Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago
Tibs, don't give up until u finish the story pls. I am all curious to see how you bring in your sky element 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

Tibs, don't give up until u finish the story pls. I am all curious to see how you bring in your sky element😊


Ha ha you keep throwing these challenges at me Diya .. and I usually end up buying the bait
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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER-3

It could not have been more emotional. There conversation at the end made me cry. Her struggle with her emotions, her memories is heart wrenching. Shaurya is helpless, she is helpless. Oh my dear God how unfair life has been for them.

For Mehek there is no repentance for the sin of falling in love with a person who was responsible for her parents' death. No repentance for still not being able to hate him. His love is not her power anymore, but it is a stone tied to her feet which is making her drown in this sea of grief, she cannot breathe, but my dear you cannot die, and you cannot live 😭

A marriage that they believed to be an end of all the sadness and negativity looming in their lives led to something more disastrous for both of them. It will break them, but should I say will build them again for better??😊 I trust you on this Tibs

So, nani and Maasi are here. Nani seems to be hiding something. What it is?? Very intriguing indeed.

I know there is nothing new in it when I say I loved each and every word penned down by you, but still I am out of words to express the beauty of it 😊


"What do you do when the one person you want comfort from the most is the one who caused your pain? How can I want so desperately for him to wrap me up in his arms but also want so much for him to leave me alone.
- Amanda Grace, But I love him

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Posted: 8 years ago
CHAPTER-4
So this had an element of romance 😳 I loved it, those moments snatched from the time. Beautiful.👏
I could imagine it word by word. And the effect was surreal. These are the only gestures left where both of them can express the unsaid emotions. These underlying feelings expressed through these moments are like a light through the haze of sorrow surrounding them.
KK cannot have been more useful. This online chat was the best thing that happened in their lives. It is like a mutual friend guiding both of them in difficult times.
I am glad we decided to share this poem with you as soon as we found it. No one could have used it better 😊 Lovely, beautiful...
Is the secret of KK getting revealed?? I am waiting desperately for the next part 😃

I have tried to write something about the unsaid feelings of Shaurya. I don't know how it is, but consider it as my genuine attempt to praise your writings.

They say you can't swim across the ocean, you can only drown in it

Drown till the day death is there to embrace you...

They say you cannot reach the heights of limitless skies

You will fall if you try..

Fearing the depths, fearing the death I kept myself away from the shores

Fearing the heights and fearing the fall I kept my feet on the ground

My soul lying parched in the midst of a desert, but I was surviving

Surviving, being oblivious to what a true life feels like

Until you came and confronted my soul

Unleashing the hidden desires, the awareness lying in my subconscious

I thought it of being a mirage,

But enchanted with the feeling my heart still followed

I followed till the day you turned back

Turned back to lay your gaze on me

And I witnessed a wonder, a wonder that was your eyes

The Clear blue limitless skies and the deep blue ocean merging into one

Nothing beyond it I could see, Nothing beyond it I wanted to see

My salvage, elixir to my soul

Here I was standing at the shore, with that deep blue ocean in front of me

The depths of which were impossible to explore

Here I was standing, looking at the limitless skies

Heights of which were impossible to reach

How my heart knew, this is my path

Without the want of destination

Nowhere was the space for fear

And I drowned myself,

I raised my feet above the ground

letting go my worldly boundations,

The depth drowning me and the fall freeing me

The arms embracing me were the ones of life

A life that exists beyond survival and a life existing beyond death

Edited by stellaV - 8 years ago
tibs09 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vaishali ... what you written is deep ..
I will come back with my comments..bear with me
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

Vaishali ... what you written is deep ..
I will come back with my comments..bear with me

Gotcha babez ...😆
Hope ur doing good 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

Vaishali ... what you written is deep ..
I will come back with my comments..bear with me

Sure Tibs 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am coming with a Karela girls ...nothing serious but you need to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

I am coming with a Karela girls ...nothing serious but you need to read it

Me so happy that u came up with karela post ...well I felt it was like my eidi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-


Me so happy that u came up with karela post ...well I felt it was like my eidi😳


Aww you are my cutie pie

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