenes too
Continue soon

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like the truth and dare game. In second part you will know why I placed Raghav's question. Please update your story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely start to story.

Liked the way the story started with entire team enjoying in free time. They have become like a family now. The truth and dare game was interesting... loved how you made us recall gauri and rajbir's relation. i'm sure if she continued with the serial, their relationship must have progressed.
Yes dear, The team is just like a family they share their joys and sorrow with each other. I have shown Gauri and Rajbir 's relation to make the game more interesting.
Trisha praying that she should not get a chance was so sweet... but she had to be caught. Her unanswered question, i'm sure that would be addressed later in the story.
Yes you are right in second part you will find the reason of Raghav asking her this question.
Now coming to the case... interesting with no clue as yet...
The way Raghav used his deductions was fabulous👏👏
Trisha must have been so shocked when he did that act and Rajbir entering the room and finding them so close... he had to be doubtful of their relation..
Trisha said It was him if someone else would be there then she would scream. Rajbir is always doubtful of Trisha and Raghav's relation.
All in all a great story in the making...
Thanks for review again.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for the update dear off to read it

No problem dear take your time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome update dear loved it soo much .The ccd scene was soo cute .loved the teams Bonding while playing truth &dare .loved how raghav teased Rajbir about Gauri. Loved how raghav asked trisha if she loves anyone .The case is soo interesting. Loved Raghav's way of romancing trisha in the room. Thanks for such a wonderful update was really feeling I was watching the case on tv .and so sorry for the late review was a little busy at home
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome update dear loved it soo much .The ccd scene was soo cute .loved the teams Bonding while playing truth &dare .loved how raghav teased Rajbir about Gauri. Loved how raghav asked trisha if she loves anyone .The case is soo interesting. Loved Raghav's way of romancing trisha in the room. Thanks for such a wonderful update was really feeling I was watching the case on tv .and so sorry for the late review was a little busy at home

Thanks dear I am glad that you love the update. Will try to post next part by tonight or tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Hey Ananya 🤗
Lovely new mystery in making 👏👏
Firstly, i loved the bond the team share. They relaxed and played the game of dare n truth. I loved Rajbir becoming the bakra 😆 And no one can go home without answering Raghav' queries. But luck played it's part and Trisha was saved 😉 😳
Now the case and that during the relaxation time for the team. This shows how reliable these people are. They give their best to every case, what may come.
The case is interesting. The suicide or the murder ?? Yet to be proved. But surely it's a murder as proved by Raghav.
And what a way to show his boss that the case was a murder 😉 I mean, he did all the activity in the given time span and showed that it was a murder by some known person to the victim.
Liked to see how this team relies on Raghav and so does Trisha.
Now the case has it's name. But who could that be ?? Sooraj or someone else who knew her and could have come to the room of the victim and for whom she was almost leaving Sooraj ??
Many speculations, but will wait for your version to the case.
Thanks Ananya, for being so energetic in placing such a fab and interesting plot. 👏👏

And sorry for being so late 😳
Loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Part 2

Raghav was leaving the room and stop in the way. He look at the floor near the dressing table. He found some pieces of glass.
Trisha - "kya hai Raghav?
Raghav -" Trisha case ke climax ka samay a gaya hai"

CBI Headquarters

Sooraj and Anil were called in the head quarter.
Trisha - "jald hi Ragini ka khooni pakda jayega"
Sooraj - "vo kaise!! Matlab khooni ne to koi sabot nahi choda tha"
Raghav - "ha par vo is samay hospital me hai"
Trisha - "par Raghav abhi bhi uski jaan ko khatara ho sakta hai na"
Raghav - "uski rakhwali karne ke liye humari team rahegi na"
Trisha - "tum dono me se to koi killer nahi hai na agar hua to baad me bohot pachtana padega isliye pehle hi confess kar dena"
Sooraj and Anil refused and move out of the room.

Raghav-"mujhe pura yakeen hai killer use marane zaroor ayenga"
Trisha - "uske liye hume pehle se doctor ko is game me milana hoga"
Raghav - "toh thik hai par tumhare liye mene ek special role soch kar rakha hai"
Trisha - "kya??"
Raghav - "maa!!"
Trisha looked at Raghav who was smiling and blushed profusely.

Hospital

Raghav and Trisha entered the hospital. Trisha was wearing a red and black saree and small golden earrings in her ears. Raghav was wearing white shirt with his collar buttons open.
Raghav-"ji doctor Aditya se milna hai"
Receptionist - "ji patient ka naam"
Raghav looked at herand replied - "Mrs Trisha sinha meri wife" and placed his hand on his waist.
Trisha was shocked at his moment but she handled it.
Trisha - "tumhe aur koi naam nahi mila tha aur tumhari wife"
Raghav - "kyo naam nahi pasand? Mujhe toh bohot accha laga aur mere jitni care koi apni wife ya close friend ke liye hi karta hai toh mene wife kehdiya"
Trisha blushed at his reply according to him she was so special like his wife or close friend.

Trisha and Raghav told the doctor about the case and requested him for the act. Dr. Aditya assure them that he would not tell this to anyone.
Dr. Aditya -" aap fikar mat kijiye yeh baat hum teeno ke beech hi rahegi par me Trisha ji ko kis reason se admit karu?
Raghav and Trisha looked at each other as they don't thought of that.
Raghav - "as a pregnant woman."
Aditya-"fine!!"

In room

Trisha - "tume aur kuch nahi soojha pregnant woman ke alava"
Raghav - " vaise tumpar yeh pregnant lady ka look utna bura bhi nahi lagta"
Trisha hit his shoulder tightly.
Trisha - "Raghav!!!"
Raghav - "mazak kar raha hoon yeh saza hai tumhari"
Trisha - "kis baat ki"
Raghav came close to her face.
Raghav - "yaad hai vo truth dare ka sawaal usi ka answer nahi dene ki"
Trisha remember the question of love. She tried to change the topic but Raghav was determined for his answer.

At night.

Trisha was lying on the bed with her face covered. A man with aknife in his hand entered the room. He attacked Trisha but Raghav came from back and stopped him. Trisha stood up with her gun.
Raghav-"tumhara kgel khatam mr. Sooraj"

Interrogation room

Trisha - "kyo mara tumne Ragini ko"
Sooraj-"hum dono ke break up ke baad usne meri life barbad karke rakh di thi uske father ne apne paiso ke dum par mera carrier barbad kar diya. Me thak chuka tha har roz ki problems se toh mene decide kiya ki me Ragini ko is duniya se hi hata do. Haa mene us raat ragini ka murder kiya tha par mene saare saboot toh mita diye the toh aap logo ko kaise pata chala "
Raghav -" mujhe tum par starting se shak tha jab hum log talashi le rahe toh mujhe kuch kaach ke tukade mile jo tumhari watch ke the. (Raghav noticed it when he met Sooraj first time and saw a nrw glass fixed recently in his watch)Tum us din10:30 par Ragini ke kamare se nikale the par tum ghar nahi gaye tumhara mobile location Ragini ke ghar ke aas paas tha aur raat ko tumne Ragini ko jaan se maar dala. Aur phir humane yeh natak kiya tumhe range haatho pakadne ke liye "
Trisha -" mr. Sooraj you are under arrest in the murder of Ragini mehta"
Rajbir took sooraj out of interrogation room.

Conference room

All were relaxing after such a hectic case but Raghav was still thinking of that question.
Rajbir - "boss ab answer"
Trisha - "answer!!!!"
Raghav-"Trisha ab toh case bhi solve ho gaya ab mere sawaal ka answer "
Trisha was so tensed she control herself and answered -" kisese nahi"
Raghav read her body language and come closure to her. Rajbir and Bikram was looking at the scene and was like 'Raghav kya karane vala hai".
Raghav - "hum sab se jhoot bol rahi ho ya khud se"
Trisha was lost in his eyes.
Trisha - "ti amo!!!"
Trisha blushed and walk out of the conference room. Raghav was still confuse and was thinking about what is' ti amo'.
Rajbir - "yeh kaisa answer tha kon si language me bola pata nahi"
Raghav quickly got up from his place.
Raghav - "ti amo Rajbir thanks me chalta hoon"
Rajbir - "mene aisa kya bol diya"
Raghav rushed down towards parking area where Trisha was opening her car.
Raghav jerked her and pulled her in his arms.
Trisha - "Raghav yeh kya kar rahe ho"
Raghav - "tum bohot smart ho meri chaal mujhpe hi"
Trisha - "matlab"
Raghav came more closure to her and said-"ti amo!! Matlab... "and kissed Trisha on her left cheek.
Raghav-" matlab I Love You in italian "
Trisha blushed and sat in her car and drove without seeing him but her heart was left with Raghav.

Hope you like the story. Please review and like it. All suggestions are welcomed. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: babita..

Hey Ananya 🤗

Lovely new mystery in making 👏👏
Firstly, i loved the bond the team share. They relaxed and played the game of dare n truth. I loved Rajbir becoming the bakra 😆 And no one can go home without answering Raghav' queries. But luck played it's part and Trisha was saved 😉 😳
Thanks dear for complements. Raghav will not leave Trisha without answer but what willbe her answer have to see in next part.
Now the case and that during the relaxation time for the team. This shows how reliable these people are. They give their best to every case, what may come.
The case is interesting. The suicide or the murder ?? Yet to be proved. But surely it's a murder as proved by Raghav
Yes the case is a murder mystery but how will Raghav grab the criminal all in next part.
And what a way to show his boss that the case was a murder 😉 I mean, he did all the activity in the given time span and showed that it was a murder by some known person to the victim.
Liked to see how this team relies on Raghav and so does Trisha.
Now the case has it's name. But who could that be ?? Sooraj or someone else who knew her and could have come to the room of the victim and for whom she was almost leaving Sooraj ??
Many speculations, but will wait for your version to the case.
I am glad you like the suspense of the Story but who is the murderer?? Have to wait for next part.
Thanks Ananya, for being so energetic in placing such a fab and interesting plot. 👏👏

And sorry for being so late 😳
Thanks dear and no problem
Loves ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
awesome update ananya .loved it a lot .RaTris going in hospital As undercover Hubby wife and Raghav telling trishas name as trisha sinha was soo cute .after that raghav teasing trisha was sooo cute .that scene I really could imagine. so finally the killer is caught and another case is solved. thanks for such a interesting case .the last conference scene was just awesome soo beautifully written. loved it soo much .raghav asking Trisha for the answer and trisha saying te amo was sooo cute .loved the RaTri confession soo much .thanks for such a awesome story loved it soo much

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