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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Az07

It was a marvellous update
Started with Trisha's emotional plight She had left everything to destiny as she had no other option she had been exhausted from fighting with her destiny
The team had been a great support to her
Everyone was sad seeing Trisha's marriage but then the twist came Trisha was married to Raghav finally her belief won it has to be after all it's the belief of love it can never fail
Viraj too is a criminal who is a team member of Vidhushak who wanted to separate Trisha and Raghav poor Raghav he has been tortured so badly what he might have felt when he heard about Trisha's condition? He had to no other go gain all his strength and risk himself to save her
Just loved how Rajbir and Bikram stood by him like always the team scene was really cute
His promise to bring out Trisha from this trauma and his efforts was really sweet
Loved this story a lot


It was a marvellous update
Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it.

Started with Trisha's emotional plight She had left everything to destiny as she had no other option she had been exhausted from fighting with her destiny
Trisha had lost her battle with destiny till now, she gave up all hopes of having her life back. So her emotional state explained what was going on inside her.

The team had been a great support to her
The cbi team members are like her own family members who feel for her and support her in every way possible. They were the only ones who were there with her in her difficult times when her own family was not understanding her feelings.

Everyone was sad seeing Trisha's marriage but then the twist came Trisha was married to Raghav finally her belief won it has to be after all it's the belief of love it can never fail
Noone including Trisha's family wanted this marriage to happen. But they were helpless in front of destiny. They had to think about Trisha's and their family reputation. But then when she was about to lose everything, her faith in her love won against the destiny and Raghav managed to come on time to save her life.

Viraj too is a criminal who is a team member of Vidhushak who wanted to separate Trisha and Raghav poor Raghav he has been tortured so badly what he might have felt when he heard about Trisha's condition? He had to no other go gain all his strength and risk himself to save her
Vidushak would do anything to torture Raghav and Trisha obviously had become a target for anyone who is against Raghav, they know she means everything to him and he won't be able to live without her.
Raghav had to fight for his love and he would do anything for her. He had come to know what was happening with Trisha and he had to save her, he would have lost her and his own life if he failed this time. This desperation gave him strength to face all odds.

Just loved how Rajbir and Bikram stood by him like always the team scene was really cute
These two always are with him and Trisha. They all are like family members who believe each other blindly and will stand for them in all situations. Thanks for liking the scene. I wrote that to depict that the feelings among all the members are the same, they all feel for each other similarly so they deserve happy times together only.

His promise to bring out Trisha from this trauma and his efforts was really sweet
He had always seen Trisha as a very practical, mature girl who always brought him out of emotional stress. But this time seeing her in this state, he couldn't believe himself, he knew she was absolutely broken by his absence and then her forceful marriage due to her pregnancy; he understood everything. So he knew that he was the one who could normalise her with his love and care.

Loved this story a lot
THANKS A LOT DEAR...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Such a wonderful update dear,

I love how you expressed Trisha's condition-"If love can do wonders, it has the capability to shatter someone also, Trisha was a live example of this, she thought."Right said Love can change anyone's life.
During the marriage rituals, Trisha was already unhappy and when she was said to stand she lost her balance. She felt the same touch of Raghav when Viraj lifted her but she thought that It was her imagination.
Viraj took off his pagdi from his head and everyone was shocked to see that he was none other than Raghav, he had many injury marks over his body. I was too shock to see him though I have a gut feeling that he will return but in Viraj's get up. Thank god Trisha don't get married with that guy Viraj who intended to destroy her life.
So it was Vidhushak's plan to make Raghav loss the gain after winning it. He tortured Raghav both mentally and physically and make Raghav stay away from Trisha until she get married..
On whole love the story, it show the true love of Trisha who kept Raghav alive in her mind when the whole world was refusing the fact That Raghav is alive. A


Such a wonderful update dear,
Thanks alot . Glad you liked it.

I love how you expressed Trisha's condition-"If love can do wonders, it has the capability to shatter someone also, Trisha was a live example of this, she thought."Right said Love can change anyone's life.
Love is the most beautiful feeling in this world, but when you love someone to this extent as she loved him and you tend to lose your love, then all your maturity, practicality just vanishes away. You tend to lose your existence on the whole. Surely love can change anyone in this world.

During the marriage rituals, Trisha was already unhappy and when she was said to stand she lost her balance.
She had become so weak both physically and mentally so she lost her balance while getting up. Raghav saw this and hence lifted her in his arms to complete the rituals. He was shocked to see his own Trisha like this.

She felt the same touch of Raghav when Viraj lifted her but she thought that It was her imagination.
Trisha had been imagining him all around since the time he went missing, so this time also she thought that this might be her imagination only. She seemed to have lost her battle and had no hopes left now.

Viraj took off his pagdi from his head and everyone was shocked to see that he was none other than Raghav, he had many injury marks over his body. I was too shock to see him though I have a gut feeling that he will return but in Viraj's get up. Thank god Trisha don't get married with that guy Viraj who intended to destroy her life.
Yes obviously Viraj wanted to destroy both Trisha and Raghav's life as a part of vidushak's plan. Luckily Raghav managed to come on time and saved his life.

So it was Vidhushak's plan to make Raghav loss the gain after winning it. He tortured Raghav both mentally and physically and make Raghav stay away from Trisha until she get married..
Anyone who has been following Raghav for so many years would know what Trisha means to him. So they use her to target Raghav. Vidushak will obviously want to win over Raghav even when he is in jail, and he almost succeeded in his plans.

On whole love the story, it show the true love of Trisha who kept Raghav alive in her mind when the whole world was refusing the fact That Raghav is alive. A
Thanks a lot dear. Trisha's love for him and her emotional turmoil was the baseline of this story. I have always tried to present Trisha as she was shown in the show... mature, practical and rule book person. For once I tried to present her in a situation where she almost loses her identity for her love. Hope I succeeded in my attempt and could do justice to the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
awesome update dear.will give a detailed review little later so sorry for the delay have guests at home really very sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update dear.will give a detailed review little later so sorry for the delay have guests at home really very sorry


No problem dear.take your time. Absolutely fine with me. Guests are important...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
thanks soo much for such a wonderful story dear loved it soo much .so finally Raghav came back and trisha hope became true .loved the way RaTri hugged each other when Raghav removed his pagdi .loved that scene soo much .thank God trisha didn't get married to viraj and raghav saved her In time otherwise her life would be destroyed.loved Ratris bedroom scene Raghav feeding trisha and promising that he will never leave loved .loved the scene in Raghavs house to raghav taking full care of trisha.yeah so finally Raghav Trisha are back together thanks soo much for this wonderful emotional story .loved reading it soo much .sorry again for the late reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks soo much for such a wonderful story dear loved it soo much .so finally Raghav came back and trisha hope became true .loved the way RaTri hugged each other when Raghav removed his pagdi .loved that scene soo much .thank God trisha didn't get married to viraj and raghav saved her In time otherwise her life would be destroyed.loved Ratris bedroom scene Raghav feeding trisha and promising that he will never leave loved .loved the scene in Raghavs house to raghav taking full care of trisha.yeah so finally Raghav Trisha are back together thanks soo much for this wonderful emotional story .loved reading it soo much .sorry again for the late reply


thanks soo much for such a wonderful story dear loved it soo much
Thank you so much for liking it.

so finally Raghav came back and trisha hope became true .
Love can never go wrong. many times even god has to bow down before true love.

loved the way RaTri hugged each other when Raghav removed his pagdi .loved that scene soo much .
Trisha was in such a state where she was imagining him all around her. So she needed some time and his embrace to believe that he is back.

thank God trisha didn't get married to viraj and raghav saved her In time otherwise her life would be destroyed.
Raghav will never let anything happen to Trisha, he will do anything for her.

.loved Ratris bedroom scene Raghav feeding trisha and promising that he will never leave loved .loved the scene in Raghavs house to raghav taking full care of trisha.
Raghav knew he was the one who had to make all the efforts to bring her back to normal. He saw her condition, she was absolutely nowhere close to her normal self.

so finally Raghav Trisha are back together thanks soo much for this wonderful emotional story .loved reading it
Thanks for liking it dear.

sorry again for the late reply
No problem dear. Thanks for a lovely review.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
If you don't mind can I ask you a doubt I wanted to ask last time but forgot to ask
Did the team knew about Trisha's pregnancy and the reason for her marriage with Viraj?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

If you don't mind can I ask you a doubt I wanted to ask last time but forgot to ask
Did the team knew about Trisha's pregnancy and the reason for her marriage with Viraj?



I didn't mention that directly but indirectly I did mention that bikram had dropped her home when she was sick . secondly when she reluctantly agreed for marriage, she again went back to her depressed state and obviously they must have noticed it. At the same time she continued to work and be occupied in his thoughts. Thirdly I also mentioned that her marriage with viraj was supposed to be a private affair in which the CBI team was included. Her family members also found her team members to be like family at the way they supported her in difficult time. Also swati was the one who dressed up trisha. So all these indirect indicators suggested that they knew about the reason for her marriage. I didn't feel the need for its direct mention.
Glad that you asked.
Hope I could make myself clear. Pardon me if I failed to do so...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a awesome story. Loved it soo much. It always brings tears in my eyes when I read it. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Such a awesome story. Loved it soo much. It always brings tears in my eyes when I read it. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story.


Thank you so much dear. Your words mean a lot to me. ❤️

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