MehRya FS: Will Be Back !! Shot 5 on Page 11

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So I started writing it months back when the show was on a verge forced marriage so the reference is quite old. It was started as one shot but I'll end up in two or three shots. Temme how was it and if you want me to continue. Enjoy.


SHOT - 1


She was standing at the window staring at particularly nothing. She was lost in her own thoughts when she heard a knock at the door, "May I come in Ma'am?" It was her secretary Nimmi at the door. The knock brought Mahek out of her reverie. She asked her to come in.

"Ma'am your flight to India is confirmed." Nimmi informed her.

"Thank you Nimmi." Mahek said with a sad smile.

"Ma'am. May I know the reason for this sadness on your face?" Nimmi asked in concern.

"Sadness." Mahek left a deep sigh with that.

Nimmi knew that there's something bothering Mahek. She had been with Mahek all through her struggle and so in her success too. She knew Mahek for about 5 years now and never had she seen her in so much distress.

"You know Nimmi, back in India I have my complete family. And a Man who said he loved me." With the mere thought of her family and HIM she was getting weak.

"You know Nimmi before I came here in Amsterdam, I was almost forcefully getting married to HIM, to the man I loved very dearly. The man who once left me at the altar and what was the reason, he wanted my dead Mumma's recipe book." Mahek said sitting on her queen size bed thinking of the past.

Mahek was pacing back and forth in her room in the Parathe Wali Gali or Meera Sharma Marg. It's the last day of Shaurya's challenge..."I can't get married for anyone's sake. I just can't. I have my own dreams. Cooking is my dream, My Mumma'a dream. I can't let anyone to rip that off. Not Shaurya. Not Kanta Chachi. Not anyone. She quickly dialled a number on her phone and got a satisfactory answer. She packed her bags and ran away towards her dream leaving a note behind !!


"I'm sorry Shaurya. I know you love me. I love you too. But. I just can't get married to you. Not at least till I get what I desire. I'm going. To my dreams. Hopefully you'll understand me and will not try to search me. I won't tell you to wait for me. You deserve all the love in life. I need to tell the world what I inherited from my Mom...Mahek."




INDEX:

Shot 1: Page 1
Shot 2: Page 3
Shot 3: Page 5
Shot 4: Page 8
Shot 5: Page 11
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purvagarg thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start dear. Loved the new beginning. Please update soon.

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Looks interesting...do Continue soon but next with a Bigger Chapter😛
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Originally posted by: purvagarg

Nice start dear. Loved the new beginning. Please update soon.


Thank you 😳
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Looks interesting...do Continue soon but next with a Bigger Chapter😛


Thank you Maasi 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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She is going away from him.. eh
too bad baby he will come for you!!
Enjoyed it. Please continue soon.
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Originally posted by: PristineSoul

She is going away from him.. eh

too bad baby he will come for you!!
Enjoyed it. Please continue soon.


Thank you😃
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Nice starting dear sim..continue soon
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Nice start.I am waiting to know what happened next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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simmi👏👏
i felt such intriguing satisfaction all oozing out of your words...
the way u highlighted that sigh...the way mehek told that the man who left me at the altar!! its so unlike the "multitude wala mahek" i gave her this name because she loves to live with her family...i can also bet that she'll never leave her family and go to seek for luring opportunities!!

it was so satisfying to read a successful mehek heading back to her roots with her dream fulfilled!! now her cares and duties toget fulfilled back home!!
i thinkthis can easily be an ff but i m eager to read ur ts!! its like i would love to see shaurya waiting there back in delhi for his mehek!!😳😳

plzzz do update soon sweetheart😃

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