Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Mehryan

Amazing update di👏
Continue soon

You are just fueling life to characters that are dying on the show Tibs. Makes it that much harder for us to lower our expectations further from the show. As always, beautiful writing 👏! And Tagore's words are so apt and so profound. Any attempts on my part to appreciate it with my limited words will only spoil the poignancy of it all. Will just bow with reverence instead...

The thing that stood out most from this chapter is the effort the illusion of normalcy takes. To not do what your heart is yearning to, to not give into the things the heart is demanding, to not scream and ask to be heard and understood, to not succumb and crumble at the slightest sign of weakness from other is probably a torment like no other. The thing about illusion is, it just numbs you for a while, but when you step back into the reality, it hits you again with a force, the strength of which you had only forgotten. Makes one ponder over what is more of a torture here...to let each other go and live with the loss of one's life or to die a slow death everyday looking at the life you will never have.

You have always kept Showrya Khanna debonair and suave with his business savvy, confident self. And the righteous path he has taken on, makes him virtuous and honorable. Just when he was at the risk of wondering off too much on this righteous road and becoming too good a guy, you bring back our rakish rogue who can't help himself a bit of guilty pleasure whenever he can 😆! That dressing room scene between them was just lovely! Can't help but compare this to the show, but let's not go there and demean your wonderful work...

You have shown that inner turmoil of Mehak so very well. In spite of being the one that has set this course for herself and him, there are these pangs of insecurities she feels at his apparent show of indifference. Not knowing, that this indifference is a facade for everything that is so forcefully buried. You can shut your eyes to not see things you do, but can you really shut your heart to not feel the things you do feel? A Heart wants what it wants... it wants to be loved by him in spite of it all...

What is the storm hovering above going to bring? Is it the knowledge that her source of comfort (KK) is also the bane of her life! Is it a forewarning of the treacherous climb ahead ( once the court case starts)? Is it a harbinger of something more ominous lurking around (in the form of naani)? Or is it going to stir up a rain storm so violent, that it takes a force as strong as itself to hold its ground and not be washed away by it? A storm like that can only bring new life at its heel...Guess we will have to wait to see what it brings forth...😊

Originally posted by: blushing

Tibs... your writing is something else... you seems to be avid reader .. i love what you used Gurudev's line so perfectly ...

fantastic update...wish something like this on ZKM too alas...but reading this makes it more

sometimes words express deeply than what eyes witness it😳

Originally posted by: shristi0706

Another beautifully written chapter behna... I liked tht u fast forwarded the story where Shaurya has decided to give Mehak some time to understand his situation. Also wht I liked tht u hv the case hearing hanging on his head n he has accepted his fate..

Originally posted by: vimikrao

The puja went smoothly.

The quote of RT was so beautiful it's very meaningful. It might help Mehek in her life.

Phone dinged when the phone is in Shaurya's hand. Kahin KK ka identity bahar na ajaye.

PM ke liye badawala thank you

Vinu

Originally posted by: DhwaniDixit

As usual Beautifully written Tibs👏

I really feel the CVS should have copied this story.

(We would have been able to watch sensible story onscreen. Right now tooo many loopholes in the show.)

Its a delight to read every chapter. Thank you so much for the pm😊

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

You are just fueling life to characters that are dying on the
show Tibs. Makes it that much harder for us to lower our expectations further
from the show. As always, beautiful writing 👏! And Tagore's words are so apt and
so profound. Any attempts on my part to appreciate it with my limited words
will only spoil the poignancy of it all. Will just bow with reverence instead...

The thing that stood out most from this chapter is the effort
the illusion of normalcy takes. To not do what your heart is yearning to, to
not give into the things the heart is demanding, to not scream and ask to be
heard and understood, to not succumb and crumble at the slightest sign of weakness
from other is probably a torment like no other. The thing about illusion is, it
just numbs you for a while, but when you step back into the reality, it hits
you again with a force, the strength of which you had only forgotten. Makes one
ponder over what is more of a torture here...to let each other go and live with
the loss of one's life or to die a slow death everyday looking at the life you
will never have.

You have always kept Showrya Khanna debonair and suave with
his business savvy, confident self. And the righteous path he has taken on,
makes him virtuous and honorable. Just when he was at the risk of wondering off
too much on this righteous road and becoming too good a guy, you bring back our
rakish rogue who can't help himself a bit of guilty pleasure whenever he can 😆! That
dressing room scene between them was just lovely! Can't help but compare this
to the show, but let's not go there and demean your wonderful work...

You have shown that inner turmoil of Mehak so very well. In
spite of being the one that has set this course for herself and him, there are
these pangs of insecurities she feels at his apparent show of indifference. Not
knowing, that this indifference is a facade for everything that is so
forcefully buried. You can shut your eyes to not see things you do, but can you
really shut your heart to not feel the things you do feel? A Heart wants what
it wants... it wants to be loved by him in spite of it all...

What is the storm hovering above going to bring? Is it the
knowledge that her source of comfort (KK) is also the bane of her life! Is it a
forewarning of the treacherous climb ahead ( once the court case starts)? Is it a
harbinger of something more ominous lurking around (in the form of naani)? Or
is it going to stir up a rain storm so violent, that it takes a force as strong
as itself to hold its ground and not be washed away by it? A storm like that can only bring new
life at its heel...Guess we will have to wait to see what it brings forth...😊

Originally posted by: tibs09

Pin ki baath nahi thread ki baath kar Rahi hun.kya aap aise hi pehanke hai.aapke patidev so pin lagathe hai.

So sorry for asking this stupid embarrassing question.😆

Comments for previous chapters ki baath kar Rahi hun ISS chapter ki nahi.