Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 27

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

<font size="4" color="#996666">Reserved ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">I kept this in reserved😲from the first ..,</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">I dint kno..I forgot ...tats y i never res😭sowie tibs</font>

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<font size="4" color="#996666">Cuming to chapter</font>

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<font size="4" color="#996666">that was an incredible one ...👏</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">I don't find enuf words to praise your writing talent tibs...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Know u shud know y I made member of the week😉,</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Your welcome🤣...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Beautifully crafted chapter ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Shauryas inner turmoil was very well written...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">He loves her a lot ...it pains for him to see her that way ,yet he manages to throw his cold behaviour on her ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">The pain mehak feels is not tolerable , but I guess shaurya feels more pain..</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">How its difficult for him to control his emotions , having the loving one beside ...yet u cannot reach her and touch her ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">But the way he felt wen he was near her thrubout the pooja ...must calm his Strom inside for an while ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">same time mehak was feeling opposite ...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Hope after reading those cheery lines , from the friend she tries to cum out of her torture zone she has locked herself in...</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">And the end seems dramatic😲will she cum to know ?</font>

<font size="4" color="#996666">Do continue soon👏</font>

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<font size="4" color="#996666">Tibu⭐️ , nicely written ...</font>

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Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">@tibs🤗... Such an awesome update ... And you have used the lines as I had envisioned it. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L...</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">Apologies for being late. But honestly, I don't feel like even commenting on the FFs too, thanks to the character names which reek either crimes or slavery !!! Since I do NOT enjoy psychopath criminal abusing an equally pathetic amnesiac cry baby slave 24X7 even on-screen; so I have left this show with all the intentions of not looking back. I was somehow tolerating owing to the chemistry; but honestly, for me personally, the same seemed haywire in thefew scenes which I had compelled myself to tolerate mid last week. Last time during "Abuser vs. Doormat" track though I had stopped watching the show but could somehow convince myself that there might be a redemption track and also could not find any replacement suiting my taste. This time nothing can convince me that this pathetic BS can be defined as a "love"" story from any angle and I have found something worth of my very little but precious spare time. And after that LU thread incident, I had restricted my travels in the forum too... Now it's totally off ...</font>

<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Please have this as the appetizer, next post will have my actual comments🤣</font>

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">@tibs, no Karuna... I just disgust that character whom I used to adore so much😡</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Dolly has made her entry. Since I can imagine how you are going to proceed with 'you know what'; so I am not at all surprised with her entry, in fact was expecting her very much😆...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Mahek, I was imagining she was hankering something and mouthing something else in your FF too. Was very much pissed off, but later I could be convinced that she is hankering for a normal life like any other normal girl but is unable to have that. I won't say that I am agreeing to it going by my mindset, which is absolutely rigid when it comes to any decision involving never to look back; but may stomach for the sake of story progression. I will like to mention the following lines for her, which I feel reflect her mindset ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I sent thee late a rosy wreath,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">As giving it a hope, that there</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"> It could not withered be.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">But thou thereon didst only breathe,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"> And sent'st it back to me;</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Since when it grows, and smells, I swear,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"> Not of itself, but thee.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"> - English poet Ben Jonson's 1616 poem "Song: To Celia"</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Shaurya, hmmm I disgust this name😡... But your Shaurya is Humane. So, I am planning to rename him, but later😳... Anyways, the following is a very old & popular Baaul (They are a group of Vaishnavite mendicant monks in Bengal) song. Hope the lines describe your creation's situation perfectly ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I imagine to posses her to acquire her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">She eludes me when I try to clutch her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I have seen my beloved as raw gold in the ocean of love</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">For many days I haveplayfullyfloated on the waves of imaginations</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">In the desires to meet her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I envisage her as mine and mine only</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">But she never belongs to me, even when she is mine</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I am roaming around like an insane craving for her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The fire in my mind can not be extinguished</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Let the world talk ill about me</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">But I can't be alive being separated from her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The Traveler says "Don't ponder</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Immerse yourself in the ocean of love and do a lone penance</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Once you get hold of your beloved</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Never ever let her leave"...</font>

Originally posted by: stellaV

So, I am back😊I apologize for being so late in commenting tibs but life was really hectic and yours FF is the one i can never ever read in a hurry as I want to imbibe each and every emotion that you are trying to convey...

CHAPTER-2

How beautiful and magical. Tibs, I really wish you were the one writing the story of ZKM, trust me i could have watched it forever

Shaurya, broken but determined😊This is the Man I know, man with a heart, who knows his mistakes and don't behave like a coward. His only concern is Mehek right now, and he has found a way to reach her through KK. Loved their conversation and the lines by Faiz.

Mehek's turmoil is something that goes straight to your heart, i could feel it. Can she stop loving him?? Can she make her heart stop beating ?😭

I am happy that Karuna decided to talk to Mehek, atleast not an attempt to maker her understand but communication and the honesty with which it is done matters.

<font size="2">Here is something for Mehek</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">How is it
that everything must
begin and end with you?
There you are,
before sunrise,
perfuming the world with your scent.
Have you made a deal
with the moon so that you can linger
even when she tapers off?
And what about the wind?
Even when he has been scolded
and is sitting in a corner, there you are,
my calm before the storm.
Despite the inevitable destruction
and my ruin, there you are again,
my calm after the storm.
I must,
I really must know:
'How is it
that there was never you
until there was
and then all was you?
Kamand Kojouri</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Will come back with my response on chapter-3 soon😊</font>

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Tibs.. please tell me KK's true identity is not going to be revealed.. I don't want that to happen so soon!!

The dressing room scene was a treat!! The idiot that he is.. had to ruin such an amazing moment.

The lines from the 'Gardener perfectly describe their situation

Loved every bit of this update.

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Oye tibs where are you n itni subah subah wht are u doing in the forum??? Bolo bolo n wht abt ur next update???

Originally posted by: tibs09

Ramona I too hope not 😛
I do not think Mehak can handle one more deception...but then it was never intended to be a very long story
Yeah Shaurya reverts to being obnoxious as a coping mechanism to any stress in his life