You Are My Heart Beat ...Two Shot On MehRya part 2 is updated on PG 4

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
After such a horrible episode this lifted my mood
Loved loved loved it
This Kanta will never change
Really hope Shaurya does not try to go away in the serial too

Nidhi that's the reason I wrote and lifted my mood already

I don't want to see kanta coming and accusing him...And saperating them again 😡

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Riddhima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Love you shammu...

What a fantastic update...happy ending...

Kaash hamare shaury ko bhi thodi akkal aa jaye...

Ufff kanta chahi...kehte hai na kuch cheze kabhi nahi badalti...Lovely story dill khush kar ditta...

Yehi ishq hai shayad...,

Tu mere kareeb nahi...fir bhi main tumse dur nahi...!!!

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Wow Sham kya ending thi fabulous. 👏

Even though she was in coma she heard him, Shaurya kept his words he didn't come to meet her as soon as she gained her conscious. But Awara & Vicky played Cupid here. 😉 because of them Mehek came to know Shaurya leaving for London. Our Khadoos finally confessed he can't live without her & missed her single day since she left him 😳 That kiss was much needed to assure himself he got her, barpayi jab tak poori tarah se uski na ho jaye. 😆

Thanks for PM & waiting more from you

Vinu

Vinu just pray we don't have to see anything such again in our show...I just wrote to give some piece of mind to myself 😛

I would love to see the confession at this stage ...It's too late now😉

Vicky and Aawara have turned to be cutie pie of ZKM now

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lovetoread08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

First of all Sham, I respect the creative way of expressing your love towards something in such a dramatic and filmy way.😆

Beginning was totally high on emotions, you set the mental state of Shaurya pertaining to the incident reasonably well. By witnessing the dreadful incident his quest to accept his feelings finally came to an end.True to his nature, he thought, he is capable to punish the dirty minds,but faith showed him the correct path in form of Vicky😛 Nice way to brought Vicky's character into light. He executed perfect full proof plan to make them one 😆 The confrontation scene was good. But you did not fulfilled my wish I demanded for a Steamy OS and you gave a Lollipop, not fair.

Last but not least

Also for fulfilling my crazy demand🤣 and make happen sooner😉

Edited by lovetoread08 - 8 years ago

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you Mystic 😊

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
Res

😡😡😡

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: KashishJ
Lovely , Cutie and Happy wala story
I loved "they lived happily ever after" of Mehrya.

Shams dearie , wonderful story.
Hoping against hope that something similar will happen in ZKM too

Hope so kashish...But we can have happy ending in FF's

Not so soon in serials...Else they have to end the serials 😆

Thank u for reading 🤗

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Sudha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Wow yaar shams.. 😊
Dil khush Kar Dia.. ❤️
Very beautifully written..
Thank God shaurya finally realized that he loves her...and cannot live without her..
mehak stopped him frm going to London.. [:D/] all thanks to awara and Vicky..
Loved the confession part..hope that happens in serial too..fabulous ending dear 👏
Read all ur ff's and os..wonderfully written dear..
Plss come up with some new ff's..would love to read.. ❤️
Thanks fr the pm..
Lots of love and 🤗
Sudha.. ❤️

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Love you shammu...
What a fantastic update...happy ending...
Kaash hamare shaury ko bhi thodi akkal aa jaye...
Ufff kanta chahi...kehte hai na kuch cheze kabhi nahi badalti...Lovely story dill khush kar ditta...

Yehi ishq hai shayad...,
Tu mere kareeb nahi...fir bhi main tumse dur nahi...!!!