MehRya FS: Will Be Back !! Shot 5 on Page 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehryan

Nice starting dear sim..continue soon


Thank you so much Di 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna4444

Nice one. Continue soon..


thank you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Nice start.I am waiting to know what happened next.


Thank you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

simmi👏👏

i felt such intriguing satisfaction all oozing out of your words...
the way u highlighted that sigh...the way mehek told that the man who left me at the altar!! its so unlike the "multitude wala mahek" i gave her this name because she loves to live with her family...i can also bet that she'll never leave her family and go to seek for luring opportunities!!

it was so satisfying to read a successful mehek heading back to her roots with her dream fulfilled!! now her cares and duties toget fulfilled back home!!
i thinkthis can easily be an ff but i m eager to read ur ts!! its like i would love to see shaurya waiting there back in delhi for his mehek!!😳😳

plzzz do update soon sweetheart😃


Woah ! You loved it so much kya? I actually write stories with powerful women. Not just sitting in corner and crying. I make them independent.


Do you think Shaurya would be still waiting😉😛? And the thing that I can't make it FF coz I'm very lazy gal. Humse na hoga😳😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have decided to wrap this up in 5 shots now because of lil changes. Hopefully you'll like it. Enjoy.


SHOT - 2


The letter fell from his hand. A lone tear escaped his eyes. He fell on the floor looked at the piece of paper that had brought havoc in his life. He stared at the paper for some time. Then he stood up, taken the paper and a picture of Mahek from the table nearby and left.


"Oh Nimmi, you made me waste so much of my precious time. I need to pack. I don't know how all are there. Kanta Chachi, Mansi Chachi, Jeevan and Ravi Chachu, Dadu, PD, Mohit and Sonal, Nehal and whole Parathe Wali Gali." Those people still can bring that luring smile on her face. She loves them, no doubt but loved her dreams ever more.


"Yeah Ma'am. You continue packing. I'll take your leave." Nimmi said with a smile.


"Nimmi. Why don't you come along? You'll meet everyone also. Plus. You'll handle that presentation as well because I'm not gonna work once I'm in India." Mahek said in a cheerful tone.


"Sure Ma'am."


"Oh baby please stop. See I'm so tired. Please my angel. See Papa will now not talk to you if you'll not stop." Said a talk man in his black tuxedo running behind a little girl.

"Anya beta stop na. See Papa has brought you favourite chocolate." Came a sweet voice from the kitchen.

"No Mumma. I'll not stop until Papa catches me." Said the little cute girl in her baby voice.


"Here I caught you." Said the Man twirling Anya around and they giggled sitting on the couch.


The flight landed in India and she got out of the airport in her pink floral crop top and white long skirt with her sunglasses on.

The car was already waiting for her. She got into the car..."Bhaiya please take to Parathe Wali Gali first." Mahek said with a charming smile. She was going to finally meet her family after 5 long years.

She had already put the windows down and was looking at her city. Everything is changed in these years. She couldn't believe she was back.
Edited by TheLifeDiaries - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Yippee... Update time
Off to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved this Mehek who is ready to fulfill her dreams.👍🏼 She dared to dream and has the confidence and zeal to go after her dreams. After knowing the truth about Shaurya, she had the strength to face the fact and focus in the right direction. 😊You have portrayed her as a strong woman inside and out. Thanks for this all new Mehek. 👏⭐️
Looking for ur next update. 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nikku beta yeh shot toh dairy milk ke shots se bhi chota tha
Iam curious to know who is Anya ??
Did he married someone else after she left

Waiting for the next chapter...bada Wala shot 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Yippee... Update time

Off to read


Thanks for your time 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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