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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: stellaV

CHAPTER-3

It could
not have been more emotional. There conversation at the end made me cry. Her
struggle with her emotions, her memories is heart wrenching. Shaurya is
helpless, she is helpless. Oh my dear God how unfair life has been for them.
For Mehek there is no repentance for the sin of falling in love with a person who was responsible for her parents' death. No repentance for still not being able to hate him. His love is not her power anymore, but it is a stone tied to her feet which is making her drown in this sea of grief, she cannot breathe, but my dear you cannot die, and you cannot live😭
A marriage that they believed to be an end of all the sadness and negativity looming in their lives led to something more disastrous for both of them. It will break them, but should I say will build them again for better??😊I trust you on this Tibs
So, nani and Maasi are here. Nani seems to be hiding something. What it is?? Very intriguing indeed.
I know there is nothing new in it when I say I loved each and every word penned down by you, but still I am out of words to express the beauty of it😊

"What do you do when the one person you want comfort from the most is the one who caused your pain? How can I want so desperately for him to wrap me up in his arms but also want so much for him to leave me alone.
- Amanda Grace, But I love him

Vaishali ... they are broken .. totally completely ...
The way I see this relationship is it can only go up from here ... because this is the rock bottom
Now let us see who or what is the ladder 😉

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: stellaV
CHAPTER-4
So this had an element of romance😳I loved it, those moments snatched from the time. Beautiful.👏
I could imagine it word by word. And the effect was surreal. These are the only gestures left where both of them can express the unsaid emotions. These underlying feelings expressed through these moments are like a light through the haze of sorrow surrounding them.
KK cannot have been more useful. This online chat was the best thing that happened in their lives. It is like a mutual friend guiding both of them in difficult times.
I am glad we decided to share this poem with you as soon as we found it. No one could have used it better😊Lovely, beautiful...
Is the secret of KK getting revealed?? I am waiting desperately for the next part😃

I have tried to write something about the unsaid feelings of Shaurya. I don't know how it is, but consider it as my genuine attempt to praise your writings.

They say you can't
swim across the ocean, you can only drown in it 

Drown till the day
death is there to embrace you...

They say you cannot
reach the heights of limitless skies

You will fall if
you try..

Fearing the depths,
fearing the death I kept myself away from the shores

Fearing the heights
and fearing the fall I kept my feet on the ground

My soul lying
parched in the midst of a desert, but I was surviving

Surviving, being
oblivious to what a true life feels like

Until you came and
confronted my soul

Unleashing the
hidden desires, the awareness lying in my subconscious

I thought it of
being a mirage, 

But enchanted with the
feeling my heart still followed

I followed till the
day you turned back 
Turned back to lay your gaze on me

And I witnessed a
wonder, a wonder that was your eyes

The Clear blue limitless skies and the deep
blue ocean merging into one

Nothing beyond it I
could see, Nothing beyond it I wanted to see

My salvage, elixir
to my soul

Here I was standing
at the shore, with that deep blue ocean in front of me

The depths of which
were impossible to explore

Here I was standing, looking at the limitless skies
Heights of which were impossible to reach

How my heart knew,
this is my path

Without the want of
destination

Nowhere was the space for fear

And I drowned
myself,
I raised my feet
above the ground
letting go my worldly boundations,

The depth drowning
me and the fall freeing me
Thearms
embracing me were the ones of life

A life that exists
beyond survival and a life existing beyond death

Vaishali so I read this about 5 times
Your imagery of a soul bound , afraid to swim through or fly till it experience the love to free it , to empower it make it almost immortal , ready to take on whatever comes it way was beautiful
Shaurya is actually a character buredened by his past , his circumstances being a theorists , hungry soul for love ..
He is so afraid that he will probably resist being rescuing to , till like you say he looks into a pair of eyes to realise his own very existence

Very well written my friend 👏

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stellaV

@stellaV

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: tibs09

Vaishali so I read this about 5 times
Your imagery of a soul bound , afraid to swim through or fly till it experience the love to free it , to empower it make it almost immortal , ready to take on whatever comes it way was beautiful
Shaurya is actually a character buredened by his past , his circumstances being a theorists , hungry soul for love ..
He is so afraid that he will probably resist being rescuing to , till like you say he looks into a pair of eyes to realise his own very existence

Very well written my friend 👏

Your writings were the inspiration Tibs 😊 I couldn't have written it without reading your FF. You have helped me, giving the analogies which I just put in words. I always post quotes written by others, but this time I wanted to make an effort on my own. This is my way to show how beautifully you write, that you make us think beautifully too 😊 This is my honest response which is completely mine. And you praising it gives me the satisfaction that I was somewhere able to do justice in making it worthy to be here on your FF 😊