You Are My Heart Beat ...Two Shot On MehRya part 2 is updated on PG 4

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

beautifully written although I didn't understand some of the dialogues completely😆 but its okay I got the basics. One thing I have to say tho, why do I feel like this is gonna be the track for the next month or so? I swear you probably stole CVs idea 😆😆😆

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Sangana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Sham 👏👏👏 very nice stroy, i loved it ! Hope something like this will happen in our show too!

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sudha_
Wow yaar shams.. 😊
Dil khush Kar Dia.. ❤️
Very beautifully written..
Thank God shaurya finally realized that he loves her...and cannot live without her..
mehak stopped him frm going to London.. [:D/] all thanks to awara and Vicky..
Loved the confession part..hope that happens in serial too..fabulous ending dear 👏
Read all ur ff's and os..wonderfully written dear..
Plss come up with some new ff's..would love to read.. ❤️
Thanks fr the pm..
Lots of love and 🤗
Sudha.. ❤️

Awww that's so sweet of you sudha ...To read the old OS and FF's 🤗

Every one is waiting for the confession and I think it's the best time and track to show it...

There is always someone playing cupid for MehRya... Specially from Sharma family..This time decided to use Vicky and Aawara 😆

Sure if some good plot comes up in mind will definitely try to write it 😊

Thank a lot for the kind words sudha 🤗❤️

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.
beautifully written although I didn't understand some of the dialogues completely😆 but its okay I got the basics. One thing I have to say tho, why do I feel like this is gonna be the track for the next month or so? I swear you probably stole CVs idea 😆😆😆

May be it's kind of a connection with the serial In the past 6 months...We are able to read what they are capable to show us...But I think Chachi is gonna create more troubles for them...

They won't be back together so soon

But iam dying to see her back in Khanna house 😛

So sorry yaar I have to use that Hindi dilouges to give the Scene a real look ...😛

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Sangana
Sham 👏👏👏 very nice stroy, i loved it ! Hope something like this will happen in our show too!

Thank u sangu 🤗

Yeah even iam hoping so ..😳

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Pura padne ke baad he comment karungi😆
Please bear with me⭐️

Iam waiting

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lovetoread08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Iam waiting

Wait is over unres on page 9😊

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thilss

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Yeh Kya tha ???

Vrath

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
First of all Sham, I respect the creative way of expressing your love towards something in such a dramatic and filmy way.😆

Beginning was totally high on emotions, you set the mental state of Shaurya pertaining to the incident reasonably well. By witnessing the dreadful incident his quest to accept his feelings finally came to an end.True to his nature, he thought, he is capable to punish the dirty minds,but faith showed him the correct path in form of Vicky😛 Nice way to brought Vicky's character into light. He executed perfect full proof plan to make them one 😆 The confrontation scene was good. But you did not fulfilled my wish I demanded for a Steamy OS and you gave a Lollipop, not fair.

Last but not least

Also for fulfilling my crazy demand🤣 and make happen sooner😉

Lol...It's not creativity...It's side effects of watching too many serials 😆

I just wanted to keep the OS with emotions...And confession😛

Romance toh shaadi ke baad hoga 😉

Not to forget that she was just discharged form hospital...Steamy Romance Kahan se dikhaongi 🤣

BTw u asked me to write OS on current track ...

Tujhy steamy romance chahiye na...Read sanju's FF ...😆😆

Hum se na Hobe 😃

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lovetoread08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Lol...It's not creativity...It's side effects of watching too many serials 😆
I just wanted to keep the OS with emotions...And confession😛
Romance toh shaadi ke baad hoga 😉
Not to forget that she was just discharged form hospital...Steamy Romance Kahan se dikhaongi 🤣
BTw u asked me to write OS on current track ...

Tujhy steamy romance chahiye na...Read sanju's FF ...😆😆
Hum se na Hobe 😃

Maine Steamy romance he demand kiya tha(for confirmation check your PM) not on current track and fanfiction's are made only to explore your vivid imagination, You choose this plot just to stay away and preferred to show emotions and confessions🤣 (I remember Sunet's gif of Deepika Padukone which she uploaded in one of her post) aapke case mai romance shaadi ke baad he huva haina😉

Edited by lovetoread08 - 8 years ago

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