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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Ha ha no Hon ... I do not wear threads, main tailor ko poora kapda deti hoon 😆
Hey I read all the previous comments but could not reply...travel kar rahi thi Na ... sorry about that...

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RiAnsh21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: tibs09

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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Oshbgosh
Tibs, couldn't help but picture KV and SJ portraying those scenes. A beautifully written chapter keeping the sentiments of both SK and MS in mind. Loved reading it .. Thank you Tibs.

Thanks Buddy Glad you liked it ..
Thank you for taking out the time to read and comment on it

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DiyaKash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: tibs09

Diya one of the things I really look forward to after having written a new chapter or piece is to read your comments... the fact that you take time to give such detailed comments and analyse every aspect of it makes it so much worth it to put in the effort to write .
You also sometimes open my eyes to nuances that I had analysed in one way but your comments make me realise another interpretation of it ...
I really really love our interaction...
Thank you so Much

Thanks Tibs. I have only penned down the feelings and thoughts your words evoke.. . 😊 But, yes I do love this interaction with you too, my friend. In fact, the show has lost most of its charm. I am only hanging out here for all the wonderful conversations that happen here. Although most seem to be missing at the moment, hoping they will be drawn back at some point... 😊

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Vedika211

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

Tibs, this time I was my turn to be travelling. Sorry I could not respond earlier.

I'm really happy to have this sensible version to hang on to, and imagine an alternative universe to what is happening on the show. It is good to be in a world where there are courts and actions have consequences. As you said, we all wished not to have gone down this path at all, but once it was set in motion it needed the deft handling that you are bringing to it.

I liked the quotation and also the insistence that there is more to truth than we understand. I'm using that insistence to hope for the best for this story.

I liked that time has passed, and I really like that Shaurya is aware that in this situation any physical advance from his side would be inappropriate. This is important and often gets conveniently sidelined in favour of forced romance.

If she comes to know that he is KK, would that feel like another betrayal to her? I hope she doesn't find out right now. She needs a friend, and he really needs to be that friend right now, to have access to her in a different way.

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Tibs ...hats off to ur talent ...

Unresd my post ...and y is that u r not seen ? again ?

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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Vedika211
Tibs, this time I was my turn to be travelling. Sorry I could not respond earlier.
I'm really happy to have this sensible version to hang on to, and imagine an alternative universe to what is happening on the show. It is good to be in a world where there are courts and actions have consequences. As you said, we all wished not to have gone down this path at all, but once it was set in motion it needed the deft handling that you are bringing to it.

I liked the quotation and also the insistence that there is more to truth than we understand. I'm using that insistence to hope for the best for this story.

I liked that time has passed, and I really like that Shaurya is aware that in this situation any physical advance from his side would be inappropriate. This is important and often gets conveniently sidelined in favour of forced romance.

If she comes to know that he is KK, would that feel like another betrayal to her? I hope she doesn't find out right now. She needs a friend, and he really needs to be that friend right now, to have access to her in a different way.

Hey Vedika ...
No worries Dear I knew you were traveling.. I am not sure Rain is going to realise the role wind plays that early .. she is too Preoccupied by Fire 😉
I have to confess I have stopped watching the show ... so this story is my last remaining link with the show
I had originally planned just 4-5 chapters as I was expecting that this track will be the raison d'tre of the show and hence will last much longer ... so my 4-5 well spaced chapters would serve the purpose as far as general direction of the story would go
now that story has completely moved away from the track and I have moved away from the show ... I really need to think how much longer should this story be
I will try to be faithful to characters and the story

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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Tibs ...hats off to ur talent ...
Unresd my post ...and y is that u r not seen ? again ?

Thabs Meri Jaan ... 🤗 I will read the comment and come back

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candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

@tibs 🤗 ... Such an awesome update ... And you have used the lines as I had envisioned it. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L...

Apologies for being late. But honestly, I don't feel like even commenting on the FFs too, thanks to the character names which reek either crimes or slavery !!! Since I do NOT enjoy psychopath criminal abusing an equally pathetic amnesiac cry baby slave 24X7 even on-screen; so I have left this show with all the intentions of not looking back. I was somehow tolerating owing to the chemistry; but honestly, for me personally, the same seemed haywire in the few scenes which I had compelled myself to tolerate mid last week. Last time during "Abuser vs. Doormat" track though I had stopped watching the show but could somehow convince myself that there might be a redemption track and also could not find any replacement suiting my taste. This time nothing can convince me that this pathetic BS can be defined as a "love"" story from any angle and I have found something worth of my very little but precious spare time. And after that LU thread incident, I had restricted my travels in the forum too... Now it's totally off ...

Please have this as the appetizer, next post will have my actual comments 🤣

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candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#260

@tibs, no Karuna ... I just disgust that character whom I used to adore so much 😡 😡 😡 😡

Dolly has made her entry. Since I can imagine how you are going to proceed with 'you know what'; so I am not at all surprised with her entry, in fact was expecting her very much 😆 ...

Mahek, I was imagining she was hankering something and mouthing something else in your FF too. Was very much pissed off, but later I could be convinced that she is hankering for a normal life like any other normal girl but is unable to have that. I won't say that I am agreeing to it going by my mindset, which is absolutely rigid when it comes to any decision involving never to look back; but may stomach for the sake of story progression. I will like to mention the following lines for her, which I feel reflect her mindset ...

I sent thee late a rosy wreath,

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As giving it a hope, that there

It could not withered be.

But thou thereon didst only breathe,

And sent'st it back to me;

Since when it grows, and smells, I swear,

Not of itself, but thee.

- English poet Ben Jonson's 1616 poem "Song: To Celia"

Shaurya, hmmm I disgust this name 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 ... But your Shaurya is Humane. So, I am planning to rename him, but later 😳 ... Anyways, the following is a very old & popular Baaul (They are a group of Vaishnavite mendicant monks in Bengal) song. Hope the lines describe your creation's situation perfectly ...

I imagine to posses her to acquire her

She eludes me when I try to clutch her

I have seen my beloved as raw gold in the ocean of love

For many days I have playfully floated on the waves of imaginations

In the desires to meet her

I envisage her as mine and mine only

But she never belongs to me, even when she is mine

I am roaming around like an insane craving for her

The fire in my mind can not be extinguished

Let the world talk ill about me

But I can't be alive being separated from her

The Traveler says "Don't ponder