You Are My Heart Beat ...Two Shot On MehRya part 2 is updated on PG 4 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Mayajac

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Unres😊

Dii😭😭

Painful to see mehrya like dat😭😭

Thank God the couple helped them reach the hospital..

Mahek's question- y is her life important more than his? Made me 😭😭

Shaurya crying me too crying cudnt see him like dat😭

Signing the form as her husband nd admitting her as Mrs Mahek Shaurya khanna😳

Emotional chapter..Scripted well di👏

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

It's an emotional track...I wish we could have seen that hospital Scene...Par Chalo gurdwara bhi chalega...What I want is SK taking care of her 😛

Thank u my cutie...🤗

Originally posted by: Mayajac

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Poor Shaurya unable to control his emotions, holds Doc's collar..hw bad he must b feeling 😭

Shaurya asking karuna to pray fa Mahek 😭

Kanta chachi😡

Shaurya's Confession nd mahek's tear😭😭 very emotional di😭

Shaurya going to UK😲..Vicky nd awara r sweetie pies😉😆

Mahek nd Shaurya conversation in their room😳 their kiss😳

Mr Shaurya khanna and Mrs Mahek Shaurya Khanna😳

Mahek's khoon Bari maang dialogue😆😆

Di jus now read an article which s similar to ur FF..Hope V get to see ur FF in reality😃😳

Thanq fa the pm for both the chapters😃🤗

Beautifully written di..👏

Originally posted by: Mayajac

Di edited my comments for both the chalters in page 4😳

Come up with one more FF soon 😊

I wan FF not os ts nd ss😉

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Tabu . .🥺

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

U know I like writing their nokjhok dilouges...😆😆

I wanted to add a scene in ICU SK filling her maang again in anger when kanta asked kis haq se u want to stay here🤣

Phir socha rehny doon ...Kuch zyada hi filmi hojygaa 😆😆😆

Chinnu was talking about another one shot...Where they gets saperate for 6 months ...😆

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

FF will be a big responsibility...Have to give atleast 5 hours to come up with a chapter...😆

I thought I will write some short stories when ever get any idea...And use the time in making some activities in the forum 😛

Originally posted by: Parud7

Hii sham di I m sorry I should comment on time bt I was not feeling well...sorry

U make my wish true by writing an os muaahhh 😛

One thing I want to say di that u used current track effectively in a useful way as compare to CVs. If this happens all fans clapped for CVS..but drama shayd baaki hai

But u wrote very well. And the last para to romance chlkaaa jaara tha...haha 😛

Please write more ff and oses l love ur writing

Again clapping for 👏