MehRya SS: Forbidden - Ch5 Teaser pg 14 04/08

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Mishtilove
happy birthday kelly di,thankyou for the update.
it was a lovely reading your update.i love the gift.
so,mehak is a lifeguard n a chef,she saved vicky 👏such a brave girl.
i'm eager to read how Shaurya will thank her.
superb update,thankx for the pm.continue soon
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Thnx Mishti for both the read and of course, for your bday wishes.

In her adopted home Mehek has grown into a lively, confident and ambitious young woman. SK naturally is true to the khadoos we all know and love so it should be fun when these two get together. I hope you enjoy the story I have in mind😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: dwriter
First of all let me thank you for gifting us such a long beautiful update on your special day... 🤗
The whole update was exciting...I felt like being one of the crew member.
Kudos to your flawless writing skills...👏
Mehek is being portrayed as a funny loving yet ambitious girl..
She's much dedicated nd sincere towards her duty..
The brother duo's relation has many layers to unfold I guess..
Glad that Mehak rescued Vicky on time...
Making way towards Mehrya's first meeting..
Absolutely loved this chapter...
Plz do continue soon..
Thanks for the PM.

My sincere thanks for appreciation of this forst chapter. Coming across what I had started to write based on another show led me to adapt it for my new favorite pairing and I am excited for this story. Please do continue to read should you have the time and leave your fb...good or bad😉

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Ekta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Awesome story

Love it

Continue soon

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Haseena2020
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Looking forward to your fb😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Chandana2010
Good evening Kelly 🤗
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Nice update Kelly 😛
Finally Vicky is safe now n mehak leave her job For her studies
She went to meet Vicky but mehak n shourya did not met there
Waiting for their first meet 😛
Thanks for the pm dear
Hope your hand fine now
N pls update TDM also😛

No work for the last week and a half seems to have given my hand the rest it needed; thanks for asking, Anu.

Very glad you are enjoying. No meeting just yet for Mehrya but soon to come😊.

Hope you are doing well.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: AD04
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Thanks for the update Kelly😛
It was so beautifully written ...Loved it .. Mehek left her job ro join her school in new york and shaurya too finally able to see the real rescue work of lifeguard.for the same.he was questioning earlier . Glad that vicky is safe and out of danger now.. .Mehek too visited him. But still there is no connection with shaurya and mehek .. And i am waiting for their first meet... And.want to see how their equation is. . Do continue soon and thanks for the PM😳😃

Thanks Arti for the read and fb😊

Having grown up in her adopted island home, Mehek has an affinity for the ocean, but her real passion is cooking and she is days away from following that dream when this happens. SK being the hothead we know him to be has already jumped to conclusions but as the footage reveals an important aspect of what happened he is becoming intrigued by his brother's rescuer for sure. Hope to update in a few days and will pm you when I do.

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Lima

@friendlyghost08

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

Thank you so much for the update..and sorry for giving late fb..

Is the relationship between shaurya and vicky not so good?..why svetlana was accusing shaurya...and why vicky didn't say shaurya about mehek...eager to know

Enjoyed reading the chapter

Thanks for the pm..plzz continue soon..

Enjoy your holiday and take care

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dwriter

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Posted: 6 years ago

#58

Am late here apologies...but I didn't receive a PM for this one dear Kelly😲😭

Now coming to the chapter..

Thanks a lot for penning down this long beautiful update for us...🤗

So officially Laddoo has stepped out of the shoes of a life guard...

Could very well visualize and relate with the scenes...kudos to your flawless writing skills👏

There is more to unfold about Shaurya, Vicky, Nehal and the Khanna family...

Mehek too has family with two lil brothers...that's cute.

I guess the cold behaviour of Shaurya could not be the only reason...if at all Vicky has either attempted suicide or not.

Eagerly waiting for mehrya's first meet...is that possible before Mehek leaves for New York?...wish it could be.

Excited to read further...

Plz do update soon.

Thanks again for this great update..😊😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Haseena2020
Great update Kelly.
Vicky is no longer in danger situation and Mehak went to visit him but Shaurya and she did not bump into each other. Mehak is going to her studies and she has to leave her job.
Very excited to read the upcoming chapter, thank you and wishing you a very happy new year ahead

Thanks as always for reading and leaving fb Haseena. Yes Vicky is safe and SK is slowly coming to the realization that his initial thoughts are not correct. The bros will be having a heart to heart in thd next chapter which is integral to my plot, and I hope you enjoy it.

Wishing all the best to you and yours for 2019😊